Suzan, 11, is trick-or-treating with her friends when Simon dares them to visit the haunted witch’s cabin. Although she’s scared, Suzan refuses to go with them and heads home. Later, she learns from her friends that after they knocked on the door, a window shattered, and they ran in fear. Later, Suzan returns home, only to be comforted by her mom after losing her candy. At home, Suzan is comforted by her mom after losing her candy. However, strange whispers and scratching sounds soon disturb her. When her brother Luke checks, he reassures her, but the noises return, and Suzan spots glowing eyes in her closet. The figure grabs her by the hair, draining her life force before dragging her out the window, leaving her family helpless.
Lihat lebih banyakSuzan’s POV
"After an exciting night of trick-or-treating with my brother's best friends—Jack, Beth, and Simon—I was ready to head home. As I rummaged through my bag for a piece of candy, hoping to savor the last moments of the night, Simon’s voice cut through the cool air like a blade, sending a chill down my spine."
“Hey, what do you say we visit the witch’s cabin?” he asked, flashing that mischievous grin I hated. “I heard she’s more active on Halloween. If you knock three times on her front door and one of her windows shatters, that means she’s home. Wouldn’t that make tonight way more interesting?”
My blood ran cold at the mention of the cabin. I was only eleven, and the rumors about that house had been enough to make my nightmares feel real.
“I think we should just head home. It’s getting late,” I replied, trying to keep my voice steady.
Simon scoffed, rolling his eyes. “Oh, come on, Suzan. You’re such a buzzkill. People have gone there before, and nothing happened. We’re just going to check it out. What’s the worst that could happen?”
“But what if something does happen? I’m just a kid! I came out here to collect candy and go home, not get caught up in some stupid dare.”
Simon smirked, ignoring my fear. “I guarantee nothing will happen. And if it does, we’ll leave. Simple as that.”
“Simon, I said no.” I stood firm, but my stomach churned with dread. “You guys can go ahead. I’m going home.”
Before I could turn away, Simon yanked my candy bag from my hand, his fingers cruelly tight around the strap.
“I bet you’d do it for candy. We came out here to help you trick-or-treat because you were too chicken to go alone, and your brother was too embarrassed to take you. And this is how you pay us back? You’re such a wimp.”
“I’m not a wimp, and I don’t need your stupid candy!” I shouted, my voice cracking with frustration. Blinking back tears, I turned and ran down the street, my feet pounding against the pavement. By the time I reached home, my chest ached from holding in sobs. I wiped my face quickly as I saw my mom on the porch, happily passing out candy to trick-or-treaters.
As I stepped onto the porch, my mom turned to me with a warm smile. “You okay, sweetie?” she asked, her voice full of concern as she handed out the last pieces of candy to a group of excited kids.
I nodded, quickly wiping my eyes. “Yeah, I’m fine,” I lied, forcing a smile. But deep down, my stomach was still in knots. I didn’t want to deal with Jack, Beth, and Simon anymore. I hated how they made me feel small, like I was nothing but a burden. Why couldn’t they just leave me alone?
I sat on the porch, the tears threatening to spill again. My mom noticed me right away and walked over with concern in her eyes. “Hey, honey, what’s wrong?” she asked, sitting down next to me.
I tried to force a smile, but it felt like a lie. “I lost your bag,” I whispered, my voice trembling.
She placed a gentle hand on my shoulder. “Aww! That’s okay. I can stitch you another one,” she said, her voice soothing, as if that would make everything better.
“I also lost all my candy,” I mumbled, the weight of the night hitting me all at once.
She paused, looking at me with softness in her eyes. “Hmm, how about we go get more candy? We’re running low anyway, and while we’re at it, you can pick out whatever you want.” She slowly wiped the tears from my face with her sleeve, her touch tender and warm. Holding my hand, she smiled at me. “Come on, let’s go.”
With her by my side, I felt a little lighter, and together, we walked to the store.
As we walked to the store, the cool night air helped clear my head, but the knot in my stomach still lingered. My mom squeezed my hand, and I leaned into her, feeling a sense of comfort in her presence. She didn’t rush me to talk, but I knew she was waiting for me to open up when I was ready.
When we arrived at the store, the bright lights and shelves stocked with candy seemed to lift my spirits a little. My mom led me to the candy aisle, and I hesitated for a moment, unsure of what to pick.
“Anything you want, honey,” she said, her voice light, like this was just another fun trip. “You’ve had a tough night.”
I nodded, still feeling a little overwhelmed, but something about the colorful wrappers and familiar candy made the tension inside me ease, if only for a moment. I started picking out a few favorites—gummy bears, chocolate bars, and lollipops. It felt good to have the freedom to choose without any judgment or pressure.
My mom grabbed a bag of caramel candies and smiled at me. “I think I’ll treat myself too. I’ve earned it,” she joked, and for the first time that night, I actually chuckled.
After we’d gathered everything we wanted, we made our way to the checkout. As we waited in line, my mom noticed the other kids in the store, all their faces lit up with excitement after their trick-or-treating adventures. She gave me a soft smile.
“Hey,” she said, “you know, you don’t need anyone else’s approval to enjoy Halloween. You’re special just the way you are.”
I looked up at her, feeling a little more at peace. “Thanks, Mom,” I murmured. “I just... I don’t know why they treat me like that. I didn’t ask for any of it.”
“I know, sweetheart. Some people don’t realize how important kindness is. But don’t ever forget that you’re enough.”
As we left the store and walked back home, the weight in my chest seemed a little lighter. Maybe it wasn’t just the candy, or the fact that I didn’t have to face Simon and the others tonight. Maybe it was just the simple comfort of knowing I wasn’t alone.
Jack's POVI grabbed Beth’s hand, pulling her toward the stairs, every muscle in my body screaming in pain. We were almost there. Almost free. The front door loomed ahead, a promise of escape. We stumbled forward, our breaths ragged, our bodies barely holding together.Then, just as we were about to step through, Beth was yanked from my grasp."Beth!" I screamed, whirling around.She was there—held aloft by the hair, her feet dangling inches above the ground. The witch stood behind her, grinning, her hollow eyes locked onto mine. Beth thrashed, clawing at the iron grip around her scalp, but it was useless.My stomach lurched as the witch’s jaw unhinged unnaturally wide, her rotten teeth bared, aiming for Beth’s neck."Wait, wait! Please wait!" I cried, desperation clawing at my throat. "Don’t do this—take me instead! Please, take me!"Tears blurred my vision as I stared into the witch’s dead, soulless eyes. My hands trembled at my sides. I would do anything, anything, to keep Beth ali
Jack's POVI didn’t hesitate—I rushed to Beth’s side, wrapping an arm around her to help her up. She was weak, her body trembling from exhaustion and shock. We limped toward the front door, each step agonizing, but all I could think about was getting us both out of this hellhole.Just as we reached the threshold, Beth suddenly stopped, gripping my arm tightly. “We can’t leave,” she whispered, her voice barely audible over our labored breathing.I turned to her, my brows furrowing in disbelief. “Beth, we need to get out of here before—”“We have to find Suzan,” she interrupted, her eyes filled with desperate determination.I swallowed hard, every instinct screaming at me to run, to take Beth and escape before something else went wrong. But the way she looked at me, that unshakable resolve—it made me pause.“I know what you’re going to say,” Beth continued, her fingers digging into my arm as if to anchor herself, “but we can’t let my brother’s sacrifice be in vain.”My jaw clenched, tor
Jack's POVThe witch’s movements were swift and unyielding as she tossed Simon’s limp body onto the cold stone table in the center of the room. His body hit the surface with a sickening thud, and I could barely breathe as she stood over him, methodically picking up the gleaming axe. The metal reflected dimly in the low light, and a chill ran through me. I was powerless, trapped in place by the witch’s dark magic, my body frozen in fear.Simon stirred weakly, his eyes wide with terror as he realized what was about to happen. His chest rose and fell in rapid breaths, but his limbs wouldn’t obey him. He tried to speak, but no words came out—only a faint whimper. My throat tightened, and my heart began to pound as I watched the witch raise the axe above her head.“Simon!” I tried to scream, but my voice was lost in the suffocating silence. My chest felt like it was caving in, every second dragging on forever.With a swift motion, the witch brought the axe down, slicing through Simon’s bod
Jack's POVThe stench of rot and decaying flesh contaminated the air, thick and suffocating. My body was frozen, unable to move, as the reality of our situation set in. The only thing I could do was silently cry, my throat tight with fear and helplessness.I watched in horror as the witch paced around the room, her long, twisted fingers tracing the air like she was savouring the moment. She moved between us, one by one, sampling our blood. Each cut she made, each drop she tasted, was a reminder of our helplessness.But then something shifted inside me. I realized, with a sickening jolt, that I was still capable of feeling pain. That shouldn’t have been possible. My body felt numb, my limbs unresponsive, but the searing sting of my palm being sliced open reminded me that I was still alive, still here, still trapped.The pain was unbearable, and I couldn’t help but whimper, unable to stop myself. But it didn’t matter. The witch’s gaze never left me as she grinned, her smile impossibly w
Luke's POVI watched as Jack, Beth, and Simon rode off into the forest, their figures disappearing into the distance. A knot tightened in my stomach as the reality hit me: I had to find my sister, and I wouldn’t stop until I did. I had no idea what I was walking into, but I knew one thing for sure—I couldn’t just sit back and wait for someone else to find her. I had to act.I pulled out my phone and dialed Adam. The phone rang a few times before he picked up, his voice casual as he greeted me."Hey, you changed your mind already?" Adam chuckled, but I could hear the hesitation in his tone.I took a deep breath, trying to steady my nerves. "No, actually, I need your help with something," I said, my voice firm. "I need to know where I can find the witch's cabin."There was a pause on the other end. I could almost feel Adam's brow furrow through the phone. "The witch's cabin? Luke, what are you—""Just tell me where it is," I interrupted, the urgency in my voice clear. "I don't have time
Luke's POVMorning had arrived, but the wind still howled through the streets as I stood beneath a flickering streetlamp, pressing yet another flyer into a passerby’s hand.“Suzan’s missing,” I murmured, my gaze falling to my sister’s face on the paper. I had been out here for hours, handing them out, clinging to hope—desperate for anything. But no one knew a damn thing.I was startled by the sound of my best friend, Jack."Yo, Luke! You good?" he called out, rolling up beside me on his bike.I barely registered his voice at first. My grip on the flyers tightened, my fingers crumpling the edges as I exhaled shakily. The distress written all over my face must’ve been obvious because Jack’s expression shifted from casual concern to something more serious.“You okay, man? You look like you’ve seen a ghost.”I hesitated, my grip tightening on the flyers in my hands. My eyes darted around, scanning the area as if making sure no one else was listening. Then, without a word, I handed Jack on
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