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The rain fell like needles that night, sharp and relentless, soaking the cracked sidewalks of Garden Metro’s bleakest district. Streetlights flickered above, dim halos casting ghostly shadows over alleyways where no decent soul wandered after dark. For most, the city was neon and shine, luxury and opulence. But for Elara Quinn, it had only ever known how to bruise.
She ran. Her thin school uniform clung to her like a second skin, the white blouse stained by both rainwater and blood. Her backpack had long since been discarded, ripped from her shoulders by the same hands that had shoved her into the alley behind the school gates. Voices still echoed behind her. Laughter. Cruel and crueler still. “Elara the freak!” “She probably loves getting slapped around!” “You should thank us—at least we noticed you!” Their taunts stabbed deeper than fists. But she didn’t look back. She couldn’t. If she stopped moving, her legs would collapse. Her mind was already shutting down, a protective freeze creeping in behind the ache in her ribs. Her lip was split. Her knee throbbed. The world spun slightly every few steps. But she kept going, pushing her way through the backstreets of Garden Metro, a city that never cried for girls like her. She didn’t realize where she was heading until she stumbled out into the old industrial district. The air here smelled like oil and cold steel. Abandoned warehouses loomed like rusting titans. It wasn’t safe. But neither was anywhere else. Her steps slowed as she neared a particular warehouse with a red-painted door. Something told her to turn around, but her body was numb. She leaned against the cold metal wall, trying to steady her breathing. And then she heard it. A voice. Low. Commanding. Male. “I said kneel.” She froze. Footsteps echoed from within the warehouse, followed by the heavy creak of a door opening. She was no longer alone. A man stepped into view, tall and broad-shouldered, wearing a long black coat that rippled in the wind. His face was half-hidden under the hood, but the air around him felt... different. Heavy. Dangerous. Elara’s heart kicked against her ribs. He looked directly at her. She tried to shrink into herself, but her body had no strength left. “Are you lost?” he asked, voice gravel over silk. She couldn’t answer. She didn’t trust her voice—or him. “You’re bleeding,” he said, frowning as he stepped closer. Elara stumbled back, slipping and landing hard on the wet pavement. Pain shot up her side. “D-Don’t come near me!” she gasped, her voice a weak croak. The man halted. “I’m not going to hurt you,” he said, crouching so his eyes were level with hers. “But you’re going to pass out if I don’t help.” She shook her head violently. “Please... just leave me alone.” Something flickered in his expression. Not annoyance. Not anger. Something else. Regret? Behind him, another man emerged from the warehouse, this one in a suit with a gun holstered openly at his side. He looked at her with a mix of suspicion and surprise. “Boss? Want me to call cleanup?” “Stand down, Marcus,” the man in the coat said without breaking eye contact with her. “She’s not a threat.” That word—boss—made her blood run cold. Oh God. She hadn’t just wandered into a warehouse. She’d wandered into his territory. Garden Metro whispered his name like a warning: Damien Vale. The mafia king of the underworld. Ruthless. Untouchable. His name was enough to silence entire rooms. And he was now crouched in front of her like some dark guardian. Elara’s breath came in shallow bursts. Her vision blurred. Fear and exhaustion warred inside her. Everything felt far away. Then everything went black.The city did not sleep.Garden Metro had known nights of violence, nights of curfews and sirens and whispered prayers behind locked doors. This was different. This was a city awake with itself—arguing, calculating, remembering.Lena watched it from the council hall balcony long after midnight.Below her, lanterns burned late in taverns and communal halls. Circles of people gathered on street corners, voices rising and falling as if the city were breathing through a thousand mouths. Some spoke in anger. Some in fear. Some in careful, quiet hope.Tomorrow, they would vote.And tonight, Garden Metro was deciding what kind of city it believed it was.Inside the council hall, the Stability Bloc worked just as hard.Reiss stood at the head of a private chamber borrowed from a merchant guild—wide oak table, polished cups, guards at the door. Around him sat the Bloc’s inner circle: councilors, supply-chain overseers, transport guild leaders, and a handful of figures who didn’t officially exis
Hi Everyone.I hope you are enjoying the second volume of the Who's The Loser Series.I will be taking the rest of the year off to celebrate the holiday season.Rest assured, I will be back at the new year to continue writing this book, among others.There will be more twists and turns along the way.And as always, your support, comments and feedback are always appreciated. Please leave a comment to let me know how I am doing with the story and how I can improve in the future.So until then, I wish you one and all a very blessed Christmas and a Happy New Year.Love,JDHWS
Morning did not bring calm. It brought reckoning.The plaza outside the council hall filled before sunrise, not because of announcements or posters, but because something deeper had shifted. Word of the northern refugees had spread through the night—how the gates had opened, how children had been carried inside instead of left to freeze, how Reiss had walked away with a smile sharp enough to cut.By the time Lena arrived, the square was already packed. Workers with soot-stained hands stood shoulder to shoulder with merchants in pressed coats. Mothers held children close. Guards lined the edges, not to intimidate, but to keep the mass from folding in on itself.No banners today. No slogans.Just waiting.Lena paused at the edge of the steps, taking in the crowd. This was not the angry noise of yesterday. This was something heavier—anticipation mixed with fear, the kind that came when people sensed a truth was coming whether they wanted it or not.Vincent stood beside her. Damien ling
The northern gate loomed like a wounded giant when Lena arrived—massive stone pillars casting long shadows across a scene on the verge of tearing itself apart.Shouts collided in the cold morning air. Torches blazed where there should have been lanterns. The smell of sweat and fear clung to everything.Hundreds—no, nearly a thousand—people crowded the road outside the gate. Families with carts stacked with blankets. Children clinging to parents’ sleeves. Elderly men leaning on cracked canes. Their faces were gaunt, hollowed by hunger and loss. They had marched for days, maybe weeks.Banners made of tattered cloth fluttered weakly above the crowd. Not political banners—signs of desperation.“HELP US.” “WE LOST OUR HOME.” “NO WATER, NO FOOD.”At the front of the line, Civic Guard officers formed a barricade—not with weapons drawn, but with shields locked together in a line meant to contain panic.Lena pushed her way through the growing tension, Vincent and Damien at her side.“Report,
The storm did not arrive all at once. It crept slowly—quiet like mold, patient like rust—slipping into the cracks of Garden Metro while the city pretended to debate futures it didn’t fully understand.A week. They had one week before the vote that would decide whether Lena Quinn remained Speaker.A week was an eternity for anger. A week was a heartbeat for disaster.By dawn of the second day, the city’s fractures became visible.The market square, which usually smelled of bread and smoke, now smelled of ink and damp paper. Merchants pasted Stability Bloc posters on their stalls between customers. Children tugged them down and tore them into confetti only for new ones to appear an hour later.At the tram junction, two men nearly came to blows—one shouting that Lena had saved them from invisible chains, the other insisting she’d doomed them all by destroying “the only damn thing that knew what was coming.”Meanwhile, at the river docks, fishermen argued over the rumors spreading like
The first posters went up overnight.They appeared on brick walls and lamp posts, pasted in corners where rain couldn’t reach, layered over old slogans from the war years. Lena saw one on her way to the council hall the next morning, the glue still damp, the ink sharp and dark.A stylized tower. A circle around it. Beneath, three words in bold, block letters:BRING BACK ORDERDamien ripped it down before she could touch it. “They’re everywhere,” he muttered, crumpling it in his fist. “Markets, tram stops, dock warehouses. Reiss has been busy.”“Or someone working for him,” Lena said, but the distinction felt thin. The message was the same.As they walked, she saw more. Variants. Some with slogans beneath the main line.NO MORE GAMBLING WITH OUR FUTURE WE CAN’T EAT PRINCIPLES QUINN BROKE THE MACHINE – WHO FIXES IT?A few had her face roughly sketched beneath the text. In some, the eyes were scratched out.Vincent met them at the council entrance, a folded leaflet in his hand.“New







