this was a good read but then got somewhat confusing in the last few chapters before the one titled "the bracelet" it was as if chapters had been totally missed and then a whole different book emerged from "the bracelet" onwards the the final chapter"voices in her head" was back to the original book
2025-06-12 01:04:45
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Kim Cossom
This WAS a good book, but then it was obvious that a bunch was left out. Total vibe change, change of characters names and everything. Constant alluding to something that happened that was never actually put in the book. Major plot change with no warning. really disappointed.
2025-01-27 11:58:15
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Christina
This isn’t just re-editing… it’s bouncing back and forth between at least 2 different books .. PLEASE read the last MANY chapters at this point .. it was Brinleys story then Isabella’s and now someone named Candice… there’s definitely chapters going into the wrong books :(
2024-12-09 11:47:16
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Christina
Are you going to respond to us at all to let us know what’s going on with this book ??
2024-11-24 01:36:13
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Christina
Author please check the last few chapters!! They appear to be for a different book entirely… we’re paying for chapters that make absolutely no sense at all
2024-11-19 07:45:43
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Davia Schloss
I read the other book this one is not good
2024-11-14 10:18:44
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Taylor Combs
Hey author. Your book is amazing but would you check the chapters after Horrible Memories? The chapters proceeding starting with chapter You Here With Me makes no sense. It seems like there are chapters missing between these two.The story isn't making sense anymore.There seems to be a large time gap
2024-11-13 04:36:17
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Tosin Adeola
Good story
2024-08-19 05:17:17
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jodikay67
Not liking Coal too much, nor his family of course. I think the Alpha maybe has something to do with both her parent’s deaths. Maybe he was in love with her mother and she rejected him and he takes it out on Brinkley after he kills her. K maybe her dad was his friend and her mom chose her father??
2024-05-29 07:07:47
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Anika Kastelein
nice book, confusing end
it looks like we are missing some chapters
will there be a second book?