LOGINAnother knock echoed through Room 1313. Winona glanced automatically toward the digital clock beside the bed.
11:32 P.M.
Not midnight yet, so technically this should have been fine. She walked toward the door carefully before opening it halfway.
A woman stood across from her holding a phone against her chest like she had been debating whether to knock for the last ten minutes. She looked around Winona’s age with long dark curls, glossy lips, and sharp eyes hidden behind round glasses.
Also unfairly pretty.
“Oh my God,” the woman blurted immediately. “You’re way prettier in real life.”
Winona blinked. The stranger looked horrified at herself. “Sorry. That sounded creepy.”
“A little,” Winona admitted.
“I’m Iris.” The woman pointed awkwardly toward the room opposite hers. “I’m staying across from you.”
“Winona.”
“I know,” Iris replied too quickly before wincing. “That also sounded creepy.”
Winona laughed despite herself.
“I swear I’m normal,” Iris rushed out. “Well, mostly normal. I have a paranormal podcast and I actually covered one of your horror stories last year. The train station one? It went kind of viral.”
Winona stared in surprise. “Wait, seriously?”
Iris nodded rapidly. “I loved it. Your stories always feel real somehow.”
Thunder exploded outside hard enough to shake the windows.
Iris jumped violently and instinctively grabbed Winona’s arms.
“Oh my God, I hate storms.”
For one awkward second, they stood ridiculously close together.
Winona wasn’t into women, but Iris smelled faintly like vanilla perfume, her curls brushed against Winona’s shoulder, and honestly, this woman was beautiful enough to make anybody temporarily question their life choices.
Iris seemed to realize the position a second later and nearly launched herself backward in embarrassment.
“Sorry,” she said quickly while pushing her glasses up nervously.
Winona cleared her throat. “You literally host a paranormal podcast but thunder scares you?”
“Ghosts are fine. Nature is where I draw the line.”
Somehow the tension in the room eased instantly.
Then Iris’s expression shifted slightly. “You should probably lock your door tonight though.”
Winona frowned. “You believe those weird messages too?”
“I think rich people with mystery themes are terrifying,” Iris replied honestly. “And this hotel feels… off.”
Another loud thunderclap echoed outside. Iris visibly flinched again before giving Winona an embarrassed smile.
“Anyway. Sorry for bothering you. I just wanted to introduce myself before somebody dies dramatically tomorrow for ratings.”
“That’s a concerning sentence.”
“Goodnight, Winona.”
“Goodnight, Iris.”
The woman hurried back across the hallway into her room while trying very hard not to look embarrassed. Winona closed the door smiling slightly to herself.
"At least not everybody in this place is insane."
Her phone buzzed.
AVA:
OMG bestie, we should totally sneak out after midnight and record the hallway!WINONA:
absolutely notAVA:
boring :(WINONA:
I wanna stay alive.AVA:
same thing honestly, but come onnn!Winona rolled her eyes before tossing the phone onto the bed.
Outside, rain hammered violently against the windows while the hotel lights dimmed slightly for a brief second before stabilizing again.
Then the digital clock shifted.
11:59 P.M.
A strange tension settled through the room. The silence felt heavier now, like the entire hotel was waiting.
12:00 A.M.
The lights flickered once. A knock echoed through the hallway, three slow taps.
Winona froze.
Another knock followed immediately after, closer and louder this time.
She remembered Adrian’s voice quietly warning her not to answer the door no matter what happened so she stayed still.
The knocking continued somewhere farther down the hallway.
Then suddenly, a door opened.
For one second, silence filled the hotel.
Then a woman screamed.
The final chime echoed through the hotel long after the grandfather clock should have fallen silent. Winona instinctively checked her phone.3:07 PM.The clock had just struck midnight and now it's 3 PM.Liam slowly closed the staff log, but none of them took their eyes off it. The entries felt too detailed to be fabricated for a reality show, and the scratched-out photograph lying beside the book only made the mystery heavier.Adrian finally broke the silence. "If this journal is real, somebody has been documenting these loops for years.""And they knew there were ten of us," Winona replied. "Not nine."Liam nodded. "The strange part isn't that there's a missing guest. It's that whoever wrote this expected all ten people to arrive."A cold electronic chime interrupted them as every television in the hallway switched on at once. The smiling host appeared again, but this time the cheerful expression looked forced.[Contestants, your investigation has exceeded today's expectations. As a
Winona stared at the photograph for several long seconds before looking at the date again.October 18, 2017.The picture had clearly been taken a year after the one shown in the dining hall. Adrian stood near the reception desk. Ava was laughing with Monica. Liam appeared to be arguing with someone in the background. Every contestant was present.Except her."That's not possible," she said quietly.Adrian stepped closer to examine the frame. Unlike the previous photograph, this one didn't look edited. There were no strange distortions, missing shadows, or blurred edges. It simply looked like a normal picture taken during a normal day."You were definitely in the first one," he said."And now I'm gone."Winona reached for the frame and noticed something unusual. A folded piece of paper had been wedged behind it. It was hidden well enough that nobody would have seen it unless the photograph had been tilted."Wait."She carefully pulled it. The paper looked old and yellowed around the ed
Th room was silent for several seconds.Every contestant was staring at the television screen, where the photograph remained frozen in place. The image itself had not changed, but Adrian's face was gone. "Okay," Ava said carefully, "I would like to formally announce that I hate this place.""Seconded," Monica replied.Liam had already moved closer to the screen. His eyes darted across the photograph as if he expected the answer to reveal itself if he stared hard enough."That's impossible," he said quietly."Which part?" Julian asked."The part where a photograph changes in real time."Moira folded her arms. "We've already accepted ghosts, murder games, and possible time loops. Let's not draw the line at Photoshop."Adrian remained standing beside the table, looking more unsettled than Winona had ever seen him. Until now, he had always seemed one step ahead of everyone else. Even when he admitted he didn't remember something, there had been a sense that he understood more than the re
Winona woke up feeling far more rested than she should have after spending the previous day discovering a corpse, surviving a fire, and kissing a man who claimed to remember alternate timelines.For a few blissful seconds she lay in bed staring at the ceiling, pretending she was in a normal hotel on a normal writing retreat. Then reality returned and ruined everything.Her phone buzzed on the nightstand.AVA: Breakfast. Now. If this hotel plans to traumatize us again today, I'd like to experience it with pancakes.Winona snorted and climbed out of bed.The dining hall was already crowded when she arrived. Ava had collected enough food to feed a small village, Monica was taking photographs of her breakfast from several artistic angles, and Julian was attempting to charm a waitress who looked seconds away from reporting him to management.Near the windows, Moira and Liam were discussing theories over coffee while Iris listened quietly. Adrian sat alone at a nearby table, and the moment
The moment the suite door unlocked, Ava rushed into the hallway coughing dramatically. “I am officially retiring from mystery solving. Rich people can die without me from now on.”Despite everything, Winona laughed. The sound surprised even her. Maybe because laughing felt strange after seeing a dead body hidden inside a wardrobe.Liam walked beside them quietly while still deep in thought. “Daniel definitely knew something before he died. That note wasn’t random.”“Nothing in this hotel is random,” Adrian said.When they returned downstairs, the others immediately noticed something was wrong.Moira stood first. “You found him.”It was not a question. Winona nodded slowly. “Daniel’s dead.”The room fell silent after that. Even Julian stopped making jokes.The television screen above the bar flickered alive one final time.[ROUND TWO COMPLETED.]Nobody reacted.[Contestants may now rest until tomorrow morning.]Then the screen shut off. Just like that. No creepy countdowns, no punishme
The flames spread across the suite unnaturally fast. Smoke curled across the ceiling while burning papers drifted through the air, and the heat inside the room kept rising every second.Ava stared at the television in disbelief. “Survive what exactly?! The fire or the challenge?”Liam looked toward the locked door sharply. “What if the hotel got angry because we were close to finding Daniel?”Nobody answered immediately, but the idea made sense.Liam continued quickly, “Think about it. We searched classified files, and suddenly we get trapped inside the room. What if Daniel’s body is nearby? What if we already found the truth without realizing it?”Adrian frowned while staring at the flames climbing the curtains. “I definitely don’t remember this part happening before.”“So the loop changed,” Winona said instantly.The timer on the screen continued counting down.04:28Winona forced herself to focus. “Okay. We panic later! Right now we need to put this fire out.”Ava looked horrified.
The scream cut off so suddenly that the silence afterward felt worse.Winona sat frozen on the edge of her bed while rain slammed violently against the windows outside. Somewhere down the hallway, footsteps pounded across the carpet followed by distant shouting.Nobody else opened their door, not e
The hallway outside Room 1313 was far too quiet.Winona stood beside Ava while hotel staff moved elegantly through the corridor delivering luggage to different rooms. Soft golden lights glowed overhead, expensive paintings lined the walls, and everything looked perfectly luxurious.Which somehow ma
Winona watched the man disappear into the crowd before finally turning back to Ava.“Why do you look like you just saw a Greek God in a designer suit?” Ava whispered immediately.“I don’t.”“You absolutely do.”Winona grabbed the champagne glass and took a large sip. “He was just weird.”“Weird att
“Oh my god... You are seriously going to this thing?”Winona zipped up her suitcase while Ava paced around the apartment holding a makeup brush like a microphone. “A mysterious luxury reality show personally invites two struggling women right after one gets cheated on. Either this is fate or we’re







