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CHAPTER 22 — THE SHAPE OF THE STORY

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By midnight, the publication document was complete.

Not complete in the way things are complete when you run out of material — complete in the way things are complete when every element has been placed correctly and the structure holds its own weight. Elian sat back from the desk with the expression of someone who has finished something real and is allowing themselves thirty seconds to acknowledge it before moving on.

"That's it," he said.

Marta read the final section on screen, then the one be
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