Story Critique Paper Example

Tyler Zimmerman had only 36 hours left to get married. Otherwise, his father’s business empire will be reduced to nothing by his step mother. However, his father added a stipulation in his will that he can marry anyone except Sophia. General Max came up with a solution, under the guise of marriage they're going to hit two birds with one stone. Protecting Jade to carry out her mission without being suspected as their informant and satisfying the conditions of his father's will to obtain his inheritance. Despite himself he married Jade Leitner, the expert hacker who wanted to avenge the death of her parents. But along their mission, an unexpected thing happened…. "What have I done to deserve this? What was my crime that you're punishing me for?" Jade eyed him, seeking an answer. "You left and robbed me." Jade's eyes grew wide in shock. "No, I didn't take anything from you, you must be wrong." With a smirk he said, "I'm an honest man and wouldn't fabricate a story." "What did I steal from you?" Jade shook her head, trying to make sense of what he was saying. "You stole my heart," Tyler bared his heart to her without holding back. Finding his confession ridiculous, Jade let out a humorless chuckle. "You made a mistake, Sophia is the real culprit." "I'm certain, you are the thief who stole my heart," Tyler insisted. "If you say so, I'm giving your heart back," Jade was stone-faced, her voice edged with scorn. "Don't give it back, I'll steal your heart and we'll get even," he said and reached out to caress her face but Jade dodged his touch. "You have nothing to steal from me anymore as I don't have my heart with me. I have given it away," Jade said emotionlessly.

Love is not part of why billionaire CEO, Kane Beaumont marries his virgin bride, Emilia Taylor. It was purely a contract deal to him and nothing more. Saving her family's business from the claws of evil loan sharks is Emilia's motive for marrying a man she barely knew. However, she doesn't count on being hopelessly attracted to him even when he treats her like a worthless peasant. Their relationship is chaotic, thanks to Kane's lover who is determined to ruin any opportunity of their romance ever blooming. Even if it means putting Emilia's life in danger, setting her up and turning the world against her. When sparks begin to fly between Kane and Emilia after an unfortunate accident, their relationship goes through a tough test that destroys the tiny flames of love burning between them. Will love eventually find a way in the end or will this marriage continue to be a high-stakes business deal with dangerous rewards?

“Do you understand that you'll ruin my mission? You claim to care about me! Well, this isn't the best way to show it!" I spit the words through gritted teeth.“First, I don't give a fuck about you. Secondly, you did the exact opposite of what I told you to do. Oh, and there is more, I can destroy your life in a split of a second, and make it a living hell. So think about your attitude before opening your dirty mouth.” His rumbling voice affecting my confidence.

Losing someone close seems to always happens to us regularly. But then we don't seem to accept it rather we blame it on someone or something. The same goes for Nafisa Abubakar, married at a very tender age and also losing her husband at the time, She wished life will end for her also. Her husband, Hussaini died or rather was not found in a plane accident. His family and other people assumed he died. Maybe. She always does dream of her husband coming back to her but that dream was shattered when she remarried his twin brother, Hassan. What will become of her and Hassan when their marriage starts to work out but then an obstacle strikeout. Started: Nov 22, 2020. Completed:

Diana had to break off her romance with Clive, an extravagant set designer, because he cheated on her even with her friends. And she got a job in Hong Kong, where she met Jonathan, a brilliant surgeon, who was a real enigma to her: arrogant and cold, but who, at times, surprised her with his delicacy and sensuality. After all, what kind of man was that? Diana was interested to find out when Clive showed up unexpectedly in Hong Kong to make her life hell... Would that unscrupulous man be tormenting her wherever he went?

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"Kami hanya ingin hidup bebas seperti kebanyakan remaja di dunia, kami tidak pernah sekali pun meminta untuk berlahir seperti ini, jadi bisakah kalian membebaskan kami?" Raymond, Liora dan Arion hanyalah remaja biasa yang ingin melalukan banyak hal yang mereka sukai, tapi takdir seakan tidak mengijinkan hal itu. Orang yang sangat mereka sayangi menghilang membuat mereka merasakan kebingungan dan kesepian. Akhirnya mereka memutuskan untuk mencarinya, pencarian itu membuat mereka terlempar ke dalam dunia aneh dan unik. Dan perjalanan mereka pun di mulai.

Daffa dan Aira sudah bersahabat sejak kecil, kisah mereka pun biasa, hanya dipenuhi canda tawa seperti remaja SMA pada umumnya. Namun, takdir tidak selalu memihak manusia. Suatu masa, takdir membawa mereka untuk merasakan pahitnya hidup yang sebenarnya. Aira dijodohkan dengan Rehan, cowok yang paling Daffa benci seumur hidupnya.

Setelah tiga tahun berlalu, rasa yang menghilang itu kembali muncul. Amara dan gejolak perasaannya bingung dengan situasi yang tengah dihadapi olehnya.

Liku liku kehidupan Rayhan bersama kedua orang tuanya, yang berperilaku bak remaja. Suatu hal yang luar biasa bisa menjadi putra mereka. Bahkan tak ada yang menyadari bahwa si tampan Raka dan si cantik plus imut Dinda adalah ibunya. Ya wajar sih, wajah mereka berdua tak mencerminkan sebagai orang tua, bahkan bisa seperti saudara. Tapi apakah benar kehidupan rayhan begitu bahagia?