Story Critique Paper Example

On her deathbed, Ellie found out that her powerful Alpha King husband, Dominic, wanted her stepsister Vivian instead of her ever since they were teenagers. Not only had he betrayed her love, but he had eagerly crowned Vivian as his Luna Queen even before her death. But fate decided to give Ellie a second chance. Reborn at eighteen, Ellie is done being the stupid girl who always chased after Dominic. However, she didn't expect that Dominic would also change, and it seems that what happened in her past life was not that simple.....

I am about to be forced to marry the most ruthless old mafia boss in the city. However, one morning, I woke up naked in an unfamiliar bed and realized I had sex with a stranger. The worst thing is, now he is standing in front of me at my engagement dinner. “Mr. Guerrero,” someone says to my fiancé from behind me. “Your son has arrived.” Great. My one night stand is my fiance's son. When I ask him to pretend nothing ever happened. He chuckles. “And what if I don’t want that, future-Mrs.-Guerrero?” My breath catches when he leans in close, his breath hovering over my ear. “Or… should I call you mother?”

Au cœur de la mystérieuse Forêt de Lamenta, la meute Keibster règne en maître. Ces loups de l’ombre se nourrissent d’âmes, renforçant ainsi leur puissance millénaire. Alma, héritière désignée, doit prouver sa valeur en infiltrant le monde des hommes et en ramenant des âmes à sa meute. Mais dès son arrivée parmi eux, elle ressent un trouble inexplicable. Son destin bascule lorsqu’elle rencontre Ezra, un jeune humain au cœur bienveillant, qui éveille en elle des émotions qu’elle ne comprend pas. Au fil de sa mission, Alma découvre une vérité que les Anciens lui ont cachée toute sa vie : elle n’est ni pleinement louve, ni complètement humaine, mais le fruit d’une union interdite. Alors que son Alpha destiné, Kaelen, refuse de la voir faiblir et lance une traque pour la ramener de force, Alma est confrontée à un choix déchirant. Doit-elle embrasser la part sombre de son héritage ou lutter pour sa liberté et son amour pour Ezra ? Dans cette quête d’identité, les secrets de la meute pourraient être révélés, changeant à jamais l’équilibre entre les Keibster et les humains. Un récit de mystère, de passion et de lutte intérieure, où l’amour interdit d’Alma pourrait bien être la clé de la libération… ou de la destruction de tout ce qu’elle connaît.

When Emily attended her half sister Chloe's engagement party, she had to listen to Chloe bragging about her fiancé, saying he was the most powerful Alpha in this region. However, when the groom arrived, he walked not to Chloe, but to Emily.... “Hello, my fiancée. The party is about to start, why aren’t you dressed yet?”

“Daddy…” I mindlinked my father. I haven’t spoken to him in the 3 years I’ve been married. “Evelyn? What’s wrong?” My father asked, his voice was soft and yet was so superior. “I’m divorced” I told him solemnly. “Return home to the palace, my princess” my father ordered.

She is the only female Alpha in the world, the princess of the Royal Pack. To protect her, her father insisted on homeschooling her. She longed to go to school, but her father demanded she hide her Alpha powers. So, she pretended to be a wolfless— Until she met her destined mate. But he turned out to be the heir of the largest pack, and he rejected her?! “A worthless thing with no wolf, how dare she be my mate?” — He publicly rejected her and chose another fake. Until the homecoming... Her Royal Alpha King father appeared: “Who made my daughter cry?” The once proud heir knelt before her, his voice trembling: “I’m sorry… please come back.” She chuckled and raised her gaze: “Now you know to kneel?”

When you're homeless after catching your BF and BFF together, the next time you see them, they're screaming in public, your hot billionaire fiancé casually wraps an arm around you and says to your BFF: "Jenny, watch your mouth in front of your new mom... and your future little brothers." Jenny: 😱Dad!? Ex-BF: 🤡

After I was unexpectedly marked by a stranger wolf, it was considered a disgrace in our pack. My step-sister convinced my father to strip me of my hybrid wolf, but thankfully, I hid my healing abilities and left the pack. A year later, to break the bond, I returned and became the new Alpha’s doctor. My step-sister, now the new Alpha’s fated mate, used every trick to try and force me out. But then I discovered a shocking truth—the fated mate the new Alpha had been searching for, the one he marked that night, his future Luna, was actually me?!

I used to be the perfect daughter for my father, marrying Alpha Alexander for the benefit of my home pack, even though Alexander refused to mark me and insisted our marriage was merely a contract. I then became the perfect Luna for my Alpha husband, still hoping I could win his affection one day and we would be real husband and wife. But everything changed the day I was told that my wolf had gone dormant. The doctor warned me that if I didn’t mark or reject Alexander within a year, I would die. However, neither my husband nor my father cared enough to help me. In my despair, I made the decision to stop being the docile girl they wanted me to be. Soon, everyone called me crazy, but that was exactly what I wanted—rejection and divorce. What I didn’t expect was that my once arrogant husband would one day beg me not to leave…

She spent her life striving to be the perfect Luna for her Alpha husband—sacrificing everything for the pack and his interests, never once saying no. But when her relentless efforts led to her wolf falling ill, and the doctor warned that if it didn’t wake within three months, her life would be forfeit... no one believed her. They thought she was just being dramatic. Now, she’s decided to break free. Before her time runs out, she’ll make sure to confront every person who ever mistreated her—including her husband and his family. They’ll call her crazy. But the once-proud Alpha who stood above her is now chasing after her, begging her not to leave...