Example Of Critique Story

Have you fallen in love with someone who doesn't even care about you, or, let's say, the guy who knows you and you're existing in his world that is full of anger, coldness, and darkness? Bryl Nigel is a COLD, EVIL, and POSSESSIVE heartrob at our university. A lot of students in our university describe Nigel as COL.E.POS, short for COLD, EVIL, POSSESIVE. Lahat ng gusto nya ay nakukuha nya kahit daanin nya sa dahas at kung may humadlang tiyak ikay ka-ka awaan. However, sa kabila ng kanyang ugali. Maging "COLD, EVIL, POSSESSIVE" pa kaya sya once na nakatapat nya na ako? I am the queen bitch, and he is an evil prince. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED|I do not allow my work to be used or adapted in any way without my permission.

"Mawala man ako, pangako babalikan kita. Hahanapin at hahanapin kita, Ruan. Wala na akong ibang mamahalin kundi ikaw lang. Sa buhay man na 'to o sa walang-hanggan…”

Ruby Mendoza never liked a certain a guy. She dislikes Joseph Rivera for as long as she can remember dahil binastos siya nito sa una nilang pagkikita. At ang masaklap pa roon ay nasa iisang boarding house lang sila nakatira. Slowly, her annoyance turned into something she can perceive, she knows that she is slowly falling in love with him and she wants to cut those invisible strings that she thought was not good for her heart. However, Ruby found out the truth behind the feud between her family and Joseph's, Ruby decided to walk away without a proper goodbye, leaving him for good. After years of no communication, will they be able to lit old flames and reconcile each other's mistakes in the past or some things will change for good?

Scarlet Collins received a job offer from AC hotel. Aiden Thompson, her fiancé let her work in New York, but he told her to come back one month before their wedding. The director of AC hotel assured her that it is not connected to her ex-boyfriend, Xian Montealto, the CEO of AC Company but it turns out that director lied to her because she will work as a secretary of Xian. Working as secretary for her ex was worse than she imagined. Almost every day, she’s reporting inside Xian’s room while he’s making love with different girls. Seeing him kissing another girl was breaking her heart, but she needs her job. “How long will you do this to me?" Scarlet whispers, her voice choked with tears. "Why, Scarlet, does it hurt you?" His words are laced with cruel amusement. "You can fake your tears too, what a great pretender!" As Xian delves deeper into the reasons behind Scarlet rejecting his wedding proposal, he uncovers a truth that could change everything. Will he find a way to stop her impending marriage to Aiden and reclaim the love he lost? Or will the shadows of their past forever keep them apart?

Nabriella Rodriguez is a peace-loving person, who only desires to lead a quiet life with her grandmother. However, everything gets chaotic the moment she is arranged to marry Lucifer Melendez—the Mafia boss. Will she survive the price of being a Melendez wife? Or will she fall in love with the man who will make her life miserable everyday? Will she run away if she finds out Lucifer was a part of Mafia, not just part but a Mafia Boss?

Si Alona Adarna, isang contestant sa Miss Pasig City 2020, ay hindi inakalang magbabago ang kanyang buhay nang makilala niya si Neil Custodio, isang napakagwapong billionaire na nagmamay-ari ng pinakatanyag na Airline Company sa Philippines ang Tropical Air at hurado ng patimpalak. Sa isang lihim na relasyon na walang kasiguruhan, nahanap ni Alona ang kanyang sarili sa isang mapait na sitwasyon—minamahal niya si Neil, ngunit para kay Neil, siya ay tila isang palamuti lamang-isang lihim na kasamang nagpapalipas ng oras. Sa loob ng dalawang taon, ang kanilang tago at masalimuot na relasyon ay lumalim, habang si Alona ay tinutulungan ang kanyang ina na magpagamot mula sa lupus sa Australia. Ngunit dumating ang oras na kailangan ni Alona tanggapin ang mapait na katotohanan—si Neil ay ikakasal sa iba. Ang huling gabi nilang magkasama ay nagbunga ng isang lihim na nagpapabago sa kanilang kapalaran at kailanman hindi maisasaayos ng tadhana. Habang si Neil naman, sa una ay masaya sa kanyang bagong kasal kay Wilma, hindi niya alam na may isang malalim na sugat sa kanyang puso na iniwan ng pagkawala ni Alona. Limang taon ang lumipas, Tahimik na pinalaki niya ang kanyang kambal at dala ni Alona ang lihim nila Emerald at Aniego. Sa kanyang pagbabalik sa Pilipinas, hindi inaasahang magkrus muli ang landas nila ni Neil-isang pagkikita na puno ng hindi inaasahang mga rebelasyon. Paano niya haharapin mag-isa ang pagiging dalagang ina na dulot ng huling gabi nila ni Niel?Makakayanan kaya niyang ipagtapat ang lihim ng kambal?At si Neil,paano niya tatanggapin ang katotohanan?Magdududa ba siya o mararamdaman ang masakit na katotohanan na sila'y kanya nga?

si Reina ay mabait at cold na klase ng babae ngunit Hindi alam ng karamihan ay sa loob loob nito ay Isa syang malupit at walang awang tao at lingid sa kaalaman ng karamihan ay ginagawa lamang nya ito ng dahil na rin sa taas ng kanyang position ngunit Ang totoo Nyan ay Isa lamang syang simpleng dalaga na naghahangad ng hustisya dahil sa murang edad ay nasaksihan ng. inocente nyang mga Mata Ang pagkawalan ng buhay ng kanyang mga magulang ng dahil sa karanasang ito ay nabalot Ang puso nya ng puot at Galit ipinangako nya sa puntod ng kanyang mga magulang na maghihiganti sya at uubusin Ang mga kalaban at babawiin nya Ang buhay na ipinagkakait sa kanya ngunit sa Hindi inaasahang pagkakataon ay muli Silang magtatampo ng lalaking ky tagal na nyang hinihintay muling mabubuo Ang kanilang pagiibigan ngunit sa Hindi inaasahang pagkakataon malalaman nya na Ang kanyang minamahal ay anak Pala ng kanyang mortal na kaaway matutupad pa kaya Ang pinangako nya sa kanyang mga magulang na uubusin nya Ang angkan ng mga Kalaban o hahayaang nalamang na mamuuo Ang naudlot na wagas na pagmamahalan ng Dalawang taong itinakdang makaaway. Tunghayan Ang pakikipaglaban nila Reina Satory Azumi at Aix Mathew montefalco sa ngalan ng pagibig at paghihigante.

‼️ Warning : R-18 SSPG ‼️ Velora Venice, mabuting empleyada sa Solara Essence. Sa kabila niyon ay mayroon silang lihim na kasunduan ng kanyang boss na si Dewei Hughes. Isang araw sa piling ni Mr. Dewei Hughes, singkwenta mil ang ibinabayad nito sa kanya. Pangdagdag sa pang-dialysis ng kanyang kapatid at para sa gastusin nila sa bahay. Inalok siya ng boss niya ng isang gabing pagt@t*lik at babayaran siya ng malaking halaga. Pumayag din siyang maging isang exclusive escort ng isang mayamang estrangherong lalaki. Ginawa ni Velora ang magsakripisyo para mabuo ang malaking halagang kailangan sa kidney transplant ng kanyang nakakababatang kapatid na si Vanna.

（Sequel of Pregnant and rejected by my alpha mate. Can be read alone. ）Today I had my first kiss. It wasn’t planned. It was also with a complete stranger. As I walked through the halls of my school, Higala Shifter Academy, I paused when a familiar sense washed over me. My boyfriend, Scott, was nearby, and he wasn’t alone. “You are so naughty, Scott,” the she-wolf Sarah chuckled. “Only for you, babe,” he replied, muffled as her lips closed around his. At that moment, I felt sick to my stomach. “Oh, Scott. Stop it. You know we can’t be seen together. What if your girlfriend finds us?” “She’s in class. She’s never late. You don’t need to worry.” My heart was heavy in my chest, but also a wave of fury and resentment crossed me.“Lila?” Scott breathed, staring at me in shock “What are you—” Before he could get the entire question out, I turned to the gentleman beside me, placing my hands on his shoulders and pulling him toward me. He went easily, though his eyes showed nothing but confusion. I closed my eyes tightly so I wouldn’t have to see his expression any longer. Then, our lips touched. Later, I walked into my class but found,It was him… The man I kissed only moments ago in the hallway. The man I had given my first kiss to, was my professor.

Sa isang hindi inaasahang iskandalo ay napasubo si Drei sa pagaasawa Upang mapagtakpan ang kahihiyan ng babae at ang pamilya ay napilitan ang kanyang ama na ipagkasundo na lang siyang ipakasal sa babae at ipamalita na nagkakagustuhan sila at nadala langng damdamin. Kinasuklaman ni Drei ang babae sa pagaakalang sinadya nitong pikutin siya hanggang sa malaman niyang biktima din pala ang babae tulad niya