LOGINIn the days that followed, I told myself the yard had been an aberration.
Hawthorne Castle had a way of swallowing moments whole. Work piled atop work until memory thinned beneath it, until even things that unsettled me lost their sharpness. I believed, then, that routine was stronger than a glance — that stone and labor and habit would press the strange feeling flat and leave nothing behind.
I was wrong.
The castle resumed its demands without pause. Floors were swept, linens folded, messages carried from one end of the keep to the other. I moved where I was sent, as I always had, my feet knowing the turn of each corridor before my thoughts caught up. Years of work had carved the paths into me — where the floor dipped near the west stair, which door groaned if opened too quickly, how to pass through the great hall without drawing a glance.
My body walked while my mind wandered.
I did not seek him out.
Nor, I told myself, did he seek me.
It was in the east gallery that our paths crossed again — a place of long windows and pale light, overlooking the inner courtyard where the noise of the castle softened into echo. I had been sent there with cloths and polish, my basket tucked against my hip. I reached the gallery without once looking up, my hands already planning the work, my steps slowing only when instinct warned me I was no longer alone.
I sensed him before I saw him.
Not as before, when his presence had been distant and untouchable, but close enough that the air itself seemed altered by it. I stopped without thinking, as though my body recognized him faster than my mind dared to.
He stood near the windows, turned partly away, dark coat unadorned and open at the throat. There was no armor this time, no blade in his hand, yet the authority I had noticed in the yard clung to him still — not worn, but carried.
I curtsied at once. “Your Highness.”
He turned fully then, and the distance between us shortened to something unavoidable.
Up close, the things I had not allowed myself to consider before became impossible to ignore. His eyes, for one — darker than I had thought, a deep, steady blue that held the light rather than reflecting it. And his scent — clean wool and leather, with something sharper beneath it, like steel warmed by the hand. It lingered in the narrow space between us, subtle but inescapable.
“You’re the maid from the yard,” he said.
“Yes, Your Highness.”
He studied me for a moment, expression unreadable. The pause stretched — not long enough to be improper, but long enough for awareness to settle where it should not. I stood still, basket pressed to my hip, my body rigid with habit even as my thoughts betrayed me, cataloguing details I would later pretend not to remember.
“You brought the water,” he continued. “I noticed.”
“I was sent,” I replied. It was safer to keep my answers simple.
Another pause.
“I don’t know your name.”
The question caught me off guard — not because he asked it, but because he waited. Because his gaze did not drift away while he did.
“Edith,” I said. “Your Highness.”
“Edith,” he repeated, quietly.
Hearing it from him made it feel suddenly heavier, as though the name belonged to something more solid than myself.
For a moment, neither of us spoke. The gallery seemed narrower than it had been when I entered, the space between us marked now not only by rank but by proximity — by breath, by warmth, by the quiet knowledge that I was standing closer to him than necessity required.
“You may go on with your work,” he said at last.
“Yes, Your Highness.”
I stepped past him then, my body moving on instinct alone. My sleeve brushed the edge of his coat — brief, accidental, nothing that could be remarked upon — yet the contact lingered far longer than it should have.
I did not look back.
The windows were cleaned as they always were, my hands moving in steady, practiced circles. My thoughts did not follow. They lingered instead on things that had no place in my work: the exact shade of his eyes, darker than the banners bore; the scent that clung faintly to the air even after he moved away; the way his voice had sounded when he spoke my name, as though he had weighed it before releasing it.
When I finished and gathered my things, the gallery was empty.
I walked the familiar routes back to the lower halls without conscious thought, my feet carrying me through turns and passages I could have navigated blind. Only later did I realize how little of the journey I remembered.
Before, he had been a presence — distant, almost unreal.
Now he was a man with eyes I could name, a voice I could recall, a nearness my body had registered even when my mind insisted it should not.
That night, as I lay in the servants’ quarters with exhaustion pressing heavily behind my eyes, I understood that whatever had begun in the yard had not ended there.
It had taken shape.
And shapes, once formed, are far more difficult to forget.
There are places in Hawthorne Castle that exist only if you already know they are there.Passages worn thin by centuries of servants’ feet. Narrow doors disguised as paneling. Stairwells that lead nowhere unless you turn at the correct landing and press your palm to stone polished smooth by repetition. I had known them all since I was a girl small enough to slip beneath carts and bannisters, since the castle had taught me its body the way a mother teaches her child the shape of her hands.It was why I was not looking where I walked when I heard his voice behind me.“Edith.”He did not call out. He never did. The prince spoke my name the way one might test the weight of a word before deciding whether it belonged in the world.I stopped anyway.The corridor I stood in was dim, tucked between the eastern wing and the old solar that had not been used since the queen’s death. Dust softened the tapestries here; the air smelled faintly of stone and dried lavender. I should have turned at onc
It did not happen all at once.That would have been easier to name, easier to condemn.Instead, it unfolded the way rot does beneath silk—slow, quiet, almost tender in its deceit.After our first exchange, I began to see the prince everywhere. Or perhaps, more truthfully, he began to see me.He would appear in corridors I had just finished polishing, pause beneath archways as I passed with linens in my arms, linger at the edges of rooms where I had no business noticing him. At first, I told myself it was a coincidence. Hawthorne Castle was vast, yes—but it was also a place of habits, and mine had been carved into its stones over years of service. If anyone could predict where I would be, it was someone who paid attention.And Roman Davenport paid attention.Each encounter carried the same careful courtesy. He never blocked my path. Never raised his voice. Never spoke to me as though I were less than I was—nor, disturbingly, as though I were only what I was. He asked questions instead.
The day began as most days did — with cold stone underfoot and the familiar ache in my hands before the sun had properly climbed the sky.Mistress Hale had me in the scullery first, hauling buckets and scrubbing the soot from last night’s pots until the water turned black and my fingers stung from lye. When the cook clapped her hands and declared the hearth was hungry again, I was sent to fetch kindling from the lower stores. When the pantry boy dropped a sack of grain and split it open like a careless wound, I was made to sweep every last kernel from the corners as though my life depended on it.In truth, it often did.A general maid does not belong to one hall or one household. I belonged to need. To the next voice calling from the next doorway. To the endless list of tasks that kept the castle clean and running while noblefolk slept and argued and prayed and feasted above our heads.By midmorning, I was given the basket and told to take it to the seamstress — thread, needles, a str
In the days that followed, I told myself the yard had been an aberration.Hawthorne Castle had a way of swallowing moments whole. Work piled atop work until memory thinned beneath it, until even things that unsettled me lost their sharpness. I believed, then, that routine was stronger than a glance — that stone and labor and habit would press the strange feeling flat and leave nothing behind.I was wrong.The castle resumed its demands without pause. Floors were swept, linens folded, messages carried from one end of the keep to the other. I moved where I was sent, as I always had, my feet knowing the turn of each corridor before my thoughts caught up. Years of work had carved the paths into me — where the floor dipped near the west stair, which door groaned if opened too quickly, how to pass through the great hall without drawing a glance.My body walked while my mind wandered.I did not seek him out.Nor, I told myself, did he seek me.It was in the east gallery that our paths crosse
There was a rhythm to Hawthorne Castle that revealed itself only to those who served it.I did not understand it at first — only felt it in my bones. The bells rang for the nobility, but the stone woke us earlier, and more harshly. My days began before the sun had decided whether it would show its face at all: cold floors beneath bare soles, sleeves rolled before prayers were finished, the quiet understanding that slowness was not forgiven kindly here.I was a general maid, which meant I belonged nowhere and everywhere all at once. I scrubbed where I was told. I carried what was handed to me. I moved through halls built to forget me, through passages designed so that servants might pass unseen, unheard, and unremembered.At the time, I believed that was safety.The morning began as most mornings did — with work that left its mark. Buckets hauled from the well until my shoulders burned. Ash swept from the hearths before the cook’s temper could rise with the smoke. Trays carried, spills







