Shantali Mae Cross, a security guard at the Metropolitan Museum of Ancient Arts, encounters an impossible phenomenon during her night shift—smoke from the heating vents coalesces into the form of a cobra near ancient Egyptian canopic jars, showing her visions of possible futures. She sees herself accepting a promotion, arguing with a dark-haired man in a hospital, wearing a wedding dress, and standing at a graveside in autumn. Shaken by the experience, Shantali becomes obsessed with understanding what she witnessed, diving into research about serpent smoke divination practices. Her investigation reveals that others throughout history have experienced similar visions at crucial crossroads in their lives, but those who became consumed with interpreting and controlling their prophetic glimpses inevitably destroyed the very relationships and opportunities the visions had shown them. As Shantali spirals deeper into her research, she begins shutting out her boyfriend David, a fellow security guard who loves her deeply. When David witnesses the cobra phenomenon himself, he helps ground her in reality rather than obsession. Through her studies, particularly the warnings left by Dr. Amelia Thorne—a researcher who died alone after chasing similar mysteries—Shantali realizes the cobra's true message: choose love over fear, presence over obsession. The visions weren't warnings of tragedy but glimpses of a life fully lived with all its ordinary struggles and profound connections. When David proposes, Shantali chooses their real relationship over her pursuit of supernatural answers. She completes her research by writing a fictional novel about her experience, transforming obsession into art while helping future cobra witnesses understand that some mysteries are meant to guide rather than be solved. The story explores themes of choice versus destiny, the danger of sacrificing present love for future certainty, and the wisdom of embracing life's uncertainties alongside those who love us.
View MoreShantali Mae Cross had been working security at the Metropolitan Museum of Ancient Arts for eight months when her life fractured along lines she never saw coming. It was a Tuesday night in October, 2:47 AM according to the timestamp on her incident report—though she would never file that report.
The emergency lighting in the Egyptian wing had been flickering for weeks, casting strange shadows that danced across the sarcophagus displays. As she rounded the corner near the Ptolemaic collection, she noticed what appeared to be smoke drifting from the direction of the cobra-headed canopic jars.
Fire protocol demanded immediate action, but as she approached, her flashlight beam revealed no flames, no heat, no acrid smell of burning artifacts. Instead, the smoke carried the scent of jasmine and aged parchment, swirling with impossible precision into the form of a cobra, hood spread, regarding her with eyes like glowing embers.
In that moment, Shantali saw her future unfold in the serpent's smoky coils: herself accepting a promotion, arguing with a dark-haired man in a hospital corridor, standing in a white dress before an altar, weeping at a graveside under autumn leaves. The visions lasted perhaps three seconds, but they seared themselves into her memory with crystalline clarity.
When she blinked, only wisps of ordinary steam rose from the heating vents.
‘What fuck was that?’ Shantali thought to herself holding her head as if if might explode because that’s what it felt like.
“You ok Tali, love?” David asked touching her shoulder gently.
She jerked away from his touch, her body still humming with residual energy from whatever she'd just witnessed. David's concerned face came into focus under the stuttering fluorescent lights, his dark eyes searching hers for answers she couldn't give.
"I'm fine," she lied, her voice steadier than she felt. "Just thought I smelled smoke."
David glanced toward the canopic jars, then back at her. "The heating system's been acting up all week. Maintenance said they'd get to it Thursday." He paused, studying her face. "You sure you're alright? You look like you've seen a ghost."
‘Or a prophecy,’ she thought, but kept her mouth shut. The visions still flickered behind her eyelids—that hospital corridor argument felt so real she could almost hear the echo of raised voices, smell the antiseptic and desperation.
"Just tired," she said, forcing herself to meet his gaze. "Long shift."
David nodded, but his expression remained skeptical. "Why don't you take your break? I can cover this section."
She wanted to refuse, to stay and examine every inch of the display case, to see if she could coax that impossible smoke to return. But David was already pulling out his radio to report their position to dispatch, and she knew pressing the issue would only invite more questions she couldn't answer.
"Yeah, okay." The words felt foreign in her mouth. "Thanks."
As she walked toward the staff break room, Shantali's fingers unconsciously traced the outline of her phone in her pocket. She needed to document this somehow, needed to understand what had just happened to her in the shadow of those ancient jars.
The images went around in her mind like a merry-go-around. ‘What did they mean? Who was in the hospital? Who’s grave was that?’
The break room's harsh fluorescent lighting made her squint after the museum's atmospheric dimness. Shantali pulled out her phone with trembling fingers and opened her notes app, but when she tried to type what she'd seen, the words felt inadequate. How could she capture the weight of those visions, the certainty that had flooded through her as the smoke-cobra's ember eyes held her gaze?
*2:47 AM - Egyptian wing - smoke formation near canopic jars. Jasmine scent. Visions: promotion, hospital argument (who?), wedding (?), funeral (when?). Duration: approx 3 seconds. Physical effects: disorientation, residual energy sensation.*
She stared at the clinical description, frustration building in her chest. It read like the ramblings of someone having a breakdown, not the methodical observations of a trained security professional. But what else could she write? That she'd witnessed an ancient Egyptian prophecy manifest in the heating system's steam?
Her coffee had gone cold hours ago, but she drank it anyway, using the bitter taste to anchor herself in the present. Through the break room's small window, she could see the city stretching out in the pre-dawn darkness, unaware that something impossible had just occurred within these walls.
The door opened and David appeared, his expression more concerned than before.
"Tali, I just walked through that section again." He sat across from her, leaning forward. "There's no steam coming from those vents. Haven't been any moisture readings on that side of the wing all night."
Her phone slipped from her fingers, clattering onto the table.
Shantali's throat tightened. "What do you mean? I saw it clearly."
"I believe you saw something," David said, his voice gentle in that way that made her want to both trust him and push him away. "But the environmental monitors don't show any change in humidity or temperature in that section for the past six hours."
She stared at him, mind racing. The museum's atmospheric monitoring system was state-of-the-art—installed after that incident in the basement last year when a steam pipe burst and nearly destroyed an entire collection of papyri. The system didn't lie.
"Let me check the security footage," she said, already rising from her chair.
David caught her wrist. "I already did."
The way he said it made her pause. "And?"
"Nothing, Tali. Just you, standing there for almost a full minute, completely still. Then you grabbed your head like you were in pain." His thumb traced small circles on her wrist. "That's when I came to find you."
She pulled her hand away, uncomfortable with the tenderness in his touch when her mind was spiraling into chaos. "The cameras must have missed it. Or maybe—"
"Maybe you should take tomorrow off," he suggested. "You've been working doubles all week."
Anger flared hot and unexpected. "I'm not hallucinating, David."
"I didn't say you were." His voice remained infuriatingly calm. "But whatever happened clearly shook you up. There's no shame in taking a mental health day."
The autumn air carried the scent of fallen leaves and possibility. As David drove, Shantali watched the city scroll past her window, struck by how ordinary everything looked—pedestrians with coffee cups, cyclists navigating traffic, clouds drifting across the October sky. The world hadn't changed, but her place within it had shifted profoundly."What are you thinking about?" David asked, glancing at her during a red light."How strange it is that just a few days ago, I was desperate to understand something supernatural. Now I'm excited about checking water pressure in apartment bathrooms."David laughed. "That's called growth, I think.""Or sanity returning."They arrived at the first apartment—a corner unit in a renovated pre-war building. The real estate agent, a brisk woman named Elaine with a portfolio of listings and sensible shoes, led them through rooms bathed in natural light. The promised bookshelves flanked a brick fireplace, and the balcony overlooked a small park where cri
When she finally looked up, David was watching her from the doorway, two mugs in his hands and love in his eyes."How's it coming?" he asked, setting her coffee beside the laptop."It's not about understanding anymore," she said, realising the truth as she spoke it. "It's about honouring the experience by letting it go."David nodded, understanding completely as he always did. "That's how you know the cobra chose well."Shantali saved the document and closed her laptop. The story would wait. Right now, the present moment—with its coffee aroma and morning light, with David's smile and the weight of the ring on her finger—demanded her full attention.And for the first time since smoke had coiled into prophecy, she gave it willingly, choosing the life before her over the mysteries behind."I like the name change," David said, settling beside her on the couch. "Imogen has a certain mystique to it.""I thought so too." Shantali closed her laptop and leaned into his warmth. "Fictional enoug
"Yes," she said, before he'd even finished speaking. "Yes, absolutely yes."The ring slid onto her finger with the same sense of rightness she'd felt when the cobra's visions had finally made sense. Not prophecy demanding fulfillment, but possibility embracing choice.As they kissed in the front seat of his Honda, Shantali felt the last threads of obsession dissolve completely. Whatever mysteries the museum held, whatever other supernatural encounters awaited future night shift workers, she would face them with David beside her—not as someone seeking answers in smoke, but as someone who had learned to find meaning in love.The serpent had kept its ancient promise, guiding her away from the path of those who came before. Tomorrow she would return the books, delete her research notes, and begin the beautifully ordinary work of building a life with the man who had chosen to stand with her in the shadows.As they made their way up to their apartment as they closed the door, David pulled h
The vision flickered in her memory, but softer now, stripped of its ominous weight. Just life, with all its inevitable difficulties, made bearable by shared commitment."I love you," she said simply."I love you too." He raised his wine glass. "To new beginnings and mysterious smoke creatures who know better than we do what we need."They clinked glasses, and Shantali felt something settle into place—not the desperate certainty of prophecy, but the quiet confidence of choice freely made.As they walked to David's car after dinner, the October night crisp around them, Shantali's phone buzzed with a text from an unknown number: Dr. Hassan, MMAA. Heard you've been researching serpent smoke phenomena.Shantali responded: Somethings aren’t meant to be researched to much, they’re meant to be gifts for those who need clarity when their lives come to a crossroad as they let fear take hold. Life is meant to be lived with those we love and love us not to chase what ifs.The response came quickl
At the end of their shift, as dawn began to lighten the eastern sky, they stood together in the parking lot. Shantali hesitated before getting into her car."David, about these last few days... I'm sorry I shut you out."He leaned against her car door, his expression serious. "Promise me one thing?""What's that?""Next time you see a mystical smoke creature with prophetic powers, you'll tell me right away instead of spiraling into ancient Egyptian research rabbit holes alone?"She laughed, the sound carrying in the crisp morning air. "I promise."As she drove home, the city awakening around her, Shantali thought about Dr. Thorne's final warning and the path not taken. The mystery of the serpent smoke would always leave a mark on her life but it was meant to be learnt from, not to obsess over. If anything she felt nothing but gratitude towards the smoke cobra as it showed her the cost of her fear and the price was to high something she wasn’t willing to pay.If she ever came across th
"No," she whispered. "But what if the visions were warnings? What if something terrible happens and I could have prevented it?"David's eyes held hers steadily. "Tali, even without mystical smoke serpents, we never know what the future holds. That's what makes each choice meaningful." He gestured around the gallery. "These artifacts have survived thousands of years, witnessing countless human lives with all their joys and tragedies. The only certainty is change."As if responding to his words, the heating vent near by began spill what first looked like vapor but quickly be came thinker, darker like smoke and the smell of burning jasmine began to fill the air.David's grip on her hand tightened as the scent intensified, his eyes widening as he witnessed what she'd tried to describe. The smoke didn't rise randomly—it moved with purpose, coiling upward in spirals that defied the gallery's air circulation patterns."Jesus," he breathed, but his voice held wonder rather than fear. "Tali, d
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