Forest Isle
Hallie Shaw lived her life judging everyone with a rigid scorecard.
When we were dating, she used to say that any person or event scoring below ninety points wasn't worth a second of her time.
After marriage, every single thing I did was evaluated.
On our wedding anniversary, I prepared a full spread of her favorite dishes. She took one bite and said, "Eighty-nine points."
Then she set down her utensils and left to share a meal with Miles, who allegedly had a poor appetite.
For the company's anniversary party, I tried on twenty-seven suits, only for her to glance at me and say, "Eighty-eight points. Not suitable to bring along."
That very night, she walked into the celebration with Miles, who was wearing nothing more than a simple white shirt.
To earn that perfect score, I quit my dream job, earned seven professional certifications, and learned four foreign languages. Yet no matter how hard I tried, my score remained forever stuck at eighty-nine.
Meanwhile, Miles didn't have to lift a finger. Just by standing there, he was automatically a perfect hundred.
I asked her once, "What does it actually take to get a ninety?"
She glanced over at Miles and offered no answer.
In that moment, a sudden, bitter laugh escaped my lips. Her scoring criteria had only ever had one rule from start to finish, and it wasn't me.
I pulled off my wedding ring and dropped it straight into the wine glass in front of her.
"Hallie, this time, I'm the one giving out the scores. Your loyalty: zero points. Your marriage: zero points. And as a person, you fail."