Hey there monsters and witches! as Halloween is upon us!, its upon us people!!!!! Things are bad people!, what is going to happen next?. Who would do such a thing to our precious Breanna?!. Oh the pain!, the tragedy!. What do you think about the chapter, have any idea who it is?. Lets count the enemies we know.......first the evil landlady, then the creepy stalker and Sloane........ Who do you think it is?. Let me know in the comments!. Like and leave a review!. Love, Bee.
*Edited Trigger : This chapter contains use of strong language through out. Maxwell's POV "I messed up Petra." Max burst into her office, pulling at his hair like a raging man. Petra shot up from her chair, walking over to him quickly. "What happened?......." She asked alarmed. "I fucked up!." "Calm down……what happened?." Petra asked again noticing his busted knuckles. "God, I'm stupid." "My heart can't take shit, I'm over here shaking a like who pissed his pants or was called to the principal's office, for someone extremely strong on the outside, I'm a mushy mess on the inside, it was fucking pathetic!, but I really don't care anymore, I just want to be sure that Wilson will not leave me, I can't fucking take another one!." He rushed out in one breath, his hands balled to a tight fist. "I don't understand you…….slow down." Petra tried to stop his ramble. He took in a deep breath and turned to punch the wall several times. "Max!." She called out in fright. He didn't stop t
*Edited Trigger: This chapter contains violence, use of substance and graphic description od sexual assault. Breanna's POV Breanna woke up, to find that she had been gagged, at this point she was sure, she had been missing for a few days. With no idea as to who whas behind this, why they wanted her or what they were going to do with her, she began to think of how to escape. Becuase quite frankly, nobody would come to save her, she didn't have any family, not coherent enough to help, anyway. Breanna thought of Maxwell for a while, but he had his own problems to deal with, she concluded, remembering how red his eyes were and the joint in his ex's hands. She would easily be the least thing on his mind. He didn't care about her, he had been lying the entire time, she would be the biggest fool on earth, if she for one second thought that he would try to help her. She needed to save herself. Breanna used to think she was done with life, but as her life began to lfash before her ey
*Edited This chapter contains use of strong language and reference through out. Maxwell's POV Sweat trickled down his back as he punched aggressively on the small suspended punching bag. 'Stay out of this one.' Petra's voice resounded in his ears. 'You're emotionally attached.' 'You're jittery and frantic.' 'It will cloud your judgement.' Maxwell let out a loud growl as he delivered on last blow causing the teardrop to cut open and drop from the chain. He threw his gloves across the room in anger, and kicked the fallen bag to where the other torn three were. He took a quick swing of water, raising tank top to clean the sweat that trickling down his chin, into his eyes and mouth before he replaced the bag and resumed, punching furiously, like an automated machine. It had been five days and he had heard a total of nothing. Steve was tip toeing around him, more like running away, leaving his frail wife, Cece to deal with his grumpy angry self. He couldn't really do anything
*Edited This chapter contains strong language and reference through out. Maxwell's POV Steve paused, shoulder slouched and sighed. "I understand you, I really do, so you need to understand that I'm here to help." "Right, right, I know." Max grabbed two new glass, nodding, he filled them with water. "So what did you want to ask me?.......because I seriously want you to leave." "Steve arched an eyebrow. "Seeing you here and knowing that I should be out there is infuriating and you need to go home and sleep for sixteen hours straight and then give your wife…………like a make up sex or something, the woman misses you and its sort of my fault." He added stretching out a glass to Steve. Steve flushed, rubbing the back of his neck. "Okay?." Max asked. "Fine………you'd think she's be okay with it after all these years, its my job." "And its her job to worry, its built into her man, you can't help it." Max said. "Now lets get this over with." "Alright, answer the first question, I know the
Hey everyone!, how are you all doing?. I want to start off by appreciating you all, I'm so grateful for the kind readers i've built here on goodnovel, grateful for all three thousand of you who decided to give this book a chance and have stuck with me since. Since the first day this book aired on this platform, a year ago, to now, i've evolved as a writer and the course of the book has changed quite a number of times over the months. I set out to entertain people with my writing, that has not changed, what has, however, is my style, the story telling, the story setting, the character developments and so on. I never intended for the book to be a hundred chapters long, believe me, so i realized it was dragging out, taking too long and i had to do something about it. My point is, this book has since, underwent, and still is undergoing massive changes, restructuring and editing. Not because the way it now is wrong, but there is room for improvement. I have since attended a formal writ
Hola again! How are you all doing?. As some already know, if you don't, well.......now you'll know, this book has / is going through massive editing. The book cover and title has changed, the story line has been tweaked ( i say tweaked, because the main characters are still the same but with minor personality changes and how the story unfolds has improved *in my opinion ) SO the first TEN chapter have been thoroughly edited. The chapters that follow are still of the previous version of the book. I didn't want to delete the entire book and replace it in one go, it wouldn't be unfair to all those that have spent coins to unlock. I do hope that this does not confuse you too much, i know its not convenient, so i try to post messages in the reviews section about the chapters that have been edited. If you were a previous reader and didn't know, kindly go back up and see the changes, i hope you love them!. I'll most probably keep coming here to edit this Author's note with almos
Heeeellooooooo!! What's up everyone?, how are we all doing?. There is actually no need for this update, if you have been following up on all the edits that has been happening, then you know what's up!. For those who don't know, a little introduction. This book was previously name Busted. Now its not. This book is under edit. So although i've left this two author notes before this, explaining, some new readers still don't know, which is fine. So i've added a small note to the end of the synopsis that the book is in edit. I try to post an announcement, (if you will), in the reviews section on the chapters that have been edited, but that's not very frequent. To identify, there is a new trend of chapter headings, that i know its obvious, but let me still point it out. The numbered chapters have been edited, the unumbered, have not. The chapter names are now a pair of two words only, unlike the previous unspecified one. I've also added an " * Edited " warning at the begin
Hey, hey! Happy halloween!. So as usual, there isn't a specific reason for this update, but i just think its due. If you're new, welcome.... this book is being edited. Live. That means, there are edited chapters and some arent. It wouldn't be so much trouble if the editing is just grammer........but when i say edit, i mean the story line is being edited too. As of when i'm writing this, forty-seven chapters have been edited. But the rest that follow aren't. For new readers, that can be confusing. How do you know which chapter are edited, you may ask?. So you'll know which chapter to read first...... Every edited chapter is numbered. So if you see a number in the chapter title, its edited and you can read. All edited chapters have an *Edited tag at the very top and some times a trigger warning, so once you see it, you know its edited. Edited chapters are all written in third person narrative with respect to prespective...........that means, in my narrative (past partcic