Mage of Wolves
Since I hadn’t asked him if it was okay for me to look at it, I didn’t compliment his work, but it was so much better than my own.
I remembered what Mrs. Flynn had said about asking for help from other people at our table if we needed it. I scooted my drawing over to Melanie. “What do you think I should change?”
She looked a little surprised that I was asking. “Well, for one thing, your eyes aren’t big enough on the picture,” she said. “You have big, beautiful blue eyes. You should emphasize that. Also, your expression is sort of a smile, but it doesn’t reach your eyes. When a person smiles, their cheeks are rounder up beneath your eyes. You could try changing that.”
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