LOGINTHE ONE WHO KEPT TRYING
A year passed.
Valeris Capital changed with the seasons. The towers grew taller, new academies opened, and the banners of the six Magical Knight Orders flew across the busy streets.
But inside the Riven Estate, one thing stayed the same.
Kevin Riven was still training.
"Again."
He stood in the middle of the training yard. He was sixteen now, taller and stronger than the little boy who used to struggle to get up after losing control. But his magic was as stubborn as ever.
He raised his hand. A faint glow wrapped around his fingers.
"Come on..."
The energy gathered. For a moment it looked stable.
Then it twisted.
"Wait..."
BOOM!
The blast threw him across the yard. He hit the ground, and dust covered his clothes.
The instructor sighed. "Your control is still unstable."
Kevin slowly stood. "I know."
"You've been training for years."
"I know."
"You should have improved more by now."
Kevin said nothing.
The instructor studied him for a moment, then turned away. "Take a break."
"I'll continue."
"You've already exhausted yourself."
"I said I'll continue."
The man shook his head. "You're stubborn."
Kevin smiled faintly. "Maybe."
He raised his hand again.
From the balcony, Arena watched him.
At sixteen she had become almost everything people expected her to be. Her control was extraordinary, her instructors praised her, and nobles invited her to gatherings. Young mages challenged her and most regretted it. Even a few Magical Knights had started to take an interest.
The attention never changed her. But one thing still bothered her.
Kevin.
She watched him fall, then stand. Fall, then stand. Every day, for years.
She went downstairs. By the time she reached the yard, he had already started another attempt.
"Kevin."
He ignored her.
"Kevin, don't."
The energy around his palm began to shake.
"You're going to lose control."
"I know."
"Then stop."
"No." His voice was quiet. "I have to."
Arena frowned. "Why?"
He looked at her. "Because everyone else already gave up on me."
"I haven't."
His face softened. "I know." He turned back to the target. "But I need to know that I haven't given up on myself."
Arena didn't know what to say.
"Again," Kevin said.
That evening, the Riven family gathered for dinner.
The hall was enormous, with a long table beneath a chandelier made entirely of enchanted crystal. Kevin sat quietly. Arena sat beside him. Their older siblings talked about politics, the academies, and the latest achievements of the six Orders.
Eventually the conversation turned to Arena.
"You've been invited to observe the Sky Order's training next month," a relative said. "That's quite an honour."
"I know."
"With your ability, you may even receive an offer after your Codex ceremony."
Kevin lowered his eyes.
Their father looked at him. "And you, Kevin?"
The table went quiet.
"I'll keep training."
One of his siblings chuckled. "Still?"
Kevin stared at him.
"At this point, perhaps you should accept that magic simply isn't your strength."
"Enough," Arena said sharply.
The sibling shrugged. "I'm only being honest."
Kevin looked down at his plate. Under the table, his fingers tightened.
"Kevin," their father said.
"Yes?"
"Your Codex ceremony is approaching. You need to decide what you intend to do with your future."
"I already know."
"And what is that?"
He answered without hesitation. "I'm going to become a Magical Knight."
Several people at the table glanced at each other. Someone laughed.
Kevin kept his eyes on his father. "I'll become one."
His father didn't laugh. But he didn't encourage him either.
"Then prove you're capable of it."
"I will."
The next morning, Kevin woke before sunrise and slipped out of his room without a sound. The estate was still asleep. He walked into the training yard under a dark sky and raised his hand.
Nothing.
He tried again. Nothing.
He clenched his teeth. "Come on."
On the third try, a spark appeared.
"Yes..."
It grew. His breathing slowed. He remembered everything his instructors had taught him. Control your breathing. Control your thoughts. Control your magic.
The light grew brighter, and for the first time it didn't feel like his magic was fighting him. It felt like it was listening.
Then it vanished.
"No." He tried again. Nothing.
He lowered his hand and stood completely still. Then he laughed, a small, bitter laugh.
"Of course."
He sat down on the ground. The sun came up slowly beyond the estate walls, and he watched it. He wanted to be angry. He wanted to scream.
Instead he whispered, "Tomorrow."
Weeks turned into months, and months into years. Kevin kept going. He trained his body, studied magic, learned the different attributes, and read everything he could about the six Orders. He practised swordsmanship even though he had no natural talent for it. When his magic failed, he trained his body. When his body gave out, he studied. When studying got frustrating, he went back to magic.
There was always something else to try.
Meanwhile, Arena kept rising. At seventeen she defeated older mages in training, and nobles already talked about her future. People were saying she might stand among the greatest mages of her generation.
Kevin heard all of it. And strangely, he wasn't jealous. He was proud of her.
But sometimes, when nobody was watching, he wondered.
When will they say my name?
One evening the twins stood on the highest balcony of the estate. The capital glittered below them, thousands of magical lights spread across the city.
"One year," Arena said.
Kevin knew what she meant. Their Codex ceremony.
"One year."
"Are you nervous?"
He laughed. "A little."
"A little?"
"Fine. Very."
She smiled. "You'll be fine."
"What if nothing happens?"
Her smile faded. "What do you mean?"
"What if I don't receive one?"
"You will."
"You don't know that."
She stayed silent. Kevin looked at his hands.
"For years I've been waiting for something to happen. What if nothing ever does?"
Arena stepped closer. "Then you'll find another way."
"You always make it sound easy."
"It isn't." She looked straight at him. "But you're Kevin."
"That's supposed to make me feel better?"
"Yes."
"Why?"
"Because I've watched you fail more times than anyone I know." The corner of her mouth lifted. "And somehow, you're still here."
Kevin said nothing for a moment. Then he smiled.
"Yeah," he said, looking out toward the horizon. "I'm still here."
Neither of them knew what the year ahead would bring.
For now, Kevin only had one thing left to do. Keep training.
So he did.
Again.
The royal headquarters rose from the heart of the Capital like a fortress carved from silence.Towering walls encircled it, layered with ancient protective magic. Guards stood at every entrance, utterly motionless. Unlike the Order's bustling halls, the air here felt heavy, as if the very stones were listening.Kevin tilted his head back and stared up at the enormous structure."Do we really have to go in?"The captain didn't turn around. "Yes.""I was only asking.""And I answered."Kevin sighed.His bandaged arm throbbed with every movement, and the thought of repeating the whole mission from the start made him want to lie down on the steps and never get up.They were nearing the entrance when the great doors swung open from the inside.A familiar figure stepped out.Kevin froze."Arena?"His twin sister stood at the top of the stairs in her Order uniform, flanked by two fellow mages, one of them clearly a senior member of her squad. Surprise flickered across her face."Kevin?"Her
Chapter 24: The Temple That VanishedThe ground began to tremble.Kevin barely had time to react before the stone beneath him crumbled away, sending him sliding toward a gaping hole in the earth. His injured arm screamed in protest as he clawed at the ground, searching for anything to hold on to."KEVIN!"A hand shot out and caught his wrist.For one terrifying moment, he hung above the darkness, legs dangling over a pit that seemed to have no bottom. Loose stones tumbled past him and vanished into the depths.They never made a sound."Pull me up!" Kevin gasped through clenched teeth."I'M TRYING!"Another teammate threw himself forward to help. Together, they hauled Kevin over the edge, and he collapsed onto the ground, chest heaving, his injured arm clutched against him."Wonderful," he wheezed. "We survive a temple full of monsters, only to get buried alive on the way out.""Can you stop complaining for five seconds?" someone snapped."Can you stop saving my life in the most painfu
CHAPTER TWENTY-THREEThe Voice Beneath the TempleThe treasure chamber shook again.BOOOOOOM!Dust rained from the ceiling. Ancient crystals shattered.Kevin looked up. “That doesn’t sound good.”Veyr sat comfortably on his shoulder. “Your ability to identify obvious problems continues to impress me.”“Can you be serious for five minutes?”“I am serious.” Veyr pointed at the ceiling. “That is definitely going to fall.”Kevin looked up.A massive crack spread across the stone.“…Oh.”“EVERYONE MOVE!” Kael shouted.The chamber exploded into chaos. The researchers bolted for the entrance. Liora threw up both hands. “Water Barrier!” A wall of water formed overhead, and chunks of stone slammed against it. Damon seized one of the researchers and dragged him away from a collapsing wall.Kevin stood frozen, his eyes locked on his Codex.The golden mark was still there. One of the five points now carried a faint golden glow.He touched it.The instant his finger met the mark—A whisper entered
CHAPTER TWENTY-TWOThe First RelicThe treasure chamber went silent.Not quiet.Silent.Every sound vanished. The researchers stopped moving. Kael was frozen mid-stance. Liora stood with one hand raised, water suspended around her fingers. Damon’s blade hung halfway out of its sheath. Even the dust drifting through the air had stopped.Kevin stared. “What…”He slowly turned his head. No one moved.“Kael?”Nothing.“Liora?”Nothing.“Damon?”Still nothing.Kevin swallowed. Then he looked at the figure in the center of the chamber.The stranger was no longer smiling. His dark cloak stirred faintly in the frozen air. His eyes were fixed on Kevin.“You can move.”Kevin stepped back. “Apparently.”The stranger tilted his head. “That should not be possible.”Kevin glanced at his Codex. The five-point symbol on its cover glowed faintly. Veyr was perched on his shoulder, and the little dragon’s expression had changed. No sarcasm. No smirk.Only suspicion.“Veyr?”“Don’t.”“Don’t what?”“Do an
CHAPTER TWENTY-ONEInto the TempleThe carriage tore through the dark forest.Trees blurred past the windows. Branches scraped against the sides of the magical transport as the Veil Order beasts drove it forward.Nobody was talking anymore. Not even Damon.The golden light from the temple had vanished. The forest was pitch black.Too dark.Kevin stared through the window. “That’s strange.”“What?” Kael asked.“The light. It disappeared.”Liora closed her book. “That’s probably worse.”Kevin turned. “How is that worse?”“Because whatever created that light no longer needs it.”Silence.Kevin looked at Veyr, still perched on his shoulder. “You have anything useful to say?”Veyr yawned. “No.”“Nothing?”“I could tell you we’re probably going to die.”“That’s not useful.”“It is if you enjoy being prepared.”Kevin sighed. “You’re terrible.”“And you’re alive because of me.”“Unfortunately.”Veyr’s eyes narrowed. “Say that again.”Kevin smiled. “Unfortunately.”Veyr opened his mouth.The c
CHAPTER TWENTYThe Forgotten TempleThe bell kept echoing through the Veil Order.GONG!Kevin stood beneath the massive magical clock hanging above the courtyard, his new black robe fluttering in the wind. On his shoulder sat a tiny black dragon.Veyr.Kevin glanced sideways. “You heard the bell too, right?”Veyr yawned. “I heard it three times.”“And?”“And I was hoping you’d pretend you didn’t.”“Finally,” Kevin said. “Someone who understands me.”Veyr flicked his tail against Kevin’s neck. “Unfortunately, your survival instincts are terrible.”“I survived the trial.”“You were unconscious.”“I still survived.”“You were carried away.”“Details.”“Large details.”Kevin ignored him.Around them, the new recruits streamed toward the Central Hall. Some looked excited. Others looked nervous. One was already praying.Kevin stared at him. “That’s probably not a good sign.”Veyr’s crimson eyes narrowed. “Neither is the smell of fear coming off him.”“You can smell fear?”“I am a dragon.”“







