Share

SUBMISSIVE TO MY BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND
SUBMISSIVE TO MY BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND
Author: Viv_Writes.

GOOD GIRL

Author: Viv_Writes.
last update Last Updated: 2025-09-06 20:56:30

KARIMA HEART

I gripped my phone tightly as I exhaled a sharp, shaky breath. My brain was screaming at me to turn back, to walk away, that this was wrong. But there I stood, right in front of room 50. The same room where I was supposed to meet Owain Luther, my brother’s best friend.

Don’t ask me how I ended up here. It’s a long, messy story. All you need to know is that Owain now held something over me. A secret I couldn’t afford to let slip, not even a little of it. And refusing Owain? It wasn't an option. Well, he'd already promised to keep my secret buried, as long as I played by his rules. After all, I used to be his cute little sister, back then, when he was still the Owain I knew.

With trembling fingers, I turned the door handle and stepped inside the dimly lit room.

My stomach twisted into knots I couldn’t explain.

"You’re five minutes late, Karima Heart," his deep baritone voice echoed across the room.

He was seated, his legs crossed lazily on a velvet couch. His silky blue shirt hung open halfway, revealing a muscled, slightly hairy chest that looked charmingly inviting.

"I had work," I said, trying to sound composed. "You know that."

He tilted his head back with a smirk before standing. Every step he took toward me was steady and deliberate, like a predator closing in on its prey. Our eyes locked and then, so did our breath. His face hovered inches from mine, his lips curled into that cynical, knowing grin.

"The same work I’m keeping secret for you?" he murmured.

God, I hated Owain Luther.

Okay, maybe I used to have a stupid crush on him when I was younger. He was eighteen back then, and I was just a blushing thirteen-year-old girl. But right now? He wasn't the same guy I had that stupid crush on. Ten years later, he was back from Thai land, and of all the d*mn places, I had to bump into him at the stripper club where I was secretly pulling shifts instead of being at College, and that? Malcom must never find out.

Now I was trapped, and he knew it.

I swallowed hard. "You promised, Owain. You said you’d keep it to yourself."

He didn’t respond with words, until...

His hands were suddenly at my waist, firm and possessive, pulling me close. My mind tried to resist, but my body... my body betrayed me totally.

Stupid me...

His breath was warm against my skin. His lips was so close I could feel their heat hovered near mine, and his jawline looked sharp enough to slice through every ounce of my resolve.

Just get your sh*t together, Karima... You can’t fall for this. I thought.

"That promise still stands," he murmured, his voice as smooth as a player's. Well, he was popular back then for being a smooth talker and of course, a player.

"But how long it stays that way? Depends entirely on how well you behave."

"I’m here, aren’t I?" I said through clenched teeth.

He brushed my hair aside gently, and I nearly stopped breathing. His fingers trailed down my collarbone... lower. My chest rose with the movement, my skin prickling with heat as he traced the line where skin met melty silk. Then his hand slid lower, lower still, until it landed firmly on my backside, his grip was possessive... and claiming.

My knees almost buckled.

"Now that," he whispered, his lips grazing my ear slightly, "is what I call obedience."

"You’re mine now, Karima. Don’t you agree?"

I tried to steel my face, to keep my pride. But the way his body pressed against mine... the way his mouth melted cold on my tilt, it was... Melting itself.

"Yes," I said breathlessly. "I’m yours."

He chuckled darkly, his mouth brushing against the sensitive spot below my ear. "Say it, Karima."

His lips moved lower, igniting sparks along my skin, and I lost every shred of logic left in me. A soft moan escaped my mouth before I could stop it.

"I’m yours, Owain," I whispered.

"Good girl"

His voice came out with a cold satisfaction as he straightened, slowly withdrawing his hands from beneath me. Then, he gently slided one hand into his pocket.

I dropped my gaze to the floor, unable to meet his eyes. The heat still lingered on my skin, but... I was too ashamed to even admit it.

“It’s past 8 PM,” he said coolly. “You can go now.”

Without another word, I turned on my heel, not even daring to look back.

“I’ll see you around.”

His low voice followed behind me, as if what just happened between us meant absolutely nothing.

I slammed the door behind me.

"Never." I whispered to myself.

I told myself, over and over again as I stormed down the hallway.

Never again am I doing this. And I’m never seeing him again.

Even if every part of me was already tangled in him.

***

KARIMA HEART

The sound of my phone alarm beeping, pulled me out of sleep. I reached for the cupboard still half asleep, and grabbed my it.

My eyes widened almost immediately.

It was past 8 AM.

“Oh sh*t!” I blurted, already crawling myself out of bed like it was on fire.

No way in hell I was missing class today, not when the new lecturer was supposed to take over for Mr. Marcus.

In less than ten minutes, I was out of the bathroom, scanning through my wardrobe for any simple dress. There it was, I grabbed a plain sea-blue shirt and threw on a pair of fitted blue jeans. Slipped into my flat loafers and slung my backpack over my shoulder.

I gently shut the door behind me. I was already halfway through the sitting area.

As I approached it, I heard Malcolm’s laugh echo through the house, loud and for the first time in a long time, it was a genuine one.

I blinked. That laugh became rare. Was it six years already?

Ever since Mom’s divorce… things hadn’t been the same. Dad vanished, then came Kyle, mom's second mistake. That marriage barely lasted a year before she was diagnosed with cancer, and like the coward he was, Kyle ran.

Malcolm wanted nothing to do with her ever since then. He struggled to get to where he was now, taking care of me and everything I needed but the only condition...

He made me swear not to help mom, not even if she was dying. And I swore. But I lied. I’d been picking up secret part-time jobs just to cover her hospital bills. If Malcolm ever found out... I don’t even know what he’d do.

I stepped into the living room, then my feet froze.

What-The-Hell.

Owain?

He was Sitting casually opposite Malcolm, his legs crossed, looking as smug as ever. That annoying grin stretched across his face the moment he saw me.

My heart almost stopped beating and my stomach suddenly dropped.

“Hey, Karry,” Malcolm said with a half-smile. “Look who’s here. Owain's back after ten years.”

He turned to Owain, grinning. “Man’s changed a lot too.”

I forced my eyes away from Owain and tried to keep my face blank, but my chest was tight.

No, No, No... This isn’t happening.

“Hello, Karima,” Owain said smoothly, flashing that same damn smile that haunted my dreams last night. As if that was supposed to send a chill down my spine, he winked at me.

I hated the way his tongue ran over his lips as he stared at me. Hated how my skin reacted to it. The memory of last night hit me like a truck.

“I’m late for class, Malcolm,” I said flatly, cutting right through the moment.

He noticed, but he didn’t press further. He probably thought it was just another one of my morning moods.

“Okay,” he said with a shrug. “Just don’t forget to come back early. Owain’s staying with us for a while, until he wraps up some business here.”

My brain stopped processing.

Come again? He's what? Was Malcom kidding me right now?

“He’s staying here?” I asked, the words spilling out before I could even stop them.

“You heard me,” Malcolm said. “And you know I can’t cook, so…”

I couldn’t even respond. My chest felt tight again, but for all the wrong reasons now. Why on earth does this have to happen now...

“I’m coming back by 9 PM,” I muttered, already stepping toward the door.

"Well, you need to run, class's by 8:30 and you're already fifteen minutes out"

Owain said behind me. I didn't answer him, and It didn't occur to me at first, but just as I turned the handle, a thought struck me like lightning.

Wait. How the hell did he know my art class starts by 8:30 AM?

That was a damn coincidence, right?

Continue to read this book for free
Scan code to download App

Latest chapter

  • SUBMISSIVE TO MY BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND    SPECIAL THANKS...

    Hello, my lovely readers 🤍Phew 🤧… We’ve finally reached the crossroads of SUBMISSIVE TO MY BROTHER’S BEST FRIEND.Yeah, I know, you’re probably wondering how that’s possible when I’m clearly leaving you hanging. Relax, no qualms.So… To clear the air, this isn’t the end.of the story.This book will be having a Part Two, and I honestly can’t wait to continue the journey. I realized this story deserves more... More characters, more depth, more twists, and real answers to every loose end.Secondly, I want to sincerely thank every single one of you who stayed with me till the very end. Your love, support, and commitment mean everything to me. Truly. I couldn’t ask for better readers. You made the whole journey worth it and I'm so happy to have you guys. 🥹This is not the end of Owain and Karima. And definitely not the end of Malcom and Keisha… or those side characters you’re secretly rooting for 👀I don’t have a specific release date for Part Two yet, but I promise, it’s coming. Soon

  • SUBMISSIVE TO MY BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND    COULDN’T BE

    KARIMA HEARTThe second the car stopped, I jumped out. I don’t even remember closing the door. All I knew was that I was already standing in front of Agnes.“Where’s Mum?” I asked fast, trying not to sound shaken. But I was. I couldn’t hide it a bit.I might still be mad at her, but the idea of something going wrong with her? I couldn’t handle that. It scared me.Agnes didn’t answer right away. She just looked at me, like she already knew what I needed most at that point.“Come here, honey,” she said softly, opening her arms wide for a hug.I let out a shaky breath and walked into her hug.“Everything’s going to be fine, Karry.”I couldn’t talk. My throat felt too tight and dry. I just buried my face into her shoulder and stayed there.***Thirty minutes later, she came back with two cups of coffee. We were in the waiting lobby. I hadn’t said much since the breakdown, and one thing I was weirdly grateful for was that Isaiah hadn’t pushed me to talk either.He either kept glancing at m

  • SUBMISSIVE TO MY BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND    LEFT MY SKIN

    MALCOM HEARTThe moment I turned off the engine, one thing was clear in my head.I wasn’t going to let anything that Kenderic said tonight ruin what I had planned with Keisha.Still, I couldn’t completely push it out of my head on the drive home.I trusted Keisha. Not because I knew every detail about her life, but because in all the time we’d spent together, she’d never lied to me. She tried once, just once, and didn’t even last a full minute before confessing.That was Keisha. And I chose to hold on to that.I stepped out of the car took a deep breath and shut the door behind me.Inside, Keisha was asleep on the sofa. A throw pillow was pressed to her chest, her phone resting on top of it like she’d been waiting and waiting until sleep finally took her.I smiled and stood there for a moment, just watching her.The phone almost slipped. I moved fast and caught it before it fell. Her head dropped against my shoulder before I could pull away.That simple contact made it harder to ignor

  • SUBMISSIVE TO MY BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND    BETTER NOT BE TRUE

    KARIMA HEARTI finally found the nerve to shake her hand back. It came out more awkward than I intended. But I pretended it didn’t.“You already know my name,” I said evenly. “Even though I only just found out yours.”Her lips curved into a slow smirk.“I don’t like dancing around words,” she said firmly but calmly. “So forgive me if I’m direct from now on.”I nodded, but I couldn’t ignore the thought creeping in. Now I understood why Owain would fall for someone like her. She was sharp. Confident. And there was something dark in the way she carried herself, the same edge Owain always had.I had alot of questions bubbling in but I tried to keep them away.“I don’t like games either,” I replied. “So let’s start with how you knew my name, Ciara.”She tilted her head intentionally, studying me like she was deciding whether I even understood what I’d just asked.“I assumed Owain had mentioned me,” she said calmly. “I thought you two were… serious.”“We agreed to be direct,” I said. “So le

  • SUBMISSIVE TO MY BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND    PERSONAL

    COLLINS HAYESI had just wrapped up a conference call with one of our clients when the doorbell rang.I walked over and opened the door.Victoria stood there. Bright red lipstick. Heavy makeup. The kind that said she’d put in way too much effort and was now probably regretting it.“Hey,” I said casually, even though she looked like she wanted the floor to swallow her whole.I sighed. “Don’t just stand there. Come in.”I stepped aside and left the door open. She walked in quietly, like she was trying not to make a sound.I don’t know why, but I found that kind of cute.I went back to the couch and sat down, my wine glass in one hand. I took a sip and looked at her again.She avoided my eyes and started looking me over instead—my shorts, my suit jacket.Yeah. Not my best look. Today had been a mess. I crashed early and almost missed the conference call the scheduled tonight. So, technically, the outfit was just damage control.I decided not to joke about it.“Do you want wine?” I asked.

  • SUBMISSIVE TO MY BROTHER'S BEST FRIEND    A DREAM

    MALCOM HEARTST Constructions wasn’t far, less than fifteen minutes away.If Mr. Lincoln truly wanted to see me, he would’ve called himself or sent his secretary. That alone put me on edge.I pulled into the parking lot and walked toward the building.I was barely halfway inside when a man in a white shirt approached me.“Mr. Heart?” he asked politely.“Yes,” I replied.“Please, come with me.”I followed him down the hall until we reached the Lincolns' private mini restaurant.“Here, sir.” He gestured toward the bar. Only one man sat there, perched on a bar stool, his back turned to us.The man who brought me stopped behind him.“Mr. Heart is here, sir.”The man on the stool turned around.He was young, with Irish-colored eyes and sharp jawlines. For a moment, I thought I was looking at a younger version of Mr. Lincoln.He stood and extended his hand, a smile on his face, one I would easily describe as smug.“Nice to meet you, Mr. Heart.”I shook his hand, keeping my expression calm,

More Chapters
Explore and read good novels for free
Free access to a vast number of good novels on GoodNovel app. Download the books you like and read anywhere & anytime.
Read books for free on the app
SCAN CODE TO READ ON APP
DMCA.com Protection Status