CHAPTER 21: The Lake — Part One

Dani had described it as a picnic.Noah had said yes to a picnic because a picnic was a specific and innocent thing and he had known Dani long enough to know when she was being specific and innocent and when she was constructing something and on this occasion he had chosen not to examine the question too carefully. The weather window was real — Saturday morning had come in clear and cold and brilliant, the kind of October day the Pacific Northwest withheld for weeks and then produced without warning, the sky the particular blue that required the grey to make you appreciate it.He drove to the lake with a thermos and the jacket Dani had told him to bring and arrived at the north shore access point at nine in the morning to find Dani's car in the lot and, beside it, a vehicle he recognized.He sat in his truck for a moment.Then he got out.Dani was on the bank with a blanket spread and a basket that had the ambition of a woman who had planned this in advance. She was also wearing the e

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CHAPTER 22: The Lake — Part Two

Dani left at ten forty-five.She came back from her non-call with the expression of a woman at peace with her decisions, repacked the basket with the efficiency of someone who had staged this exit, said "I forgot I have a thing," kissed Noah on the cheek, told Eli it was good to see him in the tone of someone who meant something additional by it, and walked to her car.They heard her drive away."She's not subtle," Eli said."She's never claimed to be." Noah poured the last of his thermos. "She'd say subtlety is for people who aren't sure they're right.""Is she right?"Noah looked at the lake. A heron had arrived at the far shore — standing in the shallows with the absolute stillness of something that had decided this was where it was going to be."Usually," he said.They sat with the lake and the heron and the October morning and the particular silence of two people who have run out of topics that are easier than the real one.Eli spoke first. "I want to tell you something."Noah wa

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CHAPTER 23: Almost

Two separate bedrooms. Two separate ceilings. The same thought, running in two different minds on the same Saturday night.Eli, motel room, eleven-fifteen pm:He was looking at the ceiling and not sleeping and thinking about the lake and the apples and the way Noah had said tell me. Not ask me, not when you feel like it. Tell me. The imperative of it. The specific form of trust that was embedded in it — the assumption that there was a telling forthcoming, that it was real, that Noah was prepared to receive it.He had spent ten years protecting Noah from the full account of his own cowardice and he understood now, lying in the motel room with the ice machine doing its thing down the walkway, that this was not protection. It had been, like most things he'd constructed in the name of protection, a structure around himself.Noah had asked to be told. Noah was not afraid of the full account.Maybe Eli was the one who'd been afraid of telling it.He turned onto his side.The thing he kept r

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CHAPTER 24: The Storm Warning

The forecast arrived on Monday morning in the way that serious Pacific Northwest forecasts arrived — not with drama but with the particular bureaucratic certainty of a weather service that had been watching a system develop for four days and had run out of diplomatic language for what it was going to do.WIND ADVISORY IN EFFECT TUESDAY 6PM THROUGH WEDNESDAY 6AM. SUSTAINED WINDS 35-45 MPH WITH GUSTS TO 60 MPH. RAINFALL TOTALS OF 2-4 INCHES EXPECTED. FLOODING POSSIBLE IN LOW-LYING AREAS AND ALONG DRAINAGEWAYS.Noah read it at six-fifteen, standing in his kitchen with his first coffee, and immediately started making a list.The Harlow's new standing-seam roof was solid — Pat's crew's work, properly fastened, not a concern. But the temporary protection they'd left over the section of the rear porch that was still being reconstructed was a different calculation. The plastic sheeting and the strapping were adequate for normal rain. They were not engineered for sixty-mile-per-hour gusts.He

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All Chapters of The Space Between Pines: Chapter 21 - Chapter 24

CHAPTER 21: The Lake — Part One

CHAPTER 22: The Lake — Part Two

CHAPTER 23: Almost

CHAPTER 24: The Storm Warning