Story Critique Paper Example

In Elena’s past life, she was the hated Luna who did everything she could to please others, desperately chasing a love that was never returned. But in the end, it was her own fated mate, Alpha Killian, who betrayed her and sent her to her death. Blinded by lies, Killian believed she was trying to harm the woman he truly loved—Elena’s adoptive sister. What he never knew was that Elena died carrying his child. Fortunately, fate gave her a second chance. Reborn to a time before everything fell apart, Elena's love for Killian has turned into burning hatred. Now, all she wants is to escape him and make everyone who hurt her pay. But this time, the Alpha who once cast her aside refuses to let her go. Killian, once too proud to even look at her, now bows his head and begs her to stay by his side...

At just 19, Sienna lost her parents and, as the Alpha’s daughter, was forced to inherit the pack early. But on the eve of her wedding, her fated mate—Julian—betrayed her. If she didn’t go through with the marriage, she’d lose her right to the pack’s leadership the very next day. With no other choice, she married her parents’ most trusted Gamma: Asher Blake. What she doesn’t know? Asher’s real name is Alaric Valmor—a noble Lycan prince and the true heir to the kingdom...

Natalia and Andrei’s marriage was originally a three-year contract. With only 30 days left until the contract ends, Natalia discovered that she’s pregnant. Just when she thought Andrei would reconsider divorcing her because of this, his deceased first mate, Lilith, returned. Feeling hopeless, Natalia decided to initiate the divorce. However, at their engagement party, Andrei received the news of Natalia’s car accident, along with the shocking discovery of her pregnancy test results...

I used to be the perfect daughter for my father, marrying Alpha Alexander for the benefit of my home pack, even though Alexander refused to mark me and insisted our marriage was merely a contract. I then became the perfect Luna for my Alpha husband, still hoping I could win his affection one day and we would be real husband and wife. But everything changed the day I was told that my wolf had gone dormant. The doctor warned me that if I didn’t mark or reject Alexander within a year, I would die. However, neither my husband nor my father cared enough to help me. In my despair, I made the decision to stop being the docile girl they wanted me to be. Soon, everyone called me crazy, but that was exactly what I wanted—rejection and divorce. What I didn’t expect was that my once arrogant husband would one day beg me not to leave…

I was just the mate of the Alpha fated mate and the nanny to my child, not his Luna. I dedicated my life to him, but he never loved me—this was all because I was just a wolfless omega. Until his ex returned, everyone, including my mate and even my child, looked down on me. Everyone believed she should be the Luna. I turned and walked out of the house, choosing to live for myself. Three months later, I became the world’s most renowned white wolf healer, appearing on television. Son (shocked): "Dad, is that... my mom on TV?"

Elena Mekler, cambrioleuse d’exception, laissait dans son sillage frisson et chaos. Habile aux armes, insaisissable, elle exécutait ses missions avec une froide précision. Sous l’autorité de sa mère, Agathe Mekler, cheffe impitoyable de la mafia, elle reçut un ordre crucial : capturer le policier masqué, celui qui avait percé à jour leur secret et découvert leur cachette. Mais quand leurs chemins se croisèrent, tout bascula. Destinés à s’affronter, ils furent incapables de s’exécuter. Lui ne put lui passer les menottes. Elle ne put l’arrêter. L’adrénaline céda la place à un tout autre feu : celui du désir. Pris dans une tempête de passion et de loyauté, ils n’avaient plus qu’un choix à faire : honorer leur mission… ou se laisser emporter par un amour interdit et en subir les conséquences.

In the heart of the mysterious Lamenta Forest, the Keibster pack reigns supreme. These shadow wolves feed on human souls, strengthening their ancient power. Alma, the designated heir, must prove her worth by infiltrating the human world and bringing souls back to her pack. But upon her arrival among them, she feels an inexplicable unease. Her destiny changes when she meets Ezra, a kind-hearted young human who awakens emotions in her she doesn't understand. Throughout her mission, Alma discovers a truth the Ancients have kept from her all her life: she is neither fully wolf nor fully human, but the product of a forbidden union. As her destined Alpha, Kaelen, refuses to see her falter and launches a hunt to bring her back by force, Alma faces a heartbreaking choice. Should she embrace the dark side of her heritage or fight for her freedom and her love for Ezra? In this quest for identity, the secrets of the pack could be revealed, forever changing the balance between Keibsters and humans. A tale of mystery, passion, and inner struggle, where Alma's forbidden love might just be the key to liberation... or the destruction of everything she knows.

After the brutal betrayal by her mate and her own sister, Julia never expected to end up in bed with her notoriously difficult Alpha Boss, Ronan. Now, to protect her job, she has no choice but to keep it a secret. Thankfully, Ronan hasn’t realized the woman from that night is right under his nose. Just as Julia starts to relax—she makes an even more shocking discovery: she’s carrying Ronan’s pup...

When you're a single mom and find out your daughter was switched at birth with an Alpha's pup 6yrs ago. He takes you to his mansion and throws a document at you to sign. "No, I won't leave my child... wait, a marriage contract???"

พนิตนันท์ นักศึกษาสาวน้อย 19 ปี หางานพิเศษทำเพื่อนำเงินมาเป็นค่าใช้จ่ายส่วนตัว จะได้ไม่ต้องรบกวนทางบ้านที่กำลังประสบปัญหาทางการเงินมีหนี้ท่วมหัว สาวน้อยบังเอิญเจอ "ฤทธิ ฤทธิไกรรังสรรค์" หนุ่มวัยสามสิบห้าเจ้าของคฤหาสน์หลังงามท้ายซอยเดียวกันกับชุมชนที่หล่อนอาศัยอยู่ ฤทธิเคยช่วยเหลือหล่อนมาหลายครั้งนับแต่วัยเด็ก มาครั้งนี้เขาก็ยื่นมือเข้ามาช่วยอีกครั้งด้วยการรับปากจะหางานให้เพราะจำได้ว่าภรรยากำลังมองหาผู้ช่วยส่วนตัวอยู่นั่นเอง เขานำเรื่องนี้ไปบอกภรรยา และลินินก็ยินดีรับสาวน้อยมาเป็นผู้ช่วยของตนทันที แต่ทุกอย่างกลับตาลปัตรเมื่อฤทธิตื่นขึ้นมาในเช้าวันหนึ่งแล้วพบว่า ตนอยู่บนเตียงกับสาวน้อยที่ให้ความช่วยเหลือในสภาพที่เปลือยกายกันทั้งคู่ ฤทธิโกรธเป็นฟืนเป็นไฟเพราะเข้าใจว่าสาวน้อยรับเงินจากภรรยาของเขาเพื่อมารับหน้าที่อุ้มบุญให้ตามที่ภรรยาเคยมาเกริ่นไว้ว่าก่อนหน้า เนื่องจากเจ้าตัวไม่สามารถมีลูกได้ พนิตนันท์ตกใจกับสิ่งที่เกิดขึ้นไม่น้อย หล่อนจะขอลาออก แต่แล้วก็ได้รู้ความจริงว่า...แม่รับเงินก้อนโตมาโดยมีข้อแลกเปลี่ยนนั่นก็คือ...หล่อนต้องอุ้มบุญให้เขาและภรรยา