SloaneDara drafted three versions of the decline.She sent them to me at seven the next morning with a note that said first one is too warm, second one is too cold, third one is the one but read all three and tell me I am wrong.She was not wrong.The third version was exactly right. Professional. Warm enough to leave the door open. Specific enough about the capacity constraints to be believable. Vague enough about the timeline to give us flexibility.I read all three anyway because that was what Dara expected and she was right to expect it.Then I called her."Third one," I said."Obviously," she said."Change the second paragraph. Third sentence. The word currently implies we have evaluated capacity which implies we looked at the case more carefully than we are admitting to."A pause."You are right," she said. The tone of someone who had missed something and was not going to make a production of having missed it. "Give me ten minutes."She sent the revised version in eight.I read
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