I love the story line and the character development. It’s a very enticing read, I’m curious as to how it ends. If you’re ever looking for help editing I would love to chip in!
2023-01-09 23:38:05
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Molay
good read so far
2022-09-30 10:34:18
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Terry Spain Stephens
Such a wonderful story. Thank you for being such a great storyteller.
2023-02-27 01:33:32
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Joan Vittorelli
I am loving this book. I just hope it will not be a book I start and have to stop because it drags on into the 3 to 400 episode books. if you want to continue writing about the other characters, (please) start another book/sequel .. thank you
2023-01-14 08:31:54
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Terry Spain Stephens
This beautiful story is fun to read th kids are perfect and funny. Love that they are main characters. In the story. Just love the kids. Hope they get to stay active throughout the story. to the end.
2022-12-24 15:30:09
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Terry Spain Stephens
This is such a good story. Can’t wait to read more.