I Seduced My Hopeless Romantic Editor
I stomp my feet and look at him for a few minutes.
"Why?" I ask him calmly as I smile. But deep inside, I'm going to kill him for telling me that my story is trash!
"Too much, passive voice, comma splice, informality, and the use of punctuation is wrong. Oops, I didn't mean that your story is bad, but your writing style is." He teasingly says that he is getting even on me after what I did to him. My chest is getting heavy as I look at him.
"I'm sorry, I didn't have time to edit because it's only an impromptu writing," I calmly explain while smiling at him, but deep inside. He is already being tortured in my head.