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Finding the sweet spot for a novel’s length often feels like tuning a guitar: tighten a string, step back, listen, repeat.
I’ve wrestled with manuscripts that begged for room to breathe and with others that were padded just to hit a perceived sweet number. Editors lean on a mix of practical signals and intuition: genre expectations (YA often wants 50–90k, commercial fantasy leans 90–150k but epic fantasy can go higher), comparable titles, pacing and momentum, and the story’s own demands. If a plot breathes better across fewer chapters, trimming wins; if character arcs need space to unfold, expansion is okay. Production realities matter too — printing costs, retail positioning, and ebook discoverability nudge decisions in the background.
The process itself is collaborative. I like to map the manuscript against its emotional beats: where does tension rise and fall, and do chapters reinforce that rhythm? Then there’s the art of surgical edits—cutting scenes that don’t move the plot or deepen character, collapsing redundant chapters, and sometimes asking the author to add a scene that clarifies motivation. Beta readers and early sales comps help validate choices. I’ve seen slim novels feel monumentally complete and doorstoppers that deserved every page; it’s less about hitting an exact word count and more about honoring pacing, clarity, and the reader’s journey. In the end, I root for clarity and resonance over arbitrary numbers, and I’m happiest when a manuscript feels inevitable at its given length.
Trimming or expanding a manuscript is often an emotional balancing act for me. I want the book to be true to its heart while also fitting the practical expectations of readers and industry readers. To reconcile those, I practice what I call compassionate editing: I respect the parts the author loves but test each one for function—does this scene change a character, raise a new stake, or reveal essential information? If not, it becomes a candidate for cutting or repurposing.
I also lean on examples to convince myself: looking at 'The Catcher in the Rye' for tight, voice-driven brevity or 'The Lord of the Rings' for sprawling, purposeful scope helps me realize the book’s ambitions. Sometimes the happy medium is simply accepting that the manuscript wants to be a novella or an epic and marketing accordingly. Ultimately, I try to steer the work so it feels inevitable—like the length is the right outfit for the story—and when that happens I feel satisfied and a little proud.
My feeling is that editors hunt for balance with a mix of rules of thumb and a lot of careful listening. I usually start by asking: who is this book for, and what do comparable titles do? Genre and market set an initial target, but the manuscript’s internal logic decides the rest — tight plotting will favor compression, character-driven novels sometimes demand extra pages to luxuriate in detail.
Practically, editors use chapter pacing maps, beta reader reports, and a ruthless look at each scene’s function. They’ll cut repetition, combine similar scenes, or suggest trimming side plots that dilute the main arc. Sometimes a chapter gets moved, not deleted; sometimes the fix is to add a brief scene that clarifies motivation so other parts can be removed without loss.
I’ve seen gorgeous long books like 'The Goldfinch' and sprawling classics such as 'War and Peace' succeed because their length is earned; that’s the test I return to: does every page justify itself? If yes, let it be long; if no, make it lean — that’s where the happy medium usually sits for me.
Working backward has become a favorite technique for me: I look at the finished feeling I want—does the ending resonate as tragic, triumphant, or bittersweet?—and then check each preceding section for contributions to that emotion. If a subplot hasn’t pulled its weight by the third act, I either excise it early or weave it tighter into the main arc so it earns its pages. That retrospective approach often reveals unnecessary detours that bloat length.
I also negotiate with hard choices. Sometimes authors are attached to scenes for good reason—character-building or world color—but I ask whether the same effect could be achieved with fewer words or through a different scene placement. Other times, trimming comes from technical edits: cutting adverbs, choosing stronger verbs, collapsing repetitive internal monologues. On the flip side, expansions are sanctioned if they clarify cause and effect or deepen emotional stakes.
Practical tools help too: a chapter-by-chapter spreadsheet, flagged sections from beta readers, and a running list of ‘must-keep’ moments versus ‘nice-to-have’ moments. Those tools make the process less subjective and more manageable, and I find the right balance by being ruthless about clarity and generous about character truth.
Numbers are useful: knowing typical word counts for genres gives me a starting point, but I never let a metric be the boss. I scan for structural problems first—repetition, unclear stakes, or characters who don’t change—and those problems usually explain why a manuscript is too long or too short.
Sometimes the fix is surgical: combine two scenes that repeat the same argument, or cut an info-dump and reveal details through action. Other times it’s generous—add a scene that deepens a relationship so later choices land emotionally. I also think about pacing tricks, like breaking long chapters into shorter ones or varying sentence length to speed up or slow down moments. In the end, the right length is whatever helps the story land on the reader, and that’s a feeling I chase with edits and beta feedback.
Finding the sweet spot for a novel's length feels like tuning an old radio until the static clears and the music comes through. I start by listening closely to the story itself: what scenes are essential, which subplots actually advance character or theme, and where the pacing wants to breathe. If a chapter lingers without adding new stakes or insight, I either cut it or turn it into a short piece that lives elsewhere. I think of examples like 'The Hobbit' versus denser epics—both work because every word serves a purpose.
Beyond the manuscript, I pay attention to the marketplace and reader expectations—genre norms, comparable titles, and what agents or editors tend to accept. That matters, but it’s secondary to whether the book already feels whole. When trimming, I look for redundancy, passive constructions, and over-explained beats; when expanding, I ask where emotional stakes need deepening or where motivations could be clearer.
Negotiation is part craft, part diplomacy: suggesting cuts or additions gently, explaining why a scene helps or harms, and trusting the author’s voice. I love that moment when a manuscript finally breathes right and the length feels inevitable rather than engineered, because that’s when the story truly sings.
I usually approach length with practical checks that keep me from overthinking. First, I compare the draft to genre expectations—YA often sits around 60k–80k, mainstream fiction can flex a lot, and epic fantasy commonly runs longer, sometimes beyond 120k. Those numbers aren’t rules, they’re signals. Second, I map the plot beats: if the midpoint climax feels rushed, the book might need more pages; if the middle sags, there’s likely filler to remove.
Next, I involve beta readers as reality checks. If multiple readers flag pacing issues at the same place, that’s a clear spot for revision. Line-level trimming—cutting repeated ideas, tightening dialogue tags, and consolidating scenes—shaves a lot without hurting voice. Conversely, adding a scene is justified when it deepens motivation or clarifies causality.
I also think about reader attention: chapter length, hooks at chapter ends, and the rhythm of scene changes can make the same word count feel brisk or glacial. It’s a mix of respect for the story and respect for the reader, and I end up choosing what feels truest to both.
Picture a shelf stuffed with different novels — lean thrillers shoulder-to-shoulder with lush, slow-burning literary works — and you get why editors can’t use one rule for length.
I tend to break the decision into three quick checkpoints: market fit (who’s the reader and what do similar sellers look like), story mechanics (does every scene push the plot or deepen character?), and physical constraints (print cost, target format). For example, a cozy mystery can usually stay tight in 70–90k, while a sprawling historical saga might need 120k or more. But those are guides not law. I work with authors to identify bloat — scenes that read like exposition or detours that stall momentum — and suggest options: compress, cut, or move to an appendix or short story. Sometimes the solution is structural: split a cumbersome book into two volumes, or trim one arc to keep a tighter focus.
Another tool I lean on is reader testing. Small groups of trusted readers can flag where attention drifts; charting chapter-by-chapter engagement gives a clear view of dead zones. Also, good editorial notes explain why a cut benefits the story, which makes getting buy-in easier. Ultimately, the happy medium is a negotiated space where market sense, storytelling integrity, and practical production meet, and I usually end up defending whatever length lets the story breathe best.