The Eclipse of the Unbroken Luna 리뷰

this is a very descriptive book, each and every passage is very descriptive of their thoughts and feelings and what's going on around! it just kind of drags on. not a whole lot of talking in each chapter. read at your own whim.

Dear Readers ...️ Please don't be upset with me. I sincerely apologize for the repeated parts in my novel. I understand your frustration, and I truly appreciate everyone who has taken the time to read my story and point this out. I'm currently working on correcting the repetitions and improving the affected chapters to give you a better reading experience. ......️ Thank you for your patience, understanding, and continued support. Please bear with me a little longer. I value every one of you, and I want you to enjoy this story as much as I enjoy writing it. Thank you for not giving up on my story. I promise to do my best to make things better. Much love to you all! ...️...

This book sucks. Not only is it inconsistent like others said, multiple chapters are repeated twice throughout the book. There is no climax, there is hardly any description. One of the worst books I’ve ever read

Over 1/2 way through and there has not been a single solitary drop of character development. Kaelen and Elena get married…..like that’s it. Nothing leading up to it. Just they meet, months later, they marry. So you definitely wont fall in love with any characters here.

Chapter 3: Kaelen, in his massive white wolf form, finds Elena in his territory, brings her home. Chapter 5: Kaelen tells Elena that his border vanguard found her in the Jagged Peaks. Did you actually write this? Cause you sure as hell didn’t proofread…

Chapter 4: Elena waking up for the first time in the North, conversing with Alpha Kaelen. Fated mates, Garrick at the gates. Kaelen going to confront. Chapter 5: Elena waking up for the first time in the North, been out for 2 days. Fated mates, just Kaelen claiming her as his. WTF is going on?!?