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CAGED: IN HIS LOVE

CAGED: IN HIS LOVE

Kathy squeals in excitement with the cold breeze hitting on her face and her hair freely moving upside down. "It's cold but amazing." Tina replied, as she rested on the beach lounge chair basking, luxuriating in the glow of the sun. She was wearing a V neck sexy lingerie with black halter neck looking sexy and hot sitting on the beach chair, and getting the attraction of each passerby as they all looked at her cute baby bump. As it was not a weekend, the beach was far from empty. Couples and singles, even a few children are playing in the waters having enjoying their carefree day. The beach seemed like a good idea after all.
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M.Z. Mauve
pretty good start. enough descriptive imagery. the blurb was okay. seems like there's enough conflict to keep the story interesting. the blurb needs some proofreading, as well as the first chapters (typos, tense consistency issues, punctuation, etc.). overall, nice work
krushandkill
The synopsis hints that this story has more in it than it seems. The chapters need some editing, but nothing that damages the story as it is right now. The ML is easily hated, but I bet there is more about him than the first chapters shows.
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