The Path Of Writing
I understand that you want to set their emotion of longing for a change before you present the change, but this voids your chapter one, and gives your story a slow pace.
I'm not saying that it would never ever work in a million years, but why use the readers' patience when you can lure them in with more effective content?
Let's end with an example:
We have a contest on, so let's use one of the themes. Here is the contest if you don't know about it yet (https://www.goodnovel.com/contests/remorse-revenge-redemption) and participate!
I'm asked a lot about the third theme (rejection), so let's look at this one.
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