I think the romance in 'Through My Window' builds in a really classic, almost frustrating 'will they, won't they' way that feels very grounded for a YA story. Ares and Raquel start with that intense, mutual dislike fueled by proximity and class differences—she's watching him from her window, he's the rich, seemingly unattainable neighbor. The development isn't just about big declarations; it's in the small, stolen moments. The way he slowly lets his guard down when they're alone, or how she begins to see the person behind the arrogant facade. Godoy writes their physical tension really well, so the first kiss feels like a release of all that built-up energy. What I appreciated was that even after they get together, it's not smooth sailing. Family drama, ex-girlfriends, and their own insecurities keep creating believable conflict, which stops the romance from feeling like a flat 'happily ever after' once they confess. The window motif is a bit on the nose, but it works as a symbol for their secret connection and the barrier between their worlds that gradually disappears.
Some readers find Ares too possessive, which is a valid critique, but within the context of a steamy YA romance, his intensity fits the genre's expectations. The relationship's growth is tied to Raquel gaining confidence and Ares learning vulnerability, which gives it a solid emotional core beyond just attraction.