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Alexi – upon arriving home, silly Nicolas carries me into the kitchen, which is cute and annoying that he is so precautious about my being pregnant. I am not breakable, an hour ago I was kicking butt in training. I was trying to imagine myself in his shoes, however all that brought about was a vision of him scowling with a huge belly. Nicolas was looking at me like I had gone crazy. Once he sat me on the chair in the kitchen, I was able to giggle up verbally to Nicolas, that I was envisioning him pregnant, and he did not look happy. Nicolas laughed, “I do not envy you at all being able to bear pups. My help is by carrying you so that I carry the baby weight with you.” My heart swelled at his explanation.My grandmother Cordelia was talking with Nicolas's father who seemed to be planning a long trip. When my grandmother saw me coming, she got up, placed her hands on my belly and smiled. They'll make a lot of mischief. She laughed as I told her about how they
Alexi and Nicolas were getting ready for the ceremony, Nicolas putting on some dark slacks and a white shirt. Alexi putting on the new dress that her and Nicolas just purchased. Alexi sits at the mirror putting curls into her hair and lifting half of her hair up into an updo, so that her neck was longer and emphasized her neckline and bosoms, yet still being sophisticated and attractive. She put on some white dressy sandals and turned to look at Nicolas. He walked up next to her and looking at him and her in the full-length mirror, he stated, “We are on beautiful looking couple, aren’t we?” Alexi laughed and turned back around, “So how do I look?” Nicolas whispers in her ear, “You are lucky I don’t rip that off of you right now!” Alexi pretends to be unbuttoning his shirt sexily “You look hot too Mr. Alpha!” Nicolas puts his arms around her waist and guides her to their car. Nicolas also had the Moon Goddess bring their son
The parents of Samantha walk in with a frown on their faces, not knowing the King had been drugged, since they left the moment Samantha placed the note on the table. Back at the hospital Nicolas is giving orders to the guards to put about six around the King: The King has the whole top floor in the pack hospital. There are Two guards placed at the main doors into the suite, Two Guards placed at the King’s bedroom door, and Two guards in his room. Nicolas puts two guards on each floor at all elevators, and two guards at the entrance to the hospital. All people coming in and out of the hospital had to be verified. Nicholas' Beta was searching for the answer to why the electronic security team didn't notify them of suspicious activity around the King. Nicolas and Alexi upon making certain the King wasn’t going to die, the two of them went to their electronic security facilities. They were following the Beta in, the three of them went into the room that was their c
When Samantha gets back to her parents' house, she makes her way up the stairs that lead to her parents' front door. The Moon Goddess already took Samantha's wolf from her, giving the wolf a happier life with another person. Samantha wrinkled her nose walking into the house. The house smelled like a wet dog. "What are you doing here, Samantha?" Her mother demanded. "If the Alpha knew you were here, he would have both our heads!" “Mother, nice to see you, too. Given that I hadn't seen you for a few months, you might think you would hug me, but no you want to know why a mother's daughter would want to see her? Would it not be because I miss you? Honestly, I'm hurt!" “What do you want from us Samantha, every time you show up you have tried to kill someone. Yet we still protect you, it makes us just as guilty as you are for your crimes. I do not want to be guilty of your crimes! Those were always your choice and your choice alone!” "What do y
Nicolas - "You know I cannot let you walk on your own." I smirk at Alexi as she attempts to run away from me. I laughed at how cute she was, and I tickled her sides while she squirms to get away from me. Alexander - "Stop it Nicolas! I am an independent woman. I can walk without you carrying me! As Nicolas tickles the crap out of me, I try to push him away. I am laughing so hard it hurts because I'm ticklish. As always, Nicolas could get me into a bridal style hold! ,"Dang it!" I laughed and hit his shoulder. Nicolas - I get Alexi into the car and buckle her into the seat. Although I know it irritates her, I want to carry her because it is my way of helping her carry the burden of the children and if I am honest with myself I love constantly being able to touch her and being able to feel the sparks and electricity when we touch. Back at King William’s castle two-days into the future. Samantha's mother said, "Y
The king is furious; he wishes his granddaughter back, and he believes a wolf pack has captured her. He is pretty sure it must be the Redwood pack. To make amends for my leniency, I will take one baby from each pack until they handed my grandchild over. In case that doesn't work, I'll burn one pack at a time. Vlad and Samantha searched in vain for their daughter in the castle, but they could not find her. They walked into Vlad's father's office undeterred. "Vlad, how can you be so worthless? Two of you could have taken Alora down." The King yells at his son. There is no response from Vlad. Whenever his father becomes angry, he does not speak. The King throws the plant through the glass window, shattering it into a million pieces. The head of King William's military had been summoned. Until they hand over my granddaughter, I want one child stolen from each pack. I want to see only ashes left of each pack if they have not returned my granddaughter in a
Upon awakening, Alexi sees her beautiful babies lying in hospital bassinets on her side. The nurses brought a makeshift cot into the room for Nicolas next to the babies.As she watched her beautiful babies, Alexi felt a mixture of happiness and sadness in her heart. King William knew how to infiltrate any pack, he understood all the vulnerabilities in our people, and she feared he would kill her babies.While she pondered her limited options for hiding her babies, a plan formed in her mind. It was Alexi's intention to appear that she and her babies had died during birth. As a result, she could take King William by surprise and hide her babies with Jeremy. A magic spell would need to be performed on Alexi to alter her appearance so she would appear like someone else.Alexi’s heart hurt thinking about all the hate King William held inside of his black heart. What kind of person kills innocents? She now feels fear for the lives of her children during a time w
Kiki - I still have memories of the babies being alive, and it completely breaks my heart to see Alexi's suffering. When Alexi faces adversity, she needs to learn to be strong. We could exchange strengths and help each other through any crisis.Kiki: "Alexi, you need to snap out of this slump, I feel your pain. We must kill King William so let vengeance motivate you.My mate Blaze is speaking with Nicolas, and he says he isn't doing any better than Alexi. Right now, I tell him, there must be vengeance in their minds, so they can survive at least 24 hours before their memories come flooding back.Kiki – “Alexi, answer me now!” normally my being bossy would make Alexi all kinds of irritated, but right now Alexi has become a zombie. I still do not get a reply other than depressive thoughts. Hence, I insist on taking over for 24 hours. Additionally, Blaze and I could use some alone time together, so I ask him to do the same for Nicolas.