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The bus finally came to a halt and the doors opened with a hiss. The fog now cleared, like heavy smoke parting ways for a clearer view of the world. A huge building stood in front of them with the name "GRAND HOTEL".

Elara waited at the step of the bus. Being the first in line, the rest were probably expecting her to go down first, but she hesitated. What if she stepped out and something eats her?

Seeing that she wouldn't go down, a woman from the back marched forward and said in a slightly irritated voice, "The more second we delay, the closer we get to being wiped out. I don't think time here waits for anyone. You were given enough while you were still alive."

She shoved her aside with an arm and stepped out. Without turning to look behind, she proceeded inside the hotel. One by one, the others also stepped out of the bus and it felt like she was the only one left, until...

"Are you scared?"

She turned sharply and saw perfect man standing by the pole with his arms crossed. He nudged his brows at her and she pulled her brows into a slight frown.

"Are you not?" She asked back and turned to look outside the bus again. Scared is a lesser word to what she is feeling at the moment.

"Do you want me to hold your hand and walk you down?" he asked again.

Elara clenched her fist and said, "I'll actually appreciate if you can keep your mouth shut."

"Alright," he said and pushed his body from the pole. "Get out of my way then," he said.

Elara turned to the side and watched him get off the bus. She pulled her brows into a deeper frown and cursed under her breath.

She finally stepped down and immediately, she heard the bus doors shut close behind her. She stepped on the blood-red carpet of the portico and entered the lobby. The chandelier that hung down was shaped like a spider web and the art decor was something out of a horror imagination.

"So, what now?" Someone clapped their hands, bringing their attention together.

"How about we introduce ourselves?" Another asked.

"Does anyone knows why we are here? I was supposed to be...dead, but I woke up to this world and it's not even the afterlife," another scaredy-cat like her said. Elara knew she must have caught him in tears at a point.

"Okay then. We'll start with the introductions and talk about the others next. I'll go first," the man said. "I'm Jax." He gestured his hand to the next person.

"Leo."

"Rue."

"Elara."

"Cipher."

Out of the five of them, only Rue and Cipher appears to be...different. Rue, on one hand wears a frown each time. She looks like someone who isn't comfortable with hanging out with people and she appears older than the rest of them. Then Cipher on the other hand appears calm and composed. He is someone they need to be worried about. Everything about him just seem suspicious.

"Thank you for your cooperation," Jax continued. "Though, I'll like to ask, is this everybody's first time?"

"First time?" Rue huffed. "I can't believe I'm hanging out with some set of newbies."

Everyone turned to look at her.

"I-it's not your first time here?" Leo asked.

"I hate it when weak people talk to me. It's pathetic!" She shot Leo a glare and looked away.

That didn't sit well with Elara. She could see Leo lowering his head in shame.

"So what's the big deal if you aren't a newbie?" she confronted her. "No one asked to be here in the first place. I believe we all died and ended up here one way or another. It's the first time for some of us and we're still yet to figure out what this place even is."

"Wrong," Rue said. "It's obvious what this place already is. It's hell. I've seen it with my own eyes. And one thing I will appreciate is if you all don't mind me. I don't like getting involved with people as you see. That only puts me in danger."

Elara shook her head and that was when Jax spoke up.

"I see. So that explains the scars and bruises on your body. You did look like you've went through hell indeed."

"But why is no one asking the obvious question?" Elara raised her voice.

"And what is that?" asked Jax

"This place. It isn't the afterlife, is it? With everything I went through and how I died, I shouldn't be getting punished this way."

"Now we're talking," Rue said. "I've been here for almost a week now and the things I've seen and the places I've been, they are so unreal. The real horror started when they started to kill people. I couldn't believe it at first, but once you die here, you die in the real world. It makes me wonder if I'm currently in a coma and my life depends on if I survive here or not. But it's been a week and yet, I don't see any end to this!" She clenched her hands and expressed her frustration.

"By the way, isn't the game starting late than usual today?"

Elara looked at Cipher who had just spoken. He has his back leaned against the wall and his hand raised to his front, as if admiring it.

"Have you also been here longer than us?" Jax asked with slightly raised brows.

Cipher pulled the corner of his lips. "Who would have thought, right? Because I didn't advertise myself like Rue here."

He gestured his hand to where Rue was and she shot him an angry look.

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    Finally, for the first time since the hours they had entered the hotel, they were able to get out. To Elara, it was more of a relief. She was no longer thinking about the real world, instead, she was glad the game had ended and she was finally able to smell the outside air again. Her body felt weak from all the stress and trauma the game had caused her and she found a spot to sit and rest for a while as she watched the others standing separately and probably wondering what was next.Leo had helped Mira with Sam’s body and there had been a funeral. His body was sealed in a box and laid in an enclosed place in the hotel. Mira soon came to where Elara was and she stood by the side.“What will you do from now?” she asked.Elara turned her eyes to her, but she couldn’t give an answer to her question. it was more of like the reality she now had to face.“Where will you go from here?” Mira asked another question Elara couldn’t answer.“What about you?” Elara asked her.Mira paused and then r

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    The machine rotated to the direction of the third group and several spikes of crystal glass shot out. Elara could see from where she sat, flesh tearing apart and bodies being dismembered. It took all the will in her to look away and focus on the character she was playing.Soon, everything became quiet again and Mira spoke;“Sam is…was…he was my safe space. When I wanted to die, he taught me how to live and to make a worth for it. That was how I gathered the others and reassured them time and time again that today, it is us, but tomorrow, it could be someone we want to protect. But look what happened.” She raised her eyes to look at her. “There is no saving grace here. In the end, everyone is still selfish.”Elara knew this was the moment and she said to her, “Look at me. What would matter if I die? Is it knowing that there is one person who I consider the least to save me, or would I die knowing no one tried extending a helping hand?”“Nothing really matters, you know,” Mira said.“Is

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    Elara managed to convince Mira to join her group and she explained in details how they would act, to Leo.“You are so sure about this,” Leo said to her when she was done explaining his role. “What are you planning on doing with her?” he asked, referring to Mira.Elara looked towards Mira and said, “It’s best for the conversation to happen naturally. That way, her feelings will be into it.” She then moved her eyes to where Cipher is. He has Rue and Jax with him and was explaining their roles to them.“You’ve got this,” Leo tried cheering her up, at least, making sure she was least worried about anything. “So let’s go over it again. Once the game starts, I stay at the corner and watch you talk with Mira, then when I get the cue, I suddenly start coming over to you with the determination to kill and—”“I was here first. You can’t throw me out like that!” Commotion broke from the last group.Elara turned her attention to them and watched them argue, trying to decide who gets to complete t

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    Elara was lost of words. She couldn’t believe what she was seeing, but after now, things would start to take another shape. This is exactly what the game wants: to provide premium entertainment and fancy deaths. It means, to survive, one would have to be brutal, one would have to sacrifice so many things. In here, there are no rules for living, only rules for the game.Her stomach turned at the sight of blood and flesh sliced and it made her feel sick. No one should have to go through a thing like this. Mira didn’t deserve this, she thought as she watched her crouch next to Sam’s body, cradling him like a baby and sending him off. It was after he went still in her arms that she broke. She cried and hugged him tightly, like she had just lost someone precious to her.She moved her eyes and saw the guilty look on the other players faces. Without exempting herself, she knew they were all responsible. The adults are responsible for what had just happened. And despite herself, she couldn’t

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    Soon after the players all walked out and found out that someone had died, chaos broke out. Elara had made to find Cipher and question him, but something else caught her eyes almost immediately. She saw the rest of the players from the other teams whispering together and one drew out a knife and lunged forward. Elara’s eyes widened almost immediately and she tried to warn the blue-haired girl, but it would be too late to do that.The blue-haired girl caught her expression at the last minute and pulled her brows into a deep frown before hearing her name almost immediately.“Mira!”It was Sam, trying to warn her as he was suddenly being held back. She turned and grabbed the player who was about to attack her in sudden reflex before her eyes widen when she realized. She twisted his hand, making him scream out and she hit the knife away from his grip. She then shoved him to the ground and looked at the others.Everyone already gathered together now and Elara watched in horror as they all

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