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I covered my mouth, tears brimming in my eyes. The man I'd loved for seven years was now cheating on me? Had all his promises been nothing but lies? I remembered the day he proposed to me four years ago, with his earnest gaze and heartfelt words. "Olivia, you are my choice, always. Even if fate brings me a fated mate, my heart will remain yours." His sincerity had been convincing until when he brought the Omega home, pleading, "Olivia, I rescued this girl from a cruel Alpha. Could you help care for her?" Even when I discovered they were fated mates, I chose to trust him because his apology seemed genuine, "Olivia, I'm so sorry. I tried to prevent this from hurting you, but my wolf was in agony. I promise, once it settles, I'll reject her." How foolish I was to believe his honeyed words. Until the night he walked up to me, darkness filled in those eyes that used to be the most beautiful thing I've ever seen. “I'm sorry, Olivia, but I think it's time you leave. I realize I don't love you anymore, and my heart beats for no woman but Sophie. Take your things, and leave this place while you still can.” I sneezed while wiping away my tears. I'd heard and watched enough. And I've made my decision. I was never a weakling. Even if we’d shared many memories over our four-year marriage, I never lacked the courage to leave him. Since he'd betrayed me, I wouldn't want him either. #Book 2: Alpha's Redemption: Chasing My Second Chance Mate

“The final judgment has been made,” Alpha Derrick said. “Liam will be burned alive…” He paused, his eyes turning to me. “And Oprah will be buried alive for committing such an atrocious crime!” ********* She was his Luna. His mate. His everything. Until he chose to believe the lie. Accused of betrayal, rejected by her own mate, and sentenced to be buried alive while carrying his child, Oprah watched her world burn at the hands of the man she loved. But death didn’t take her. It remade her. Four years later, she returns, not as the broken woman he destroyed, but as a powerful and untouchable queen, hiding behind wealth, beauty, and a name the world fears. And she didn’t come back alone. When Alpha Derrick comes face to face with the woman he buried… and the child who looks exactly like him, his world begins to crumble. Because some mistakes don’t fade. They come back, with vengeance. Tour with me, for more in THE ALPHA'S GREATEST MISTAKE.

Milena~ I have one dream, one goal. A few more steps, and the life I desire is all mine. My life isn’t all gracious, but it’s mine to handle, change, and direct. It was perfect until the Goddess bound me to a man who is a monster. I detest men, but despise Alpha Vladimir more. Not only did he sell me off as a slave, he also drove me into the hands of his cruel brother. He ruined my life, causing me to become a pleasure object for his ruthless brother. But why does Alpha Vladimir now want me under his wings? What are these sexual desires breeding in his eyes when he gazes at me? Not only am I his brother's plaything and Luna, but I am also Alpha Vladimir’s rejected mate, and Alpha Vladimir is forbidden to have me. Strange how things are taking a different turn: the man who sold me off wants me back. Alpha Vladimir is ready to crush the world for my sake. Why!!? Read Alpha’s Mistake, where every decision has a price. Author’s Note; There are dark events in the book due to some characters' personalities. You are welcome to love whom you wish and curse whom you hate. But bear in mind, every character has their flaws. It’s gonna be a long ride, so buckle up and have fun.

This story is about the downfall and the rise of a family. If you are looking for a good family drama with a happy ending, this is the book for you. Note: This isn't a romance story. ******* Mr Williams is a very popular pastor in New York City, but his biggest mistakes, is that he always wants to control the life of his family. But not everyone would love to be controlled... Alicia Williams is just as stubborn as her father, she disowned her father due to her hatred for him, and also left his house. She's lucky enough to meet Eric Davis, but little did she know that Eric is much more worse than her father. He is the devil!. Anna williams isn't anything like her sister Alicia. She's more like the obedient child. She does whatever her father orders her to do, abd that lands her in a very abusive relationship. Calrk Williams the unloved son of Mr Williams, wanted nothing but to be loved by his father. In his search for love, he met Ray a married man. Ray didn't only made Clark feel loved but also turned him into a gay. Austin Williams only dream is to be an artist, but his father Mr Williams ordered him to be a doctor instead. Now he has a void inside of him, and the only way he could fill that void was by taking drugs(cocaine). Martha Williams, wife of Mr Williams. Could not do anything to help her kids from their downfall, why? Because she had a secret, a secret she couldn't let out in the open, a secret that her dear husband used in blackmailing and controlling her. *Is okay to make a mistakes, but it's not okay when you don't learn from it️

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Never has it been known for there to be a mistake when it comes to the mating process, Never. Every wolf finds a mate, falls in love, has kids, and the cycle continues… But when James, a twenty-four year old beta, spends years without a mate, one can only imagine otherwise. Eventually coming to the conclusion that he might not have been given one. Until he meets Adria. A bold, determined and dominant twenty-one year old girl in his pack, who also hasn't had luck finding her mate. After meeting Adria, the idea of a mate seems unimportant, as if Adrias existence soothes the longing for the mate he never got. Nevertheless, James tries hard to stay away from her, feeling vulnerable by the possibility that he can fall for her. Something about Adria though seems to always be luring him in; her voice, her face...her body. As if made by the same creator, Adria also doesn't seem to get enough of the hot beta that always seems to be sparking up a blazing passion within her. Confused by these strange feelings they soon come to find lies, secrets, and betrayal hidden by the closest people in their life. What happens when they come to the conclusion that they're not mates, just a nice distraction, before their mates come along. If they ever show… And what if they show? Can they leave everything they fought so hard to keep? Both thought they had their whole life figured out, in the end it was all an illusion. This is not your average Wolf story!