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It bothered me that all the dominant men in this pack passed around the submissives. " Leave us, " I said tapping my foot. " I'll be back Mr. Hart, " the submissive says touching his bulge. She walked away extra sassy making sure to shake her ass just to make Luke want more and I could tell , by his eyes, it was working. " So, what's up, man, " Luke asked shoving his hands into his pockets of his tailored suit. " I found this girl last night--" " Was it your mate? " Luke interuppts.

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After a typical workday, Jane felt like she aged ten years worth, just in a day. "Your Managing director didn't think this through " Niklaus informed as he walked out of the conference. He turned around to face the men that seemed like they were about to be swallowed by the ground. " Maybe your team should stay awake one more night revising it" No one complained and they all nodded in acceptance. Niklaus' eyes landed on the shrunk rabbit behind a bunch of men. Before calling her he soothed his tone to accommodate her. "Walker come here"

he whispered. “OK,” I responded quietly. Kadeer gave my body a gentle squeeze before we both fell into a comfortable slumber. Ж The constant buzzing of Kadeer’s phone and his ringing doorbell interrupted my sex-induced slumber. Kadeer was a heavy sleeper, so I had to prod him a few times to wake him up. He groaned in frustration when he picked up the phone. He had an iPhone Max, so I could also see Skylar’s name on the large screen.

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Kev and Sam had to take over the usual pack work while Justin and I slogged through the mess left by the inspector. Grabbing my pen, I leaned over my desk and got started cross-referencing the infraction with the law and then marking what we needed to do to change it. Move the light switches up an inch? Yup. Certain rooms had a color that was illegal in our state? Mark the rooms and change the paint. It went on and on and on. A knock on my door pulled me out of my focus. Mom was leaning into my doorway, looking a little worried. “Hey Mom, what’s up?”

"I can if you help me. I see you're strong. If I distract them then you can-" "Stop." Beef interrupted. She stood up and shakily walked over to Hope and I, stepping on the others that stood in her way. A few hissed out in pain as she trampled them but none protested against this intimidating female. She leaned down and pulled at Hope's torn shirt and pulled her close till their noses nearly touched. "If you don't shut your mouth right now-"

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