RORY’S POV
“Jason broke up with me?” The words came out in a choked whisper as I stared blankly at the text that was on my screen. From the corner of my eyes, I saw Rosalie peer over my shoulder with a snort. “What a coward! Who breaks up via text!” She said in irritation. I was frozen, re reading the words over and over again while letting humiliation wash over me repeatedly. My steady boyfriend of two years had just ended things with me and in his exact words, the reason was ‘Can’t do this anymore, Rory. This whole thing has gotten boring.’ My eyes blinked back the tears that were threatening to flow as my older sister gave me a pat on my shoulder and sat down at the table beside me. “Sorry about this, bun. He was a nerd loser anyway! I can beat at him, if you want?” She offered. “No please.” I said knowing that Rosalie can do anything. “Want to go out and celebrate later tonight?” She asked throwing a smile that died a second later when she got a hurt look from me. “I’m a nerd too and I just got dumped, Rosa. A week to the Halloween dance!” I said letting the phone drop on the table as another round of humiliation washed over me. “I’m sorry! That was very wrong of me!” Rosalie apologized putting her hand briefly on her chest before proceeding to bring her mug of coffee to her lips. “But I never liked that Jerk! He was such an arrogant piece of shit acting like he was smarter when everyone knows that no one is smarter than my sister.” Rosalie’s words did not make me feel better. “I liked him a lot.” I said my eyes dropping to my fingers. “You just liked him! Not love…. And now I think this is a good opportunity for you to finish high school with the one your heart desires. Besides, you’re both single at the same time, what are the odds?.” She said reaching across the table to give my hand a gentle squeeze. I groaned. “Can you not say that? Todd and I are just best friends. He doesn’t see me that way.” As if sensing being talked about, my phone beeped with a text. BESTIE - Good morning Candy, I’m out front. I sighed standing up with my school bag. “I’ll see you later, Rosa.” I murmured. “Come here.” My sister said standing up and placing a kiss on my forehead. “Have a great day my beautiful girl. Don’t think too much about this okay? You’re beautiful and he doesn’t deserve you.” I gave her a weak smile and headed out the house were Todd was waiting for me. One glance at him and my life was okay in that moment. Todd O’Connor my best friend is the perfect definition of a beautiful teenage heartthrob. He has Silky jet black hair, dreamy blue eyes and a well formed tall muscular body. He was leaned against his red cardilac and when he saw me, he flashed me his perfect dentition in a bright smile that made my heart flutter. However, his expression changed when I approached him. He held my wrists and pulled me closer with a fierce look in his eyes. His cologne filled my nostrils and I wanted to bask in it. “What’s wrong?” He demanded. I sighed. “Jason broke up with me.” I announced sadly and ashamed as I stared at my feet . “He did?” “Just this morning. Apparently I’m boring.” I said with a cracked voice that revealed I felt hurt. Todd’s fingers clenched in to a fist. “That bastard! I’ll show him!” He said through gritted teeth. “No.” I said sternly taking his big fist in my small hands. “Please, don’t do anything…. You can’t do anything.” I begged. “Fine.” Todd said too quickly with a grunt. “Promise.” I urged and he sighed. “I promise.” I could hear the reluctance in his voice but the promise was okay with me. “Are you okay?” He asked me brushing my cheek gently and sending refreshing waves through my body. “No. I feel embarrassed !” I said honestly. “Don’t be.” Todd said. “I’ve been dumped a thousand times!” I scoffed and rolled my eyes. Trust me, it’s not the same. “In fact, are we in sync or what?” He said as a teasing smile tugged at his lips. “Since Leslie broke up with me two days ago.” Leslie Williams is the hottest girl in our school, also captain of the cheerleading squad and my best friend, Todd’s on and off girlfriend. They have broken up at least a thousand times in two years. “And this time, I am certain we are done for good.” He said. I groaned. He always says that. “Look, Candy.” Todd says cupping my face in his hands as he bent over to meet my eyes. “Jason is an idiot! A total idiot! If he broke up with you, then he doesn’t deserve you.” His eyes dug deep in to mine and my heart fluttered in response. “Now come on in, Princess.” He opened the car door and ushered me in before getting round to the drivers side. As he drove me to school, his right hand reached for mine. He held my hand throughout the drive and I was just beginning to feel better. That was until we got to the parking lot and Jason was standing with a girl leaning on his body. They seemed pretty cozy and I felt my chest tighten as I sighted them. I was blinking back tears when I saw someone familiar headed for Jason and his cozy partner. Todd! With a gasp, I flew out of the car and rushed to Todd but by the time I got there, he had given Jason about three punches and sent him to the ground groaning. “Todd!” I screamed grabbing him from behind. “You’re a piece of shit!” He yelled at Jason before I pulled him away. “Todd! You promised me you won’t do anything to him!” I cried. Todd didn’t look a tiny bit remorseful. “Yes but eleven years ago, I made you my first promise, never to let anyone get away with hurting you!”The new morning arrived, stirring a mix of emotions within me. My first waking thought, a warm and welcome embrace, was of Todd, my new boyfriend. I wanted to scream it, shout it from the rooftops a thousand times over! Todd was finally mine, and he felt deeply for me, cared for me immensely. The thought alone sent shivers of pure joy through me.But a tiny, unsettling tug pulled at my chest. We had to keep our relationship quiet for now. As the warm water of my shower cascaded over me, I replayed the reasons in my mind. High schoolers. That was it. I knew all too well the cruel games high school kids played, how they could turn on each other with devastating precision. I couldn't bear the thought of them mocking me, their laughter echoing until our new love withered and died. Even worse, I dreaded the possibility of Todd regretting us, of their taunts pushing him away. And then there was Leslie. Her "evil eye" was a force to be reckoned with, and I knew, without a shadow of a doubt,
Have you ever held a balloon in your hand, buoyant and full, and watched someone deliberately, maliciously, prick it with a needle? It’s never happened to me before, but I can vividly imagine the sudden, disheartening deflation, the abrupt end to something so light and airy. That's exactly how I felt in that moment. My balloon was the peaceful, loving evening I'd just spent with Todd, an evening I wished could stretch into eternity. The way Todd had looked at me, his eyes overflowing with adoration, his words a soft symphony of affection – it was perfect. The sharp, unexpected needle was the rapping on Todd’s car window.My Dad.My heart leaped into my throat and then plummeted to my stomach. Shock coursed through me as I saw him, his face a mask of fury as he glared at Todd through the glass. I scrambled out of the car, practically tripping over my own feet in my haste.“Dad! When did you get back?” I blurted, rushing to his side, my voice a frantic whisper.He didn't budge. Not an
(TODD’S POV)This was supposed to be funny! I really thought it would be, but something in my chest was telling me it wasn't a joke to me anymore.I opened the box, revealing the beautiful diamond-shaped butterfly necklace resting inside. My plan was to chuckle and say, "It's not a proposal, Baby." But my throat went completely dry. I saw Rory’s eyes widen in fear, genuinely scared I was about to propose. Then, as her gaze landed on the shining jewelry in the box, a wave of relief washed over her face. And that's when I felt it—a sharp, unwelcome pang of jealousy."Is marrying me so bad? So scary?" I asked, my shoulders slumping. Yeah, I know. I sound like a total crybaby. But honestly, I didn’t care right then.Rory’s eyes widened a bit again, this time in surprise. "What?" she whispered, clearly caught off guard.I just shrugged, still holding the box open for her. "You looked so against marrying me," I muttered, my voice a little rougher than I intended.Rory leaned closer, inspec
(RORY'S POV)“Todd…..” I whispered in disbelief. My breath hitched in my throat and I could feel my body trembling. We were beneath a little hill and from where we were, I could see lights. Todd had gotten out of the car and he rushed around to my side.He opened the door and had his hand held out for me. I placed my hand in his shyly avoiding his admirable gaze as I stepped out of the car.I liked the way his hand grasped mine tightly as if to remind me that I was now his.I let him lead the way until we stopped. We were standing on a small, secluded hill overlooking the entire city. Below us, the lights twinkled like a scattered handful of diamonds on black velvet. But it wasn’t just the view that took my breath away. Todd had transformed this ordinary hill into a fairytale.Soft, warm fairy lights were strung between two ancient, gnarled trees, casting a gentle glow on a beautifully set table for two. A crisp white tablecloth draped elegantly, adorned with a delicate bouquet of
Sure, I can definitely make the chapter much longer and more detailed for you, focusing on the romantic tension and Todd's sweet, romantic nature. Here's a revised and expanded version:Rory and I had shared countless rides, our bikes side-by-side, the wind whipping through our hair as we chased sunsets. But tonight, in the cozy confines of my car, with the soft hum of the engine as our soundtrack, everything felt profoundly, beautifully different. It was a rare, once-in-a-lifetime kind of feeling, the sort I’d only dared to dream about in the quiet moments before sleep claimed me. And now, those dreams were real, tangible, sitting right beside me. She was my girlfriend, and I was her boyfriend. My girlfriend. The smartest, most beautiful, most captivating girl in the entire world. The thought alone sent a shiver of pure joy through me.I risked a quick glance at her, my heart doing a little flutter against my ribs. She was staring out the window, her profile silhouetted against the p
RORY’S POV"Isn't this a bit much?" I mumbled, fiddling with my fingers and biting my lip as I stared at my reflection in the full-length mirror. The elegant emerald silk A-line gown clung to my curves in a way that felt both daring and incredibly alluring. My hair was pulled up in a neat, perfect top bun, and the emerald earrings matched the pendant resting on my neck. Everything – the dress, the jewelry, even the pretty black purse and sandal heels – had been chosen by Todd. I'd never felt this excited about clothes before.Rosalie came to stand behind me, a proud smile on her face that I could see mirrored in the glass. "No, it's not too much, and it's perfect! You look absolutely stunning. As beautiful as the angel you are. Todd's a lucky guy."I smiled deeply, leaning back against her, resting the side of my head on her shoulder. "Thanks, Rosa," I sighed, a quiet happiness settling over me. We stood there for a moment, just breathing, before I broke the silence. "I don't know how