Aedrick

Blair

I watched the estate grow larger as the cab approached. Not a house, not a mansion—an empire of stone and glass. My stomach twisted. Whoever lived here controlled more than money; they controlled worlds.

I stepped out, gripping my bag. Wind carried pine and something faintly sweet. No turning back.

The doorbell chimed deep and echoing. Stein opened the door, perfect as always—suit pressed, hair streaked with gray, expression polite and distant.

“Miss Blair,” he said. “Right on time.”

I swallowed. “Yes… of course.”

He stepped aside. The interior enveloped me: warm creams, dark wood, gold-framed paintings, soft chandeliers. Old-money elegance. I felt out of place.

Stein led the way. “Aedrick is expecting you. This way.”

Glass doors opened to a sunlit terrace: flowers hung in baskets, vines climbed the railings, a fountain burbled. My eyes locked on him.

Aedrick Mcsilver.

Dark hair messy, thick beard, sharp hazel eyes shadowed by fatigue. Handsome, but worn. And the wheelchair. Sleek, black. I hadn’t known. Pearl had forced this.

Stein announced me. Aedrick lifted his head, studying me with unreadable eyes.

“Hi… I’m Blair,” I said.

“Sit.”

No warmth. No pretense. I glanced at Stein, who nodded politely and left. Panic rose, but I crossed the terrace and lowered myself into the chair opposite Aedrick. Silence pressed down as he tapped his fingers on the table, flicking between me and his laptop.

“So why?” he asked.

“Huh?”

“Why agree to this marriage? I heard you resisted.”

“Because of my father,” I said simply.

“So you have no reasons of your own?”

“I do what I must.”

“Interesting,” he said, condescending. “No mind of your own.”

Stein appeared to wheel him toward the door.

“Where?” I asked.

“The civil bureau. To get married,” Aedrick said casually.

“Already?!”

“Do you want a grand wedding?”

“No!”

The car ride was suffocating. I sat stiffly, hands clasped, stealing glances. He hadn’t spoken, eyes fixed on the streets, fingers drumming on his thigh.

“You don’t have to marry me,” I finally blurted.

“You already agreed,” he said.

“I agreed because I had no choice.”

He turned, eyes locking on mine. “You always have a choice. You just didn’t like the alternative.”

He was right. The alternative had been my father’s life.

“So, what do you expect from this marriage?” I asked, voice tight.

He studied me a long moment. “Nothing.”

Cold. Absolute.

The civil bureau loomed ahead. I couldn’t run. I couldn’t fight. The choice was made. And Aedrick, silent and unreadable, waited to see what I would do next. There was no going back.

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My chest tightened, a cold, sharp ache gnawing at me as I sat frozen, pen hovering over the marriage contract. Tears ran silently down my cheeks, unbidden, while my body shivered as though the air itself were trying to suffocate me. I felt as though I were trapped in a dream, one where the world pressed down and left me gasping for breath.

Images assaulted me: my father lying fragile in a hospital bed, tubes snaking from his chest, monitors beeping relentlessly, hospital bills piling up like vultures circling prey. Our family business had collapsed, leaving nothing. Nothing—until Aedrick arrived. He had offered to pay for the surgery, routed through Pearl, but the price of that aid came with me, tethered to a man I barely knew.

My hands shook. Why me? Why this cost? I pictured my father’s wheezing, labored breaths. Aedrick’s money was his only hope, and I couldn’t—wouldn’t—let him die. I had barely enough to cover my own life, let alone the wedding arrangements that now seemed hollow, pointless, a cruel reminder of what I had lost: my freedom, my plans, and my happy ending.

I bit my lip absently, staring at the stark contract in front of me. Its lettering blended into a cage, the lines of ink bars that promised a life I hadn’t chosen.

“No… I can’t go through with this,” I whispered to myself.

Confusion churned in my mind, each thought dragging me back to my father’s hospital room. I had agreed to this marriage to save him, to keep him alive—but at what cost to me? The questions burned, insistent: How could I trade my freedom for his life? How could I sit here, signing my own doom while he depended entirely on the mercy of a stranger?

Aedrick sat across from me, his presence immense despite the wheelchair. He radiated quiet power, his back stiff, jaw set tight, every movement precise. His coat was immaculate, his watch gleaming—a subtle display of wealth I could never touch. He wrote his signature carefully, almost mechanically, fingers firm and unyielding. The scar on his jaw caught my eye, small and faint, a remnant of a story he had never told.

He didn’t speak. He didn’t look at me. He only existed in the room like a force, silent and unbending, his every gesture deliberate. I wondered what drove him—duty, control, or something darker entirely—but his eyes gave nothing away.

The clerk, a middle-aged woman with glasses perched precariously on her nose, turned the page and tapped a line with a chipped fingernail. “Initial here,” she said, her voice flat, as if she were guiding me to my own undoing. The office was a relic of bureaucracy: yellowed walls, dust thick in corners, faded posters curling at the edges. The table creaked under the weight of signatures past, each mark another life changed.

I couldn’t breathe. I lowered the pen, avoiding Aedrick’s eyes, and murmured, “I need… a moment.” My voice cracked as I rose, the weight of the day pressing harder with every step toward the bathroom.

Once inside, I let the tears fall freely. I cried for my father, for the life I’d lost, for the dreams that had crumbled to dust. I wished my mother were still here; her voice had always been my anchor. I clutched at her memory, letting it steel me, giving me the strength to face what I had to.

When I returned, the cold evening pressed against my skin. I clutched my coat, trying to gather courage. Outside, Aedrick’s wheelchair rested in the soft glow of a street lamp, his silhouette sharp and commanding. His hands stayed firm on the armrests, the tiniest tension coiled like a spring ready to snap. “I’ll take you to the house,” he said, low and clipped, a command disguised as a statement.

I shook my head. “I need to go home first. My things… my life… I need to collect my belongings.”

“No,” he said, the word striking like a whip. His icy gaze met mine, unyielding. “You are not permitted to return home.”

The words slammed into me. Not allowed? My mind screamed in disbelief. This must be a joke. I had been standing on the civil office steps, expecting him to laugh, to tell me he had only been testing me. But his eyes, cold and merciless, gave no sign of jest.

“You’re not allowed to go back home,” he repeated, as if reading my thoughts. Every pulse of the city—the distant shouts, car horns, and pedestrian chatter—felt alien. I wasn’t a part of it anymore. I was a pawn, suspended in a life I hadn’t chosen.

I gripped my coat so tightly my knuckles ached. “No,” I murmured, voice raw, trembling beneath the weight of my resistance. “I… I must return. My things—my books, my memories…”

Aedrick’s gaze didn’t waver. His presence anchored me, as unyielding as stone. “You are not permitted,” he said again, each word deliberate, sharp. His wheelchair was no longer a seat—it was a throne of control, a statement of authority I couldn’t challenge.

My stomach twisted. I wanted to argue and to cry, more than anything, I wanted to run—but his hazel eyes held me in place. My choices were gone. Every step, every decision, belonged to him.

I swallowed hard, blinking back tears as acceptance crept in. I had cried, trembled, wanted to escape. Now, facing Aedrick’s firm control, I saw the truth: my life had changed. I wasn’t marrying for love or desire. I was marrying to save my father. I had no choice.

I clenched my coat tighter around me, and in the chill of the night, I took a hesitant step toward him. Each step felt heavier than the last, each one carrying the weight of the future I hadn’t chosen. My heart pounded, but beneath the fear, a fragile determination flickered. I could endure this. I could survive. And I would—because I had to.

Aedrick’s wheelchair remained still, but the unspoken tension in the air was absolute. His hands rested lightly on the armrests, yet his presence alone was enough to command my compliance. I met his gaze one final time, and the icy barrier between us didn’t falter. I had no choice, yet in that choice, I felt a strange, terrible resolve forming.

I nodded silently. “Yes,” I whispered, my voice trembling. “I understand.”