I-SHIRLEY
Roz cleared Peter's line of sight
and winked at her boss. "Well, I think it's good," Peter answered. "Did you have a
chance to look at it?"
Bernie hadn't read a script in decades. Other people read
scripts for him and gave him notes-coverage.
"Yeah, yeah, I got my notes right here." He opened the
folder with Peter's coverage and scanned the two-pager.
Weak plot.
Terrible dialogue.
Poor character development, etc., etc.
Recommendation: pass
Bernie stayed in character, smiled expansively and asked,
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