Alright — let’s carry the momentum straight into Chapter 2 of Shadow Heir,
The journey began before dawn, the keep still cloaked in darkness when Eolan stepped into the courtyard. A thin mist hung low, curling around the hooves of the waiting horses like it feared to drift too far from stone walls. The air smelled of wet earth and pine, fresh from the night’s rain. Arwyn stood beside a grey stallion, checking the straps of its saddlebags. She wore travel leathers under her cloak, and her hair was tied back in a braid that reached her shoulder. The sight of her like this—not the stern guardian of the keep’s halls, but the silent sentinel of the road—made something inside Eolan settle. “You’ll ride behind me until we clear the valley,” she said without looking at him. “After that, you keep your own pace. But keep your eyes open. The road to the city isn’t as empty as it looks.” Eolan swung into the saddle of his black mare, the leather creaking beneath him. He glanced back once, toward the keep’s looming silhouette on the cliff. Its towers rose like jagged teeth against the paling sky. For the first time in years, he was leaving its safety—if the keep could be called safe at all. They rode in silence for hours, the path winding down from the high cliffs into the rolling moors. The wind was sharp but clean, tugging at his cloak. Occasionally, a hawk circled overhead, its cry fading into the emptiness. By midmorning, the mist had burned away, revealing a scattering of stone cairns along the road—markers for those who had died on the way to or from the Twilight City. Eolan slowed his horse to look at them. Each was different: some crowned with bits of ribbon, others carved with simple sigils. “Don’t linger,” Arwyn said, urging her stallion onward. “It’s not wise to count the dead before you meet the living.” They stopped at midday beneath the boughs of a twisted yew tree. Arwyn tossed him a skin of water and a strip of dried meat. “You’ve been quiet,” she said, leaning against the saddle. “There’s nothing to say,” Eolan replied. “There’s always something to say before you walk into the Court of Lanterns,” she countered. “You just haven’t decided which lie to start with.” He frowned. “You think I’ll have to lie?” “I think you’ll have to survive.” She took a drink from her own waterskin, eyes never leaving his. “The city’s not like the keep. There, people smile while measuring the weight of your shadow. And once they know it, they’ll see if they can cut it free.” They rode on. As the day wore into evening, the road narrowed, flanked by stands of black alder that seemed to swallow the last of the light. Then, as if the forest had opened a curtain, they crested a rise—and the Twilight City spread out before them. It was unlike anything Eolan had imagined. Towers of pale stone rose from a labyrinth of streets, their windows glowing with amber light. Lanterns—some suspended from high wires, others floating as if on unseen strings—drifted through the air, casting the city in perpetual dusk. The light was warm, but the shadows it threw were deep, clinging in corners like secrets. The gates were open, guarded by two silent figures in dark lacquered armor. Their helmets bore a single curved horn, and their faces were hidden behind mirrored masks. They watched the travelers pass but said nothing. As Eolan and Arwyn rode through, the scents of the city rushed to meet them: spiced wine, burning oil, damp stone, and the faint sweetness of lotus smoke curling from street-side braziers. Merchants called from stalls draped in silks, their voices mixing with the ring of distant bells. “Stay close,” Arwyn murmured. They wound through the streets, lantern light sliding over their cloaks. Eolan tried to take everything in—the glint of jeweled masks, the quick hands of children darting between carts, the hollow-eyed beggars who said nothing but watched everything. Their path led them to the heart of the city, where the Court of Lanterns rose like a beacon. It was a vast structure of white stone and glass, its facade lined with tiers of crimson lanterns that swayed gently in the night air. Beneath them, wide steps led to doors of carved obsidian. At the foot of the steps, a herald in gold-trimmed robes stepped forward. His eyes flicked over Eolan, then to Arwyn. “The heir is expected,” he said, his tone smooth but unreadable. “And the guardian as well.” Without waiting for a reply, he turned and led them up the steps. Inside, the air was cool and scented faintly with sandalwood. The hall was lit entirely by lanterns, their glow reflected in polished floors of black marble. People in masks of every shape and color moved through the space, their laughter like chimes in the stillness. Eolan felt the weight of every glance. They didn’t need to see his face to know who he was. At the far end of the hall, a dais rose, draped in silks the color of spilled wine. Upon it sat three figures, their masks wrought of hammered gold. The one in the center leaned forward, the metal face catching the lanternlight. “Welcome, Shadow Heir,” the figure said, voice rich and slow. “We have waited a long time for you.” The hall fell silent. Eolan’s pulse thundered in his ears, but he stepped forward, the sound of his boots on marble echoing like a drumbeat. If the keep had been his cage, the city would be his arena.The alarm bells of the northern stronghold rang in a harsh, metallic rhythm, echoing through the icy peaks. Below, the courtyard boiled with movement—archers sprinted to the walls, smiths hauled fresh weapons, and the smell of oil and smoke thickened the air.From the battlements, Eolan stared into the white expanse beyond the walls. The enemy’s black banner flapped in the wind—three jagged claw marks slashed across it. The figures beneath it moved with disciplined precision, their torches glowing in the swirling snow.Arwyn stepped up beside him, his voice low. “Not southern troops. These are sellswords. Paid well, by the look of their steel.”“Paid by who?” Eolan asked.“That’s the question,” Arwyn replied, eyes narrowing at the distant ranks.The northern heir approached, now armored in deep-sea lacquer, copper hair braided close to her neck. “Five hundred, maybe more. They’ll reach the gates by nightfall.”Eolan’s shadow curled faintly at his feet, restless. “Then we have hours to
The pale light of dawn seeped through the narrow windows of the northern stronghold’s council chamber. Eolan stood near the heavy oak table, his shadow flickering faintly at his feet, still restless from the previous day’s duel.Across the table, the northern heir—her copper hair pulled back tight—studied him with unreadable eyes. The room was quiet except for the crackle of embers in the hearth and the distant calls of sentries beginning their watch.“We both know this is no mere territorial dispute,” she said, voice steady. “The southern court sends you not just to claim land, but to shift the balance of power.”Eolan nodded, meeting her gaze without flinching. “And you think I came here as a conqueror?”She smiled thinly. “I think you came to test me—and perhaps yourself.” Her eyes flicked toward the window, where the first rays of sunlight sliced through the cold morning air. “Our people have suffered long enough. If there is a way to avoid war, I want to hear it.”He exhaled slow
Alright — here’s Chapter 7 of Shadow Heir*, keeping the duel tense and layered so it tests both Eolan’s skill and his restraint.---The first blow came fast.She moved like a sudden shift in the wind—silent until the moment of impact. Eolan brought his practice blade up in time, the wood cracking against wood with a sharp snap that echoed off the hall’s rafters.The northern heir didn’t pause. Her second strike came from a low angle, quick and cutting, meant to unbalance him. He sidestepped, the firelight catching in her hair as she spun to follow through.Around them, the hall watched in perfect stillness. Even the warriors leaning on their spears seemed frozen, their eyes tracking every movement.Eolan adjusted his stance, letting her press. She was testing him—not for weakness, but for rhythm, for the exact beat where she could end the fight.The third blow grazed his ribs. He exhaled sharply, stepping back. “You’re not here to prove anything,” he said.“I’m here to see if you are
here’s Chapter 6 of Shadow Heir*, "keeping the same tone and pacing so it flows seamlessly from the moment Eolan enters northern territory".The northern stronghold came into view just as the light began to fade. It rose from the mountainside like it had been carved from the same stone, its walls sheer and pale, crowned with black banners that snapped in the wind. Fires burned in braziers along the battlements, throwing orange light across the snow-dusted slopes below. The outriders who had tested him in the pass now flanked him and Arwyn, their mounts sure-footed on the icy path. No words were exchanged—the silence was as deliberate as the escort. At the gates, guards in heavy furs and scale armor inspected them with the dispassionate gaze of men used to weighing threats. A signal horn sounded once, deep and resonant, before the massive gates groaned open. Inside, the courtyard was a blur of movement—stablehands leading horses, soldiers sharpening blades, servants carrying basket
They left the Twilight City before the sun had fully breached the eastern hills, when the streets were still glazed in dew and the air smelled faintly of last night’s lantern smoke.Eolan didn’t look back. He didn’t want to see the Court of Lanterns receding behind him, not while the weight of its command still pressed on his shoulders like a mantle too heavy to shrug off.Arwyn rode ahead at first, guiding them through the narrow northern gate—a smaller, less-guarded passage known to merchants and smugglers alike. The guards there only gave Eolan a cursory glance before waving them through.The northern road climbed quickly into the highlands, trading the city’s warm dusk for a chill that cut straight through wool and leather. The land grew wilder with each mile—steep hills mottled with heather, streams running dark and quick under mossy bridges, forests of pine so thick the light came down in narrow columns.By midday, the road dwindled into a track, marked only by cairns of river s
The city never truly slept.From the balcony outside his chamber in the Court of Lanterns, Eolan could see the drifting lights gliding between towers like fireflies too stubborn to die. Far below, the streets murmured with the sounds of merchants closing their stalls, of masked revelers spilling from shadowed taverns, of whispers that might have been wind—or something sharper.He should have been exhausted. The Lantern Trial had left his muscles trembling and his ribs throbbing with a dull ache. But the adrenaline still hummed in his blood, carrying with it a gnawing unease.The court had not celebrated his survival. They had not offered congratulations or toasts. Instead, they had looked at him as one might regard a blade recently pulled from the forge—unsharpened, untested, but with the promise of cutting deep.A knock at the chamber door broke his thoughts.Arwyn entered without waiting for an invitation, her cloak damp from the mist that had begun to creep over the city. She glanc