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Chapter 5

Rillys pov

Mom I don't think they would like to- Yes says Sam, with his eyes  so intent and gorgeous. I mean that would be nice. Mark goes to talk to Maggie about the party info,when Sam comes closer to me and says do you have a cell phone? The only thing I was focused on was his eyes. Rilly! Yes. I have a cell phone. Let me see it. Here's my number if you ever want to talk or text. Oh- ok. I  studdered out. Well you boys behave. Yes behave I said with a smile looking at Sam. Yes you two as well. I don't think that is possible. Rilly! Yes I say looking at my mom. I turned around and looked at Sam and he has this grin that says is that so. With out thinking I looked at Sam and said yes. Well then it's been great, untill next time Maggie, Rilly. Yes until next time please be safe. Always I say with a smile. Once Mark and Sam left I looked at my mom. Really mom you invited them to my birthday party,I'm to old to have a birthday party. Rilly you will be seventeen and I promise you that you will love it. It's tommorow night Rilly.. Mom I don't want a birthday party! 

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Jean Sterling
The story sounds like it might be good but I won't find out because the grammar and punctuation is sooooo atrocious. I can't tell who is speaking, who is thinking, and spelling is way off just to start. I'm not an English major, but at least try!
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