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I hope you enjoy reading!
im so excited because this is my first vampire book. As a writer, I would like to people think
of my book, I need feedbacks.
I am only human,I have flaws and there's no such thing as perfect well except God,so please let me know what's I'm doing wrong but I'm a sensible way nor rudely. I won't allow anyone disrespect me all in the name of point out my flaws.This book is a work of fiction. To all my vampire fans,this is the right book for you to feast on. That said, let's dive in!
Ava and Aiden were talking in their room."I don't know how I would have been if you didn't come into my life Ava"
"Good day Aiden,Ava," Lord Jack bowed."Your grace," Lady Mary greeted.
"I would never get rid of my own child...""Listen. We should never underestimate the powers of a witch." Alizon groaned.
***A week after Aiden and Ava's wedding ceremony"It's a baby girl" The Vampire doctor said giving Ava her child.
"Ava,no," Vador shouted "She can't die on me just like this. Never,"he said carrying Ava to his room."Vador,are you okay?" Addison asked appearing in the room with Emma.
"Vador is in danger,I can feel it,Teleport us back to the royal house"
Peeping from her room,Ava saw lady Mary kiss Vador."We're going to have a nice time living together," lady Mary said loudly knowing Ava was watching them.
"Hey lil damsel," Vador said dropping a bag of blood with a Pepsi drink on the bed.Yes! Vampires drink Pepsi too"How's your body now?"
"You really messed up Aiden," Avan sighed.
"I know you're dying to be mine," Vador said making Ava freeze completely after opening the door.







