What Are Common Mistakes On The First Page In A Book For New Writers?

She looked at her with contempt, her red heels clicking on the ground. A sinister smile is plastered on her face full of malice. "Whatever you do, he's mine. Even if you go back in time, he's always be mine." Then the man beside the woman with red heels, snaked his hands on her waist. "You'll never be my partner. You're a trash!" The pair walked out of that dark alley and left her coughing blood. At the last seconds of her life, her lifeless eyes closed. *** Jade angrily looked at the last page of the book. She believed that everyone deserves to be happy. She heard her mother calling for her to eat but reading is her first priority. And so, until she felt dizzy reading, she fell asleep. *** Words she can't comprehend rang in her ears. She's now the 'Heather' in the book. [No, I won't change the story. I'll just watch on the sidelines.] This is what she believed not until... "Stop slandering Heather unless you want to lose your necks." That was the beginning of her new life as a character. Cover Illustration: JEIJANDEE (follow her on IG with the same username) Release Schedule: Every Saturday NOTE: This work is undergoing major editing (grammar and stuffs) and hopefully will be finished this month, so expect changes. Thank you~!

This story is about the downfall and the rise of a family. If you are looking for a good family drama with a happy ending, this is the book for you. Note: This isn't a romance story. ******* Mr Williams is a very popular pastor in New York City, but his biggest mistakes, is that he always wants to control the life of his family. But not everyone would love to be controlled... Alicia Williams is just as stubborn as her father, she disowned her father due to her hatred for him, and also left his house. She's lucky enough to meet Eric Davis, but little did she know that Eric is much more worse than her father. He is the devil!. Anna williams isn't anything like her sister Alicia. She's more like the obedient child. She does whatever her father orders her to do, abd that lands her in a very abusive relationship. Calrk Williams the unloved son of Mr Williams, wanted nothing but to be loved by his father. In his search for love, he met Ray a married man. Ray didn't only made Clark feel loved but also turned him into a gay. Austin Williams only dream is to be an artist, but his father Mr Williams ordered him to be a doctor instead. Now he has a void inside of him, and the only way he could fill that void was by taking drugs(cocaine). Martha Williams, wife of Mr Williams. Could not do anything to help her kids from their downfall, why? Because she had a secret, a secret she couldn't let out in the open, a secret that her dear husband used in blackmailing and controlling her. *Is okay to make a mistakes, but it's not okay when you don't learn from it️

The war between Werewolves and Fairies is beginning. Lives are being lost on both sides, and King Octavius Bishop is up to his neck in blood. When it seems as if all hope for Octavius's humanity is lost, his mother sends him a gift. A gift in the form of his long-awaited mate. But will Octavius see his mate as a gift or as a burden? Will her unwavering love be enough to keep him from turning into the evil he is fighting? Or will Octavius reject and crush his only hope for redemption?

Esme was compelled to marry Jasper by her parents. It had been two years. Her husband never paid attention to her as he should give to her as his wife. He was a good person but a worse husband. She knew. He was seeing someone. She never tried to find it out. Her parents died. So she was trying to fulfill her parents' last wish. Livia! Her best friend, one day forced her to go to the club with her. There she met him, Carlos King. He stole her innocence, her heart……. That night, she cheated on her husband. Esme was a good woman, trapped in an unwanted marriage. To escape, the daily torture of her husband negligence. She shouldn't have spent the most passionate night with a stranger in the club. But she wasn't ashamed of cheating on her husband.

Hidden Mistakes is a heartwarming tale of love, trust, and forgiveness. Mia, a successful businesswoman, had her heart shattered by her fiancé, David, who secretly married someone else. After discovering she was pregnant with David's child, Mia was forced to make a difficult decision. Later, she finds love with her business associate, Derek, and becomes pregnant again, but keeps her secret hidden. Years later, Mia and Derek reconnect and feel an intense attraction to each other. But Mia's hidden mistakes threaten to destroy their newfound love. When Derek discovers the truth, he feels betrayed and struggles to come to terms with his newfound fatherhood. Mia must navigate her own feelings of guilt and shame for keeping the secret. As their relationship blossoms, Derek proves his love and commitment to Mia and their daughter. But Mia is hesitant, unsure if she can trust Derek to be a committed father and partner. Meanwhile, David and Mia's co-parenting relationship becomes strained due to their unresolved past. Despite the challenges they faced, Derek proves his love and commitment to Mia and their daughter, and they start a new life together, raising their child as a family. But secrets have a way of coming out, and Mia's past mistakes threaten to ruin everything. Will they find forgiveness and second chances? Find out in Hidden Mistakes

Between his high life and his unwanted marriage, Hunter is more than happy to let his wife home, ignore her, mistreated her, and cheat on her with hundred of women because he thinks he is better than any other person. But when Crystal is throwing the divorce papers in his face and she disappears from his mansion and his life, Hunter realizes that he did a huge mistake. What was the big mistake he did? He realizes he fell in love with his now ex-wife. He fell in love with her beauty, kindness and her patience. But maybe will be too late for this billionaire to gain the trust back of Crystal. Or maybe kind-hearted Crystal will give a second chance to her ex-billionaire-husband? But the most important will be they are able to pass all the obstacles coming now from life itself. They will fight with each other, gain new friends and enemies and the danger will be something they can't ignore but bring them together and closer every single day until they will end up happy ever after or their ways will split forever.