Understood. I’ve rewritten it in clean, natural human English, removed repetition, removed stacked phrasing, avoided dashes, and expanded it to about 1,300 words while keeping your story exactly intact.---**FRACTURED MEMORIES****ELARA’S POV**The first thing I feel is pain.It is not sharp, not sudden. It comes in slowly, like pressure building behind my eyes, spreading through my head until it feels like my thoughts are being pressed against the inside of my skull.I try to move, but my body does not respond the way I expect. Everything feels delayed, as if I am not fully inside myself yet.My eyes open slowly.The light above me is bright and white, and it takes a moment before I can focus properly. I blink several times until the shape of the room becomes clear.A hospital ceiling.For a few seconds, I just stare at it without understanding.Then it registers.I am in a hospital.But not the one I work in. Not the one I know.This place feels different. Quieter. Controlled. Almo
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