Example Of Critique Story Novels & Stories

Pinagmasdan ko siyang muli, tinatantiya kung anong salita ang bibitawan ko para makausap ko siya tungkol sa sinabi niya. "May problema ka ba?" I asked in a slow manner, good enough to gain trust. "Someone sent a heavy critique to the novel of mine that I thought is already perfect. Ito ang pinakapaborito ko sa lahat ng isinulat ko kasi pinaghirapan ko 'yon. But then, I received a critique I didn't think I deserve. And in the last of the statement, I was asked to delete the whole novel and start all over again. Kung i-e-edit ko 'yon at pagagandahin, gano'n din daw ang kalalabasan. Kasi... pangit daw ang buong k'wento." Halos maiyak siya sa pagsasalaysay. Bahagyang gumaralgal ang boses niya ha

"Anong verdict mo?" "Iyong totoo? Sabaw. Callie, bakit puro anuhan lang ‘tong story na ‘to? If your making a story lagyan mo ng depth. Although first chapter palang ‘to pero parang walang kapupuntahan kundi, ahhh! ahhh! ohhh! ohhh! ugghhh! Mind you, love making is not all about making noises."

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AUTHOR'S NOTE: Nasabi ko na po dati pa pero uulitin ko na rin, HAPPY ENDING po ito– para sa ibang nagagalit sa akin dahil ipinagpipilitang hindi daw magkakatuluyan si Ella at Miguel, wag po kayong gumawa ng sariling ending na ikasasakit ng ulo nyo, tapos magagalit sakin. Okay lang po i-criticized nyo kung disappointed sa mga stories, karapatan nyo yan. Dyan po kami matutututo as writers, but don’t say bad words. Bad po yun– Minus point sa langit.