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. THE DOOR OPENED_Darkness. Olivia was burning with fever. Dry lips. Body aching._CLICK_ The door opened.Someone came in. Flashlight glow."Shh. Don't make a sound."Olivia opened her eyes. An old servant. 60 years old. White hair. In his hands a tray. Bread. Lentils. Water. Medicine.Olivia: "...water..."The old man immediately gave her water. "Drink, daughter. Slowly."1:05 AM. FIRST MEAL_Olivia took 2 bites. And started crying. "Thank you... thank you uncle..."The old man: "Shh. If someone hears, they'll beat me too."He looked at Olivia's wounds. Back. Arms. His eyes filled. "They're cruel. So cruel."He wiped the blood from Olivia's mouth with his handkerchief. "You're like a daughter to me." 1:07 AM. FLASHBACK - HER FIRST DAY IN THIS HOUSE_ _[+600 WORDS NEW SCENE]_Olivia flinched. The smell of lentils brought back another smell. Blood.She remembered her first day here. 3 months ago.It was raining that day too. Victoria had dragged her by the hair down the
11:20 AM. CHAOS IN THE HOUSE_The gate opened. Two guards stared at Olivia. "Go inside."Olivia's heart was pounding. USB in the bag. Recorder in her hair. Hands shaking.In the living room, Victoria sat on the sofa. Amelia stood. Holding a _hunter_ - a horse whip. Lucas was in the corner. On his phone.Victoria: *"WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU FOR 3 HOURS?!"*Olivia raised her head. For the first time. No tears in her eyes. Only fire.11:21 AM. THE DIRECT QUESTION_Olivia: *"I went to find the truth."*Silence.Victoria: *"WHAT TRUTH?"*Olivia: *"The truth about who’s poisoning Ethan."*_SILENCE_Then Amelia burst out laughing. "Hahaha! Listen to her!"Lucas put his phone down. "What bullshit is this?"Victoria stood up slowly. Face hard as stone. *"Watch your tongue, thief."*Olivia: *_"No. I’m not scared anymore. You’re putting poison in the medicine. And I have proof."__: 11:23 AM. THE FIRST STRIKE_Victoria’s eyes turned red.*"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING?!"*She sna
2:00 AM. THE CALL*Olivia lay unconscious on the cold floor of the storage room. Her body ached from the beating. Her lips were cracked. The air smelled of dust and rats.Her phone buzzed. Once. Twice. A faint voice came from outside. The nurse. "Miss Brooks? Your phone. It’s been ringing for a long time."With shaking hands Olivia reached for it. Every movement hurt. "Hello?" she whispered.Voice: "Olivia? It’s Zain. From college."Olivia’s eyes filled instantly. It had been months since anyone called her by her name with kindness. "Zain...?" Her voice broke.Zain: "Listen to me carefully. You’re in danger. Come to the old cafe tomorrow at 10. Alone. I know everything about Ethan. Everything they’re hiding."The call ended.Olivia stared at the ceiling. Water dripping. _Truth? What truth?_ Her heart started pounding. For the first time in weeks, she felt something other than fear. She felt hope. 9:00 AM. LEAVING THE HOUSE*Morning came. The mansion was quiet.Victoria had left
6:00 AM. OUT OF THE STORAGE ROOM*The door opened.A nurse came in. "Madam’s orders. Go to the patient. But don’t make noise. Or I’ll lock you up again."2 servants helped Olivia up. Body bruised. Arms swollen. She couldn’t walk.Limping, she came into Ethan’s room.: 6:10 AM. ETHAN'S ROOM*Machines. Oxygen. IV drip. Ethan was on the bed. Completely unconscious. Face pale. Lips blue. In 5 days he had gotten even weaker.Olivia knelt down beside the bed."...Ethan..." She said in a trembling voice.No answer.She took Ethan’s cold hand. Held it to her cheek. Tears fell.*7:00 AM. CARE THROUGH TEARS*Olivia gave the medicine. Checked the drip. Massaged him. Rubbed his feet. Everything just like before.But now with crying too."...I’m giving the medicine on time, Ethan..." "...see... I’m marking the chart too..." "...please wake up... just open your eyes once..."She put a cold compress on Ethan’s forehead. "You have a fever..."Machine beep: beep... beep...: 10:0
8:30 AM. RETURN* The taxi stopped at Hale Mansion gate. Rain. Olivia was soaked. Bag pressed to her chest. Inside: the pen-drive. Dr. Aryan’s report. The servant opened the door. Face pale. "Go inside. Ma’am is waiting for you." Olivia’s heart sank. 8:35 AM. LIVING ROOM - CAUGHT* Victoria sat on the sofa. Table in front. On it: CCTV printouts. Olivia coming out of the clinic. Talking to Dr. Aryan. Behind her, Amelia stood. Rolling pin in hand. Smiling. Lucas in the corner. Playing game on his phone. Victoria: "WHERE DID YOU GO?!" Olivia lowered her head. "M... medicine..." _SLAP_ Victoria stood. One hard slap. "LIAR!!!" Olivia fell. 5 finger marks on her cheek. Victoria threw the printout. "WHAT IS THIS?! WHY DID YOU GO TO DR. ARYAN?!" Olivia: "Ma’am... I... I just..." : 8:40 AM. BEATING START - PART 1* Victoria: "AMELIA!" Amelia stepped forward. Raised the rolling pin. "I’ll teach her. Acting like a big doctor." _THWACK_ Firs
3 DAYS LATER. 9:00 AM. BACK FROM HOSPITAL* The ambulance door opened. Ethan on a stretcher. Oxygen. IV drip. Unconscious. His face even paler. Weight dropped more. Victoria, Amelia, Lucas were all standing. Doctor: "Ma’am, it’s better to take him home. Risk of infection in hospital. But his condition is critical. Needs 24-hour monitoring." Olivia stood in the corner. In uniform. Head down. Burn marks on her hands. Faint marks still on her cheek. She looked at Ethan. Her heart broke. Victoria saw her. "You! Come here." Olivia came. Head lowered. Victoria: "From today, you’ll take care of him again. But remember. One mistake and it’s straight to police." Olivia only said, "Yes ma’am." : 10:00 AM. IN THE ROOM* Ethan was shifted to his room. Not the same room as before. More machines now. More medicines. Olivia immediately picked up the chart. _CARE ROUTINE_ 9:00 - Medicine A 12:00 - Medicine B + Injection 3:00 - Medicine C 6:00 - Medici







