Daddy’s Sweet Addiction
"Too generic. Give it weight. Give it a hint of humility that feels earned, not performed."
Clara cleared her throat, shifting her expression to one of soft, quiet confidence.
"Marcus, it's been too long. I appreciate you taking the time to meet with me. I've been doing a lot of thinking lately about the responsibility of my position."
Julian paused, his gaze calculating.
"Acceptable. But the phrase 'doing a lot of thinking' is a cliché. It sounds like a line from a rehab brochure. Replace it with something more active. Something that suggests a shift in priority."