LOGINMorning brought the southern delegation’s arrival exactly on schedule, and Bonita watched from the council hall’s upper window as they approached — a dozen figures on horseback, dressed in unfamiliar colors, moving with the disciplined formation of genuine diplomatic escort. “Something’s wrong with them,” Amira said quietly, standing beside her, her earlier certainty from the previous evening sharpening now into something more immediate. “Mama, look at how they move. All of them, exactly the same rhythm, like they’re not truly individual people at all.” Bonita studied the approaching riders more carefully, and the wrongness became visible the longer she watched — too synchronized, too uniform, each horse stepping in the same precise cadence as though following a single, shared will rather than a dozen separate riders’ individual judgment. “Kael,” she called, urgency sharpening her voice. He arrived immediately, taking in the scene with quickly dawning alarm. “Corin,” he called tow
They arrived at Blackthorn three days later, the journey tense and largely silent, every member of the traveling party carrying the particular alertness that came from anticipating danger without knowing precisely its shape. Mira met them at the settlement’s edge, and Bonita felt immediate, complicated relief at the sight of her — exactly as she remembered, poised and confident, nothing outwardly amiss in her bearing or expression. “You brought Kaden,” Mira observed, her eyes moving to her younger brother with something that might have been surprise, though nothing more alarming registered in her carefully composed expression. “My letter specified—” “We read your letter,” Bonita said carefully, watching her daughter’s reaction closely for any sign of the compromised judgment they feared. “We decided the diplomatic ceremony didn’t require separating them, given our ongoing concerns.” Something flickered across Mira’s face — not quite anger, but a kind of frustrated confusion that s
The letter arrived three weeks later, carrying Blackthorn’s official seal, and Bonita felt immediate unease the moment she recognized the formal, ceremonial language Mira rarely used in ordinary correspondence between them. Mother — I’m writing formally rather than personally because this concerns territory business requiring your official presence as former regent, alongside broader diplomatic significance I believe warrants full family attendance. Blackthorn’s council has proposed a formal alliance ceremony with the southern territories, solidifying trade and mutual defense agreements I’ve spent the past two years carefully negotiating. The ceremony requires witnesses from allied bloodlines — specifically, given the significance of Amira’s status as a Sundering child, her presence would carry considerable diplomatic weight in demonstrating the depth of our combined strength to potential rivals still watching Blackthorn’s stability with lingering skepticism. I understand the concer
The household shifted immediately into heightened alert, years of careful, methodical preparation now facing the sudden urgency of confirmed, imminent threat rather than distant theoretical possibility. Kael called the council together within the hour, the same chamber that had witnessed countless crises over the decades now filled once more with the particular tension of impending confrontation. “Tell us everything,” Kael said to Amira, now fifteen and carrying herself with considerably more composure than her earlier frightened report had suggested, though the underlying fear remained evident beneath her controlled exterior. “It’s difficult to translate into specific detail,” Amira admitted. “But the shift is unmistakable. For years, what I’ve sensed has carried the quality of testing, refining, careful calculation. Now it feels different. Settled. Like a plan finally decided upon, rather than still being developed.” Corin, considerably grayer now after years of dedicated study,
The months following Corin’s revelations brought a new, deliberate purpose to the household’s preparation, both Amira and Kaden now training with fuller understanding of exactly what their respective gifts might eventually require of them. Amira’s foresight continued developing steadily under Ilsa’s careful guidance, the older woman having spent years now helping her interpret and refine impressions that had once arrived only as vague, unsettling sensations. By her fourteenth year, Amira could often distinguish between different types of danger with remarkable precision — the difference between ordinary mortal threat and something touched by the Hollow’s particular ancient wrongness, the difference between immediate danger and distant, developing possibility. “It’s clearer now,” she told Bonita one evening, nearly a year after the initial testing sessions had begun. “I can almost see shapes sometimes, in the impressions. Not literal visions, exactly. More like… understanding the gen
Corin’s testing began the following week, careful and methodical, designed to help Kaden recognize and perhaps deliberately access whatever inherent resistance he carried against the Hollow’s particular methods of influence. “We’ll start simply,” Corin explained, the small group gathered in the study that had become, over the years, something like a permanent laboratory for understanding the mysteries surrounding both children’s abilities. “Ilsa will describe scenarios designed to provoke doubt or despair — nothing genuinely traumatic, simply constructed situations meant to test whether such feelings take hold in you the way they typically would in anyone else.” “Like a game,” Kaden said, though his tone suggested he understood the serious purpose beneath the simple framing. “Something like that,” Ilsa confirmed, settling across from him with a small collection of notes. “I’ll describe a situation. Simply tell me honestly how it makes you feel, without trying to perform any particu







