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YOUTHFUL MISTAKE THANKS
So here we are at the end of this volume 1, it was not at all easy to write more than sixty thousand words in less than a month but we got there anyway and it's partly thanks to you, Writing an online story can seem easy and exciting when you have great readers reading it.So why the title?The title is for me an auspicious title that sums up the whole story, Physio and Sophia were fooled by youth, by fashion, by their beauty, they crunched the pleasures of life without thinking about their future, their story is a perfect version of what many young girls experience, through this title I wanted to show that many girls are fooled by youth, it is a very important moment in the life of a person who may have reflected in our present and our future, we really have to live it consciously and in moderation otherwise regrets will take place in the present or the future.How do you choose character names?I take the names of the characters according to my entourage, in general I take the na
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE first
Fooled, yes life fooled me, my youth destroyed me, my name is Kiné Diop and I'm the laughing stock of the whole neighborhood, I don't leave my house anymore, I'm locked in my room all the time curled up on myself. My life looks like an empty carcass, the idea of suicide sometimes touches my mind but I think of the being who lives in my belly, and yes I am two months pregnant but for the moment nobody does it knows.Me physio Diop, I'm the most disgusting girl in the whole neighborhood, my name is on everyone's lips, my naked photos are on all the phones, my life took a big turn the day this man put me on her bed.FLASHBACK (return to the past)It was past 11 p.m., Kiné Diop as usual was in a nightclub in Place aux Almadies (an upscale district of Dakar in Senegal), on her left hand was a bottle of beer, she was drunk to the toes, she couldn't even stand properly, on the dance floor, she was dancing and a young man was rubbing against her bottom, she was singing loudly, dancing
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Two
Kiné Diop opened her eyes little by little in the bathtub, she had an excruciating headache.- Where am I? Ah my head..... she said holding her headShe was trying to get up but she fell, her lower abdomen hurt very badly.-What's happening to me? Why can't I get on my feet, she puts her hand on her intimacy and the blood spurts outShe had realized that she had just lost the most precious thing in her house: Her virginity, she had just broken her promise, she wanted to keep it, yes she wanted to keep it for the man who deserved it but also because that she knows that it is a requirement within her family that the girl be a virgin once married, she had just realized that she will bring dishonor within her family, she will bring shame to her mother, to his father.-NoooooooooooooooooooooooooShe was screaming with all her might despite the pain, she felt dirty, she felt repulsive, she couldn't imagine losing her virginity in such a situation, even less with Abdou, this man who slept
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Three
How can we photograph a person in addition to a woman in such indecent positions, consider women as our mothers and our own sisters, treat them as we treat our mother and our own sister.Women deserve to be protected, respected no matter what they do, they are the basis of any society.It is thanks to women that we hear the word dad coming from the mouth of a child towards us, women risk their lives to realize our dreams of being a dad, the man cannot give change to the woman.The pains of childbirth are excruciating and the woman finds herself between life and death to be able to give life, this gift that the woman gives to the man of being a dad is priceless, this gift is priceless.The woman deserves to be raised to the rank of queen, she deserves to be in good conditions.Kiné did not believe her eyes or her ears, she said to herself in her head that she was dreaming.- No I'm dreaming, it can't be real..... she said shaking her head- Think again my dear, it is indeed the realit
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourth
Abdou didn't know what to do, he was worried, distraught, he thought that Kiné was dead.-I KILLED OTHERS' DAUGHTERAgain he goes out to wake Abdou, he gives him a good slap to wake him up quickly, the latter jumps.-Why are you wild, since when are you there.... he said surprised-There is a problem my guy, get up quickly, I made a big mistake, we are going to prison-Hey, slowly, calm down and talk to me, what's going on?-Physio- What a physio!-She is deadThis phrase buzzed in Abdou's ears like the sound of bees in the hive, he couldn't believe his eyes.- Asshole, what did you do to him?-I just wanted to have a good time with her, when I entered her she became unconscious.-Doudou you always get me in trouble, the head is used to think anyway, how many times should I tell you to advise me before doing anything, I promised you to do without Physio but not for the moment, you're just stupid, is she really dead? have you checked her pulse?-No, I did not check it, she was no lon
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Five
It sometimes happens in life that a person, whether it is our parent or the person who exercises paternal power over us, calls us to account.It happens that a person rebels, do not we say that in life it is the person who loves you who tells you the truth, it is proven, yes who loves well punishes well.When we love someone, let's try to tell them the truth when they go wrong, let's try to put them back on the right track because they are no longer in the right direction.Kiné's mother was in this situation with her daughter, she is one of her mothers who always gives in to her daughter's whims, everything her daughter does she likes, she shouts on all the walls that Kiné is her favorite daughter but is this the case, does she chastise her daughter when she does something stupid, no she has never done it.She knows in soul and in conscience that her daughter goes to a club every night to party but she prefers to keep quiet about it despite knowing the opinion that in Senegalese soci
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE six
No child on earth would want to disappoint their parents who have done so much for them.No child would want to dishonor his own parents.Life is made up of ups and downs, it is unpredictable, sometimes we want to have one thing but God gives us the opposite, what should we do in this case? misfortune try to get up, the fall is not fatal it is rather to stay in the same place which is fatal, let us live our hard times with philosophy while bearing in mind that one day we were happy, happiness cannot not last forever just as misfortune cannot last forever, the importance is to live any situation with philosophy and to rely on the lord.Physiotherapist did not know what to answer when faced with his mother's unpredictable question, should she tell him the truth, tell him that she is no longer a virgin, how would his mother react? Is this the right time? moreover Muslim would not want to hear this sentence coming from the mouth of her daughter before marriage "MOM I AM NOT A ViRGIN"-
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-NoooooooooooooooooooooooooooPhysio had just shouted very loudly even jumping after a nightmare, she was so sweaty, her cry had even alerted her little sister Khady who was sleeping next door.- Physio, are you okay? Calm down, it was just a nightmare..... she said taking her in her arms.Physio was still breathing deeply, it was one of the worst nightmares she had had since birth.-It's over, calm down, it was just a nightmare- I'm scared Khady, I'm scared, my life is going to be ruined- It's not physical reality, it's a nightmare, nothing moreKiné knew what she was talking about but Khady no, she came to her senses little by little.- Try to go back to sleep khady and thank you-Are you sure you're fine, I can keep you company you know-Don't worry, it was just a nightmare, it's over-Ok cool then..... she said turning her back on him and went back to bed."Oh my God don't let this nightmare come true I beg you, soutoural ma yalla sunu borom, this video must not go viral under a
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