Avis sur Rejected Omega, The Alpha's Regret

I have to say this is one of my favorite stories.

I tried to keep reading but the story lines keep changing too much, time moves with no way of knowing how long….

Story details keep changing, timeline moves with no indication that it is moving…., I’m done.

Should look into proper editing. Story and dialogue are so rushed it’s incoherent.

Poorly written and unable to understand. clearly English is not this writers primary language.

I would never understand books like this…both moved on so why going back together in the end? what for? story like this are made for kids

I was not able to get through the first three sentences. I’m not finishing this book; I’m stopping here..