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Chapter 54 – What Eli sees

Author: Dakota Quinn
last update publish date: 2026-06-08 07:40:36

“You want that corrected before Aaron sees it,” Eli said.

Maya’s expression did not move.

“Do I?”

“Yes.”

“Why?”

“Because Leanne still hasn’t forgiven him for the pasta thing.”

“That was three days ago.”

“She has a long memory.”

“So do I.”

“I know.”

There it was. Small. Plain. Annoying.

Maya tilted her head. “You know?”

Eli’s face stayed neutral. “You write corrections in the margins before you change the board

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