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I have some of you asking for more and hating to wait between chapters. Let me start by telling you that I absolutely and completely feel your frustration. I have to admit, since this is the first book I have ever written and published, I was too eager to see if people will like it, like my writing, and like the characters, I published it before I was even halfway done with it. While the amazing comments made me work harder to write the new chapters, I started realizing later on that I made a mistake. I should have finished writing it before I started publishing. As the stress of writing new chapters and publishing it before you began to lose interest in waiting, while trying to be a good, responsible mother to my ASD 3 year old boy, the stress of trying to write expressive, well written, spelling and grammatically mistake free (English is not my native language btw) chapters at the expense of taking a longer time to publish between chapters, was all getting to me. I realized too late, that if I wanted my book to be perfect in every way (because I'm also a keen perfectionist and when I want something done, I want it to be perfect) I should have finished it first.Having said that, I made a promise to myself (and now to you) that my next book will not be published until it is done from its cover to its epilogue. But right now, i want you to be just a little patient with me, and wait for multiple chapters that will be published at the same time every now and then without giving up on it or removing it from your library. Good news is, it is coming to an end soon as a long, 100 chapters book, is not something I can endure. A couple more chapters and you can find out the ending, just hope it will be an ending you like and enjoy. With love <3Ella’s POV As soon as I heard his voice, my whole body went rigid and tensed. I was still in alpha Klaus’s arms, he instantly tightened his hold on me as he sensed the change in my body. “What’s wrong?” he asked with a furrow. I was still reeling from what that man just said to me about Sara. What did he mean? “Dear Sara couldn’t hold her tears from coming down when she saw you dancing with her son in law. She was probably feeling sad because of how affectionate both of you danced. I guess she missed her daughter so much she couldn’t watch you two dancing anymore, she took off for the bathroom. My guy snatched her right away. She is somewhere safe. And she will remain that way if you do exactly what I tell you. And I mean exactly. If you evade my orders by even a letter, Sara will die in one mind link from me to my guy” Another song started playing and all around us, people started dancing. I gripped the back of the alpha’s neck as I felt dizzy from the horrible turn this day ha
Ella’s POVHe looked exactly the same as the last time I saw him in my old pack. Same cold smile, same disgusted look. The only difference was that he was wearing a suit to blend in with the guests.“You little girl, are so lucky. You keep surviving. You survived alpha Grey and beta Sam back when you were their slave. You survived alpha Klaus after he figured out who your father was. You survived a god damn knife to your chest!” he said in wonder as he approached me slowly.I take small steps back to keep him from initiating a fight.Not yet, I said to myself. I need him to keep talking as much as possible. Because once the fight begins, I won’t last long. I need to keep buying time long enough for Joseph to find Sara.I tried to keep my voice steady as I said to him “Why are you so keen on killing me? I don’t understand. I told you that I don’t know anything other than what I already said. Why go to all th
Klaus’s POV I climb the stairs three at a time, trying to reach the roof before Ella dies. When she told me where she was, I heard the agony in her voice. She was hurt real bad I could almost feel it. I begged her to keep fighting until I reached her. The last time I begged someone, was when I begged Kate to stay with me while I was holding her dead body in my arms. I was terrified out of my mind that history was about to repeat itself with Sara and Ella. At least one of them was safe now, thank goodness. I race towards the roof in blinding speed while the thought of losing Ella almost tears me apart. I can’t handle it. She can’t die, she can’t. I reach the roof and bust the door off its hinges. My eyes find them instantly. She was trying to run away from him but he got a hold of her hair and yanked her back towards him. The second he heard me, he turned around with Ella. She was trapped, his arm around her neck, while his other arm was on the top of her head. He was holding her
Klaus’s POV I burn a hole through the floor as I pace back and forth in front of the room Ella was being treated in. Something was wrong with Sara, but Joseph wouldn’t tell me anything until we were face to face. I was repeating the same prayer over and over again. Please, goddess let her be okay, I cannot bear to lose someone else. “Klaus” Joseph said as he reached for me. “What happened? Tell me that she’s okay. Tell me that she’s alive, please Joseph” I pleaded while holding him tightly. “She’s alive. She’s still in surgery, the doctors didn’t finish yet. But she will live my son. She will be fine. We just have to wait” he said in assurance. “What happened? You told me she was fine” “You needed to save Ella, I didn’t want you to be distracted and waste time on explaining what happened. How is Ella?” he asks in concern. “She’s injured, I don’t know the extent though, they just took her inside. She had a deep wound on the side of her head and probably a broken arm, these were
Ella’s POV I’m stuck on the roof with that man. I was on the ground, bleeding and whimpering in pain, while he looks down on me with disgust and repulsion. “Are you still waiting for someone to come save you, little girl?” he asks in a mocking tone. I look at him in hatred and keep my mouth shut. Someone will come, someone will save me. He crouches and leans closer to my face as he whispers with a smile “No one cares about you Ella. Do you want me to prove it to you? Let’s stay here until the sun comes down. That is a solid thirty minutes. No one will come through those doors. Not even if we stay all night” I grit my teeth and try to grab him, but he stands up and backs away from me. He leans against the cement structure, by the door, with his hands in his pocket as he whistles an annoying tone. I stay huddled on the ground repeating to myself over and over. someone will come, someone will save me. Darkness ascends and nothing happens, no one comes. He laughs an evil loud la
Ella’s POV I gasped as I looked at him in surprise. Did I hear him right? He just asked me to marry him, didn’t he? I stare at him with my mouth open like an idiot, unable to form any response. It was just too damn unexpected. He clears his throat and says “If you haven’t changed your mind about your offer, I’d like to take you up on it. You can totally say no. I will not hold it against you” “What made you change your mind?” I asked before giving him my answer. He lets go of my hand and turns his head from me as if he doesn’t want me to see his expression, and stares at the window for a while. “I realized that you were right, you are the perfect person for this. You understand that I don’t really want to be intimate, that I am only doing this because of my duty to the pack. I will not find anyone willing to do this, to be married to me but not really. Just on paper, and just in front of the pack. You get it, while no one else will” he said firmly. A lump formed in my throat at
Ella’s POV“Good morning Ella, are you awake?”I open my eyes to the sound of alpha Klaus in my head.I check my phone and find it 9:07 a.m.I over slept again. It wasn’t really a big deal since today was Sunday, my only day off from studying and training.After alpha Klaus left last night, I tossed and turned for a long time, but sleep wouldn’t come again.Although my body and my mind were both exhausted, but my mind refused to shut up and stop thinking.I stayed awake until dawn trying to wrap my head around my decision. It wasn’t an easy one. In fact, it was the hardest most unpredictable decision I have ever made so far.There was no guarantee that I will not end up regretting it deeply.Alpha Klaus promised that he will do everything he can to make this work for both of us. When the hell did I become so trusting? Why should I believe that he will keep his promise?The old E
Ella’s POV I was frozen at first. My arms still wrapped around myself. He was a lot taller than me, I barely reached his chest. A few minutes ago he was angry, speaking coldly to me, and now he is hugging me fiercely. Goddess, his personality is so complicated! Despite the fact that I was furious with him, I couldn’t deny that the hug made my whole body tingle. It was the first time I felt something like this when being hugged. I felt my sobs disappear and my body relax, as I leaned my head to his chest and listened to his steady strong heart beat. He didn’t say anything, he just kept embracing me tightly. I loosened my hold around myself, and slowly, uncertainly, started to wrap my arms around his huge body. It almost made me feel like I was hugging an untamed animal that will turn on me any second. I was still doubting him, doubting his true intentions, even doubting my own feelings for him. The hug confused and comforted me at the same time. We stayed like this for a few minu