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Chapter three: Gates of hell

Author: Susan
last update publish date: 2026-03-17 23:59:59

Three hours later.

‎"Becky, you don't have to follow me. Im fine," I smacked my bloodshot lipstick in the mirror and pouted at her face.

‎"Miss Victoria... You are still staggering, okay let me drive you at least." She suggested,

‎"I just want to make sure you are safe."

‎There was a little point in what she said.

‎"okay Becky, you almost sound like my mom." I rolled my eyes as I threw on my little purse.

‎Becky released a sigh of relief and we got in to the car.

‎She started the engines but paused, giving me one last look,

‎"Are you sure you want to do this?, it's a one time and forever thing miss Victoria." She said.

‎"As sure as daylight." I threw my hands up in the air excitedly.

‎Times like this was why I loved the convertible car.

‎Then Becky zoomed off.

‎The streets were alive as we drove past blinding lights and extra energy,

‎Yes I knew new York was the city that never sleeps but, this was just extra.

‎Was it the 4th of July or am I just overly an introvert?

‎"Here..here, let's go in here" I gestured excitedly at the big building with heavy music jarring out.

‎It had boldy written on it,

‎"THE GATES OF HELL"

‎"that's one hell of a name, Becky eyes glistened at the attention grabbing title.

‎"I bet I will find something hot in here then." I squealed getting out of the car.

‎But Becky remained on her seats, still holding on to the steering wheel.

‎"I don't feel good about leaving you all by yourself in there..." she tilted her head, peeking at the crowded entrance.

‎"Becky, I'm a grown woman. I feel good, and I'll be fine. Trust me." I tugged at her, blowing her a kiss.

‎But truth was.

‎I did NOT feel good at all, matter of fact, I felt completely shitty.

‎But I would rather drown in the gates of hell with a hot demon than, drown in my bed with the constant moaning of Trisha torturing my sanity.

‎"Hey,,,," I said to a buff lady standing by the entrance.

‎Something about how built she was screamed I was in the right place.

‎And If I don't get an Adam today, who knows, I might just get an Eve.

‎A smirk drew across her lips and she averted her gaze, directing me in.

‎She must have read my thoughts and wanted to keep it professional.

‎"yeah right."

‎The music blasted my ears the moment I entered in,

‎And the lights, feint neon and blue lights flashed here and there,

‎It was almost impossible to figure out a person's face.

‎"what the fuck amount of mental stimulation was this?" I moved past the parade of sweating bodies.

‎Then the Dj stopped the music.

‎"okay okay, I see we are all hyped up right now!!"

‎Then there was an uproar,

‎"Then we know what time it is right now my ladiessss!!!!" he screamed into the microphone,

‎But the crowd was even more pumped than he was,

‎What time was it?

‎Just then the lights went completely out and the spotlight was on,

‎Focusing on a nearly demi semi naked hot! Guy.

‎My jaws dropped.

‎And the ladies went up in a frenzy.

‎He was a sexy dancer, and his body was built for this. I Could stake my money.

‎Then the dj spun the track.

‎"oh my god! Thats my song!" I squealed excitedly at the sound of a Chris brown song.

‎"let me take you downnnn.." I sang along in full spirits till Mr hot stuff got down.

‎My throat was getting really dry, and with the funky way I was feeling,  I wasn't exactly sure if tequila was a good idea.

‎But my feet moved faster than my head.

‎"Bartender,...six shots of sex on the beach please."

‎"Six shots , Are you trying to forget your name?" a male voice said from behind.

‎Yes I was but that part was none of his business, I turned to face him genuinely curious.

‎Then my eyes widened, 

‎"it's  you, isn't it." he said.

‎Me?, my cheeks ran hot. Mr hot stuff dancer knew me?

‎His eyes weren't exactly cold, but they had no excitement in them either.

‎"two shots of whiskey please." he double tapped on the table.

‎And in seconds, the bartender whipped out a little glass with ice dangling inside of it.

‎"you have something that belongs to me." he said, swirling his shot glass.

‎"I think you are clearly mistaken....?" I said in utter confusion.

‎He looked around cautiously before saying the words.

‎Then he leaned in closer.

‎"the little wrapped up parcel..." he said cocking his head.

‎Then the realization hit me.

‎.

‎",wait....wait,  you've been a delivery guy for me in the past?"I asked sympathetically.

‎He swallowed the two shots at once.

‎"You are trying to be funny."  he said with a poker face.

‎Okay now I was genuinely confused.  just then there was the sound of a siren right outside the club.

‎"Fucking hell." he rolled his eyes. throwing his head back

‎"What do they want, I thought security here was tight.? " I asked.

‎"We just have to sit back and wait." he said, spinning out of his seat.

‎"Well, where are you going?" I asked.

‎"Did you really thinking  I was going to sit down and wait?" he shot a glance at me.

‎My head continued to spiral as he took my hand and pulled me along a hall way,

‎Away from the craziness.

‎"wait wait...where are you taking me?"I asked, holding unto his grip on my wrist.

‎"Shh." he said, just follow me.

‎Then he used his leg to kick open a slightly unlocked door .

‎"What is this?!" I cried, yanking out my wrist from his grip.

‎"I need you to be quiet, it's the least you can do for me."he spat.

‎"you know what I think?, I think you are crazy,and I need to call Becky this moment," I said, feeling the annoyance build up in me.

‎"No, you can't bring anyone in here!" he spat once again, pacing from left to right.

‎"is this...a kidnap?, are you kidnapping me?"

‎Then he stopped mid track, and slowly turned to face me.

‎My heart beat drummed loudly against my chest with every step he took to face me ,

‎Till he entered into my personal space.

‎This was totally not the way I wanted this night to go, I whimped.

‎"Actually, yes. Its a kidnap and what do you want to do about it?" he asked, his breath fanning against my nose.

‎He towered over me easily and no I refused to admit the crappy and nasty thoughts that filled my mind.

‎I swallowed.

‎"gbumgbumggbumm" there was a heavy and loud thud against the door.

‎"it's the deputy speaking, we know you are in there, open the door" A firm voice echoed from outside the door.

‎A smile drew across his lips,

‎Now he continued to hover over me, his chest pulling closer and closer against mine,

‎What was going on?

‎Why was so much happening at the same time,

‎I tried to open my mouth to say something but only a gasp escaped.

‎"I need you to close your eyes and stay .. still." he said, looking straight into my eyes,

‎his eyes locked with mine screamed like he dared me to make a move.

‎The thud continued to sound at the door, but he completely ignored it and lowered himself, still not breaking eye contacts,

‎Then he held on to my thighs and slowly trailed them upwards,

‎Till his cold palms rested on my butt cheeks.

‎I swallowed again.

‎"w..what are you doing?" the words managed to escape my lips painfully.

‎Shakily, I held onto the his shoulders for support as he slowly folded down my panties.

‎Was this really happening?, and with a guy I didn't even know his name?

‎I saved my virginity all these years only to give it away to some community dick pole male vixen?

‎"stop it..." I said faintly.  Like I didn't even trust my own words.

‎Then the door flung open, quickly, he tried unfolding  my panties back up,

‎"I can do that myself!" I spat, pushing myself away from him.

‎Then I felt something brush my skin.

‎"what’s that ??...." I asked lowly.

‎"Shh." he hushed me.

‎"wait, Vic..toria?" the firm voice called my name .

‎Oh shit.

‎This just got bad.

‎"What are you doing here  with....?" his eyes shifted to Mr hot stuff who threw himself on the bed.

‎"you don't talk to my girlfriend that way. Deputy" he said, a smirk drawing across his lips.

‎"Girlfriend?" the deputy repeated.

‎"officers please, search him," said the deputy. his eyes not shifting from mine.

‎"information has it this young man, Lucas, was in possession of the illegal substance here in the club, in form of a tiny parcel." his kissed his teeth.

‎"But I think we have more than a little problem too now." he said rigidly, and without a blink, , his eyes blistered with equal dose of Anger and disappointment.

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