the moment that became my doom

Evelyn’s P.O.V.I looked at the boy with a red rose bouquet in his hands, beaming widely with those radiant, sparkling eyes that kept me captivated for so many years in a daze.“Say, yes….. say, yes…… say, yes.” The crowd around us was cheering aloud.My head was fuzzy, and I didn’t register what actually was happening around me.The chill of the winter winds still had wrapped itself around my body.The suffocation, the helplessness, and the coldness of the metal around my limbs were still fresh on my skin.Among the claps, cheers, and those wide grins, I heard filthy laughter and curses.Their cameras pointed towards me.“Say yes.”“Say yes.”“Evelyn”I jolted hard when the voice of my worst nightmare called me affectionately.My heart was now thudding hard against my ribcage.My hand shot to my chest.I felt the thud against my chest under my palm.My eyes darted everywhere in panic, trying to grasp whether I was hallucinating or I was really here.My breath hitched when my gaze lan

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not this time

Evelyn’s P.O.V. (Continued)“I am okay, Zack. Thanks for your concern,” I answered him politely but couldn’t mask the detachment in my tone.His eyes widened in shock, but he covered them instantly.“Okay. You are fine… you… I guess I startled you in the worst way.” He mumbled, smiling awkwardly, and pulled back his hand.“You… you are under so much stress because of this match. I should have thought it through before doing something like this.” He continued, clicking his tongue, sounding a bit disappointed, but I just stared at him blankly.It was the same tactic that he always used to gain my sympathy and raise the urge to comfort him in my heart.But not this time.I tightened my grip on my tablet against my stomach when I noticed his gaze darting to the tablet from time to time.The chill ran down my spine at that very instant, but my jaw clenched when I saw the beautiful face of the ugliest and cruellest girl behind him.She stopped at the far end of the hallway and looked at me.

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his cold eyes

Evelyn’s P.O.V. (Continued)“What is it?” I asked her, shifting my gaze towards her, and started walking.I had something to do before the match if I wanted to change the outcome of this match.She wrapped her hand around my elbow and took a deep breath."He seems... different today," she mumbled, but my heart skipped a beat.I still looked at her in confusion.Her opinion and observation mattered to me now.“What do you mean?” I asked her when I noticed that she wasn’t looking at me but at the front of us with a complicated gaze.“I don’t know.” She answered with a troubled expression on her face.“He kept smiling, b…. but it felt forced.” She added and slowly moved her gaze to me.I stared at her, dumbfounded.In my previous life, Cathy had never said anything like that.Has my refusal of his proposal already brought some changes in our future?She sighed aloud, jerking her head lightly, and then concern crept into her gaze."You've been acting strangely since Zack pulled that stunt

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writing his doom

Evelyn’s P.O.V.“Why are we here, Evelyn? Hiding like thieves.” Cathy whispered to me, a hint of worry and panic evident in her voice.I just patted the back of her hand on my arm, but my heart was also racing hard in fear.I had been a good girl all my life.A textbook good girl, to be precise.I never skipped school, never got in a fight, never made any trouble anywhere, not even at home.And yet here I was...Hiding under the bleachers with Cathy, trying to sneak into the rival team's sitting area.If someone had told the old Evelyn that one day she would willingly do something like this to destroy the only person she loved the most, I would have laughed in their faces.But Evelyn was dead.She died in that filthy and dark cell.The girl standing here now had already lost everything once.There was only a polyester curtain between us and the sitting area of the rival team – The Black Raven Team.I slowly tugged the upper edge of the curtain down and peeked on the other side.All th

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he made mistakes

Evelyn’s P.O.V.“What the fu*k is wrong with him today?” The coach, Mark Sinclair, yelled at the top of his lungs, frustrated and angry to death while watching the match slip out of our hands because of the way Zack was playing.I still bit my nails out of habit while watching the match, but I wasn’t anxious about Zack.But I was anxious about the game.This was not only about Zack. I had no grudge against the rest of the team members.This match was also crucial for them.This was the final match of the tournament.This match would open their way to the national ice hockey team.If they lose this match, they will have to wait a whole year to get this opportunity.“Don’t you think that Evan is playing better than in earlier matches, coach?” My grip on my tablet tightened when I heard someone whispering to the coach.So far, the match was just like it was in the past life.Our team still had the lead, but they were struggling.The Black Raven was giving our team, the Mountain Hawk, a h

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the moment that became my doom

not this time

his cold eyes

writing his doom

he made mistakes