The story is easy to read and i think the plot is intriguing, what caught my attention is the first chap! Added to my library already🥰
2021-02-02 00:13:52
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ugoo junior
wow!!
Your work is nice.. The first few chapters are okay
2021-02-02 00:03:21
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ugoo junior
wow!!
Your work is nice.. The first few chapters are okay
2021-02-02 00:03:20
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Vainjessel
RECOMMENDED
2020-11-05 00:21:39
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PalabayNi Vines
Recommended !
2020-10-03 07:55:14
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SATOU, D.
I scanned the chapters from 1-27. You're story was good. Triah the main character of the story is made up to become a strong. I gave it 10 for intriguing story and character developments. Hopefully this novel might win.
2020-09-06 01:07:02
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Pixie Auri
I think the title is spot on, and the story is truly not ordinary. But I found the flow a bit confusing, some words were repeated and compromised the reading. You are doing a nice job, you can do great with a little editing.