Absolutely! I’ll keep your tone, dialogue, and style intact while correcting grammar, punctuation, awkward phrasing, and consistency. I won’t rewrite the scene unless it’s necessary for clarity.⸻The rest of the meal continued in awkward silence, and when they were finally done, Rosie had fallen asleep.“Perhaps we should take her to bed,” Avira suggested, glancing at Rosie before looking at Neil.He grunted his approval. Then he got up and handed Rosie to Malia. Avira followed her all the way to Rosie’s room. They placed her gently on the bed and quietly sneaked out.“Are you okay?” Malia asked.“Yes, but I don’t think I can go back there anymore.” She didn’t want to be around Neil, and she was beginning to feel sorry for Sharon. She had been silent and brooding throughout dinner, and Avira suddenly felt guilty. If she hadn’t come back here, maybe things would have been different.“Just go on then. I’ll speak to Neil about the preparations and fill you in on everything tomorrow.”“T
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