At Arm's length
I added, a little bit delighted they were paying attention
"Your story has to begin with an interesting hook, make sure the prologue and first chapter creates a desire to read more, for your readers."
"Also ensure the goals, roles of your characters are clear and proactive enough to influence the plot of your stories. Make sure there are enough stakes to make the novel a page turner. Every scene should add to the story, the details should enhance the storie rather than distract from the story." I said, rounding up.
"Any questions?" I asked. Biting my lips.
A very tall dark girl on a low hair cut raised her hands up.
"Yes. Lola, lets hear you please." I said, calling on her.